Unhit, you can't leave ME out of a Star Wars story!
Check the 'Everyone's Characters' for my profile

Originally posted by defalcon
Satar Wars

Umm.... you might want to spell that "star".

I erm...did....afterwards.

ME! ME! ME! COOOOOOOOME ON! CHOOSE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok, here I am.

Name: Captain Skan Nivax....er...just Captain White (his first name is unknown for unknown purposes and the only person who does know his unknown name is another unknown person with a weird unknown name )

Personality: HEROIC!! Nah, just kidding. He's friendly and is a good leader. Although he's nice to ppl, he can be quite harsh if someone fails or does a mistake. Oh, and he trusts ppl too easily (just like me ).

Appearance: Er... White fur. White blaster. White ears. White hair. And also, he wears a red backpack when he wants to "toughen up" he wears a red cap.

Skills: Cpt White isn't a Jedi knight so he doesn't know how to use a lightsaber or the force (hah! spelled it with a small f ). He is great with the blaster though and he also knows lots of battle tactics. Oh, and he's a decent pilot too.

Weapons: Two white blasters. They both fire twin red laser bolts. A whip. A utility belt (it's black, not a kind of gold Batman belt)

And um...
this is all.

P.S.
ME! ME! ME! COOOOOOOOME ON! CHOOSE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

On another note, if you don't shorten your sig, it will make reading this topic very unpleasant.

Originally posted by defalcon
Unhit, you can't leave ME out of a Star Wars story!
Check the 'Everyone's Characters' for my profile

I already wondered when you'd finally post here, my Padawan.

Ok. I'll start writing the story on Saturday, and it will just handle what had happened if Palpatine never became Lord Chancellor. It will be separated into six Episodes. Probably .

Cool!

Que Passa!!!!

ME CAN'T WAIT FOR STORY TO START!!!!

"Why are you all the same as eachother."
"Well, you are the same as yourself, right?"
"This is true..."
"Well then?"
"...But unhelpfull!"
"We're CLONES!"
"Ah- Clones... I've heard of that; you mean there was origionally one of you, then exact copies were made, and now there are THREE of you!"
"Yes- except that there are over seventy eight thousand million of us."
"What?!?!"
"It's ok, the others aren't here at the moment... Can we get on with the work?"
"....... Thats rather a lot, isn't it?"
-Conversation
Hitchhikers Guide to the Galixy- radio program.

Originally posted by Another Jazz 2 fan Umm.... you might want to spell that "star".

I personally opt for "Satire Wars".

@ Batty Buddy and Unknown.

Btw, I've *hand-written* Episode I. I won't tell you what happens . You will see it on this board this Saturday.

Yeah yeah yeeaaaaaaaahhh!!!

Remember my char!
I'm a Jedi strong enough to fight without weapons and a silent attitude!!!!!!!!
(Didn't I mention it before?
Well,oops! )

You will be the tragic hero . I already know something.....

I am finding it hard to wait until the weekend for the story...

(BTW, wasn't that pathetic hero?)

HEY!!!!!!

Umm... just restating what he said... that's... all...







really....

I want to join, gah. Read my char at 4I Falcons thread.

For all of you that would like to know when etc. the story plays, here's some info.
I btw changed some character info. Tell me if it's not ok ;P!

Pre-Story

The story's first part acts about 4 years after the original story of Episode I. Darth Maul never appeared until that moment, and Valorum is still chancellor in the Galactic Senate. Additionally, Amidala's second periode of reign just started.
Anakin became Padawan of Jedi-Master Obi-Wan Kenobi.
Four years ago, they found Anakin on a travel from Naboo. Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon were sent to get Queen Amidala because she wanted to visit Coruscant and the Senate. The Naboo just had made peace with the Gungans, and so she wanted to make a query if they will also get votes etc.
On the travel to Coruscant, they were not shot or something else, they just had a problem with their engine & the shield generator. So they land on Tatooine, where they meet Anakin etc.

Now, four years later. Padmé is Queen, Valorum Chancellor, everything allright. But the Jedi Council knows that something evil is growing up. Additionally, there are lots of enemies of the Galactic Republic in the Galactic Senate. Together, they form the Confederation, with their most important members which are the Trade Federation, the Intergalactic Bank Clan and the Technology Union. The Confederation has Lord Tyranus, the former Jedi Count Dooku, as their leader. They have huge armies on Geonosis and Neimodia and are already planning to attack the Republic on several planets, for example at Sarapine, where the Republic gets most of its electric energy from. But there is no war yet, and the "good" side of the Senate doesn't know about the Confederation's armies.
Also, they have a lot of Sith addicts. Lord Sidious and Lord Tyranus train a lot for to defeat Yoda and his Masters/Knights/Padawans.
But they also don't know about the clone army. Obi-Wan occassionally came to Kamino, after his friend Dex told him about this planet in a long night. As he did not find it in the Jedi archives and knew they were cloners, he asked the Jedi Council to go there and visit it.
When he told the Jedi Council what was going there, they were shocked, but they told him not to tell anyone what was going on. They knew of the dark danger hiding somewhere, and they thought they could need an army to defeat them. But they feared that if the Senate would know about this, even more star system would leave the Republic because of the preparation of a war. They did not even tell Valorum about this.

The situation is confusing now. Padmé is again on a travel to Coruscant, not guarded by anyone but a few Naboo Star Fighters.
She also feels something dark is going on and knows Obi-Wan is hiding something to her.
This is were my Episode I starts: when Padmé just starts her trip vom Naboo to Coruscant.



Actors


The Jedi Council
The Galactic Senate
The Confederation's leaders
Naboo's Royal Guard
and lots of other people


THE GOOD

Padmé Amidala
Queen of Naboo
Me (Unhit)

Obi-Wan Kenobi
Jedi Knight
Me (Unhit)

Sca-Re Sarie
Member of the Senate Guard.
Skulg

R2-D2
Repairing droid
Enigma

C-3PO
Protocol Droid
Batty Buddy

Bian Wikte
Former Jedi
Piccolo

Anotho
Bounty Hunter. Payed from the Jedi Council, that's why he's a nice guy here ;P.
AJ2F

Anakin Skywalker
Jedi Padawan
Defalcon

Captain Skan Nivax
Captain in the Queen's Royal Guard.
White Rabbit

Bren Pain
Soldier in the Queen's Royal Guard.
Flash


THE EVIL

Moon Raizor
Sith Addict
Moonblaze

Say Jan
Evil alien .
Super Saiyan

Ben Gerret
Sith Knight
Green Beret

Jango Fett
Bounty Hunter
Flint LP

?
Brothal Sith Knight
Unknown Rabbit

Virge
Powerful Sith Lord
Ducky

Darth Maul
Sith Knight
SoulFire


Hope I did not forget anyone. And sorry for the chaos ;P! And as you see, I changed some names to the "original" ones. So Enigma became R2-D2. Only those who really are "new" got new names too.

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I didn't want my name to be Skan Nivax! I CLEARLY said Captain White.

But oh well, Captain Nivax is great too.
And yer story is greater! ;P

Bian Wikte,huh?

Glad you looked at my personalitie.
But how for heavens sake do you pronounce it?????

Well, so far you've only rewrote episode one and two
I can't wait for the real story to begiiin!

And mah name wasnt Darth Maul, everybody has got cool names except me.... ah never mind, I like it this way.. just write yer story!

Well, you certainly did take a creative license with people's characters, but that's fine with me. Can't wait to see what you do with them!

Originally posted by Unhit
Ba-T Bu-D
Protocol Droid
Batty Buddy

Ba-T Bu-D
Protocol Droid
Me (Unhit)

Originally posted by SoulFirE
Well, so far you've only rewrote episode one and two
I can't wait for the real story to begiiin!

I did not . DM never appeared, no invasion at Naboo etc...
But the story of Episode I was important for to "discover" Anakin.


Oops, thanks for the hint, Unknown. I fixed.

Heey! Add meee! *looks cute* Padmé? *tilts her head*

`Wildie (geeze, it's been a very long time since I've posted here)

OK. Fine.
*thinks if he should play Anakin now*

Well, Defalcon, my Padawan. Praise this day n.n!

I'm Anakin, woohoo!

Count me in!

Too late I'd say!