Dec 31, 2002, 02:55 AM | |
Beasty concept art :)
Hey, some of you may remember me as Hare Brain or Binki Brain, or not at all. but anyways, I have some art to share
![]() http://purrhead.tripod.com/ghostblad...tyconcept.html Character art for a game I'm trying to get into production. This only shows one mood (I was drawing it a lot to get it down right). The pictures where her chest fur is shaped heart-like are my latest ones. Oh! And I suppose you'd want to know what weapon she uses. She kind of has ghost claws... I suppose I could make them kinda flamey, and don't tell me I'm copying kim possible ![]() Happy new year, jazzers! ![]() |
Dec 31, 2002, 06:48 AM | |
Thats a lot of tails!
It's very good. You have a good concept of where muscles and stuff go.
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Dec 31, 2002, 04:27 PM | ||
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I thought she was a cat...
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. <i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds. Last edited by Radium; Jan 1, 2003 at 09:21 AM. |
Jan 1, 2003, 09:36 AM | |
Did you use any perticular type of construction for the head? Whenever I try to draw heads, they look somewhat... mutated.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. <i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds. |
Jan 1, 2003, 11:58 PM | |
Like said in Noogy's, some varied expressions would be good. And in one picture, the ears are huge compared to her ears in the next picture.
With the tails, it's consistent except for one picture where there is clearly four tails, not five. Another one you have to look closely at (there is a tail hidden, but tails don't fold like paper does, so I didn't bother trying that one. Five tails)... Pretty good otherwise. Just the expression, she always looks the same to me... Keep going!
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Jan 2, 2003, 11:30 AM | |
Bah, how come Noogy's forum gets info on the game and we didn't? I would post more at Noogy's, but posting on one forum is enough for me =P.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. <i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds. |
Jan 2, 2003, 01:57 PM | |
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Because Hare gets comments that help him improve his artwork on Noogy's forum, like everyone else there.
![]() But people here don't criticise. It's always "AWESOME!!! I LUF Y00!" Or something like that. ![]()
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Jan 2, 2003, 02:06 PM | |
Here, friendly criticisim is called flaming, and you get banned for it.
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Jan 2, 2003, 02:11 PM | |
What a load of crap!
Listen, whenever I criticise someones artwork, it is not because I hate them. I do not hate you or your art. 'Nuff said.
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Jan 2, 2003, 02:56 PM | ||
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Jan 2, 2003, 03:11 PM | |
If you're an artist, and can't handle criticism, you aren't an artist.
CRITICISM IS THE WAY TO LEARN, PEOPLE! And I'm not saying don't have your fun. BOW TO US! Just help us while you're down there. ![]()
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Jan 2, 2003, 03:18 PM | ||
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For those of you that don't understand that, he means instead of talking about how great art is, point out what the person did wrong so they can improve.
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Jan 2, 2003, 03:20 PM | |
Yes, thankyou Radium.
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Jan 2, 2003, 09:46 PM | ||
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Jan 2, 2003, 11:04 PM | |
Perhaps, but you need to leave your art for a while and then come back to it, but you will still never find every little error in your own art. So you go ask other people.
The reason you have to leave your art for a while is because when you've been looking at it too much, it looks "correct". You don't notice all the errors. You'll notice more when you come back to it. Moonblaze: If you are referring to the post I made in that topic... Yes, that was a mistake. But I was simply trying to suggest that Phoenix varies the type and style of her work, not just the medium. It seems that everybody does gothic artwork, and then they say they're "different"... Yes, I do gothic artwork sometimes, but "everything in moderation."
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Jan 2, 2003, 11:39 PM | ||
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Jan 2, 2003, 11:59 PM | |
Ah, well, yeah. I get a lot of the "You sux" crap then, I guess.
Well, just because you think it's good doesn't mean there isn't something that can be corrected. I still stand by what I say about variety... Being gothic tends to be an obsession for people.
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Jan 3, 2003, 03:15 AM | |
Hey, wow, I got a lot of replys here. Let me explain some things.
1. The tails: There are five tails, sometimes I didn't know how to put them all in there without it looking cluttered. I want them to look flowing, but I don't want her to look she has a big bush growing out of her... *cough* rymes with 'ear' *cough* :P I just realized something this morning, and that is that I need to add more dimension to her tails. They can't all point in that same 2D direction (there just isn't enough room for them all to fit, while pointing in the same direction), so I'm going to make them kind of fan out... I believe this will help with the tail design problem. The reason I didn't add all five tails sometimes is because I figured that a tail can be hidden by the other tails. 2. The Purrhead Tileset: .... Oh my gosh, you guys remember that? I guess it is kind of hard to miss a whole new character running past you in a battle mode. Then there was the elevators, too. I had so much fun laughing at people's reactions with those animations ![]() ![]() 3. The game: I'm not finished with the concept document yet. I have a feeling I should mainly stay under wraps until I have a more firm foundation to work on. Once the concept document is done, I suppose I could share what it is about.... I know, I told the noogy forum, but that is a different audience. 4. Criticism: I like good criticism, it helps me grow. |
Jan 4, 2003, 06:58 AM | ||
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Jan 5, 2003, 05:15 AM | |
"It stinks because..." tends to be 'MEAN'.
We all just hate eachother at Noogy's Forum, that's why we criticize everything. ![]()
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Jan 5, 2003, 07:59 AM | ||
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Jan 5, 2003, 08:43 AM | ||
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