Felt like posting this before i went off to bed

have fun reading it.. and more will come tommorow.



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A man walked down the streets, carying a backpack and wearing a pair of sunshades to protect his eyes from the hot sun.

He wore a hat, and licked his lips clean from a red liquor, the man stepped into 'The Carrot Inn' and orderd a CarrotWodka. He sat down at the bar, his name was Rumbo Rabbit, let's say...he likes to travel, he has seen many things.

Time showed and teached him allot.. also about the future, and if he wasnt going to warn Louie, Jazz, Kove and Cobra about what was going to happend in his future, he knew what would happend to the world within a few days.

Rumbo: "Bartender, do you happen to remember three guys and a girl checkin in here?"

The bartender scratched his head. "Oh them.. dont tell them i told you this.. but they looked like they werent from this planet, the girl was wearing clothes..all black, and her make-up to, they have room 3, its up the stairs and then to the left, cant miss it sir". Rumbo greeted the bartender and climbed the stairs to reach room 3, he knocked on the door within moments Kove opened the door.

Kove: "Roomservice or something?" He chouted. "ANYONE ORDERD A PIZZA?". The man introduced himself as Rumbo Rabbit, vampire and allie.

Jelze and Louie drew their guns and aimed it at Rumbo.

Jelze: "Sit down and tell us who you really are".

Rumbo: "Rumbo Rabbit, protector of time.. i saw the future, and i did not like what i see, i came here to warn you about an attack that the followers of Kain are planning on you. They will shoot you by surprise, and when you will least expect it, but im here to prevent that".

Cobra: "And how can we trust you?".

Rumbo: "Just wait and see, and Louie will be in for quiet a surprise, lets say..he meets an old relative".

Kove: "When is this attack".

Rumbo dived for the floor and shouted: "GET DOWN!"

They all dived in the floor and bullets of very sharp wood where pierced trough the thin walls. Jonathan and his gang of vampires walked over the dark corridor and laughed when he saw the holes in the wall.

He kicked the door open and was in for quiet a surprise when he saw that everyone had survived the attack.

Jonathan: "Rumbo..you".

Rumbo pulled a gun out of his gunbelt that he had kept hidden under his shirt.

"Surprise Jonathan". Rumbo fired at Jonathan who dodged the bullets and took his own gun. Louie showed a sign of recognization..but his hate for Jonathan overgrew his mercy. He to took his gun and aimed for Jonathan who fled onto the corridor.

Jelze and Louie ran after him, while Kove, Cobra and Rumbo ran the other way to catch the vampires that had shot at them.

....Nice!!!!!!!!!!



But seriously, Rumbo is that cool. Just wait and see how cool he becomes in 'Renegade,' you're gonna love me even more then

Can I join? (new profile)

Name: Grath

Weapons: My hands(karate) and a Automatic .65 mm gun (w/wooden bullets @ infinity)

Species: Vamp. rabbit (louie's side)

Clothing: A long black cape and a helmet

My guns ammo: Wooden bullets & Plasma Bullets

Moooorrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee



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More of the story coming tonight, to y(our) MB

Cobra ran up front trying to catch up with the group of vampires,

it where only four of them, but still, it where Jonathans man, living to see Louie and his friends suffer.

A voice shouted from out the darkness. "Your vampires, so why dont you act like vampires and join us".

Rumbo pointed his gun in the direction the sound was coming from.

Vampire: "I wouldnt do that if i were you".

He stepped out of the darkness and hold a girl in his hands.

Vampire: "You make the decision, shoot me and she will die".

Kove pushed Rumbo's gun down and threw his in the direction of the vampire.

Vampire: "Very smart move young man".

Kove now slowly walked towards the vampire.

Cobra: "Oh no.. Kove, KOVE what are you doing, he might bite her".

The vampire was speechless to see Kove doing this, and the other vamps already bared their teeth. "Prepare to battle guys, there's more then four of these guys".

Kove dived for his gun and shot trough the girls heart, the bullet went straight trough her body and also trough the vampires body who was right behind her.

Cobra: "How did you know Kove"?

Kove: "If she really was beeing kept as a hostage, she'd be screaming the ears off of our heads wouldnt she". But there was no time to talk, a vampire stormed in Kove direction but was quickly slowed down by Rumbo's gun.

Cobra saw two female vampires running of the stairs trying to escape but she jumped after them and pointed her gun in their direction.

But the female vampire was quicker then she thought and kicked the gun out of her hands and growled at her, the other girl hit Cobra hard in the face with her sharp claw. Little streams of blood found their way down Cobra's cheek.

Cobra: "I'll get you back for that girl".

Cobra jumped up and kicked the left girl in the face. She came down to the ground and dodged an attack of the other girl, and then she jumped at her gun, but they both took her by the legs and pulled her back.

When the girls wanted to bite her in her neck she quickly kicked up at them both letting them fall back. Now she took her gun and fired at one of the vampire-rabbits. The other one dodged the shot that Cobra fired at her.

Vampire-Rabbit: "You wont get me". She turned around and wanted to jump trough the window but Cobra send a bullet flying trough her heart and she dissapeard right before she could hit the glass.

Kove and Rumbo had a few problems of their own, but they could manage.



Louie and Jelze were running after Jonathan.

Suddenly he stopped, bursting out in laughter. "Sorry guys, ill have to leave you, but im not totally heart-less, here's a present".

He lifted his hand in the sky and shadow tentacles came from everywhere moving towards Louie and Jelze.

Louie: "Time to get out of here".

The tentacles got bigger and moved over the walls, crawled over the floor to catch up with Louie and Jelze but they where to fast.

Jelze shot at the tentacles but it had no effect, they were nothing against these shadows. "Why are we running away from these shadows actually"?

Jelze: "Theyre called Tentacles of the abyss, when they get you, they rip you apart, there are many things that vampires can do and that you dont yet know off, god knows how powerfull you might turn out to be".

Jelze and Louie dived out of the building and the tentacles left them alone.

Louie: "How come that they are gone now"?

Jelze: "Its because of Jonathan not having enough power to keep them moving any longer, and he must be getting away".

"Damn". Was Louie's response, while the other came out of the building to.

Rumbo: "Guess thats it for them".

Louie: "He wont stop till he drank every drop of blood out of me.. So i guess that means... he'll never stop".

Niceish, Slay, the story is definetly getting creepy, I like creepy

Mwaha, more.

Cobra: "Look what i found Louie, she claims to be your cousin".

His mouth fell open with amazment, his cousin Ducky who had left the village a long time ago, she saw Louie and her face cheered up, she jumped out off Cobra's arms and threw her arms around him. "Cousin, i missed you", she said with a laugh and a tear in her voice.

Louie said nothing and just looked at her. "You became a pretty young Lady".

She giggled and that showed the huge fangs in the corners of her mouth that she tried to hide before. "Oh god, theyve made you one of theirs to".

Ducky turned around and looked at the floor, ashamed of herself.

But Louie walked to her and lay an arm on her shoulder. "I know how you feel cus, i got digged up by these two gentleman and i wished they threw me back in..".

Ducky put his arm around his middle and said: "Im glad you changed you mind cousin, i dont really have anyone left that cares about me".

Louie walked Ducky over to his other friends and told her. "These are all your friends now".

Rumbo looked out in the darkness: "Lets hope that everyting will work out for us, i have time on my hands..but still, it could get really dangerous. He kissed his gun and put it away in his trenchcoat as he turned around and followed the others into the deep and dark night.



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Back on Diamondus near the foot of the ice mountian where he who was 'the four corners of the universe'(see the previous parts) was burried a few vampires sat down and prayed, it sound like a deep and dark humming.

A tall rabbit stood in front of them, and in front of the mountian, yelling and screaming to the sky while lightning was striking down in the mountian.

Tall rabbit: "HERE I COMMAND YOU, GIVE ME BACK WHATS RIGHTFULLY MINE AND LET ME CREEP AND CRAWL TROUGHOUT THE CORNERS OF MY UNIVERSE".

His eyes lightned up and a bolt of lightning almost crushed his body against the icey mountian, A loud piercing sound was heard and the mountian seemed to split open, 'the four corners of the universe' fell out and landed in front of the vampires feet. He lay his hand on the monsters head and spoke a few dark and unknown words, a white flash came out of 'the four corners of the universe'.

He now yelled some strange words and absorbed the white light that was casted out by 'the four corners'. He fell down and shivered.

Another vampire run to him, placing a hand on his head: "Master Kain, master Kain, what's happening"? Kain opened his eyes again and her hand was instantly fried and her arm slowly burned away, followed by the rest of her body that burned inside out.

A few vampires had a terrified look in there eyes.

Kain: "You, your afraid? I cant use any of you cowards". Them waited the same punishment, only the strongest remained.

Kain: "I CHALLENGE YOU CARROTUS".



His scream was heard in Louie's head. Kain, stronger then ever and after the blood of he that he is supposed to protect.

Louie: "Kain, we must stop him at once".

He turned around and walked away. Rumbo immidiatly ran after him trying to stop him, but he was gone.. nowhere to be seen.

What else can I say but. . . continue

Oh yay, nifty, Slay!!

Poor me..carry on, then!

`Ducky

Niftular, brilliant, and other adjectives,

slay, continue

Wot he said.

test

Okay. C'mon, post MORE!

Cobra shouted out his name and Kove ran over to the place where he last saw him. "LOUIE!!!" He shouted, but there was no response.



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Louie woke up million of miles away from civilization, he seemed to be in what looked like a sealed maze, thick fog surrounded him and howling and cry's of pain could be heard troughout the maze.

He got up and walked not able to see trough well in the fog, he hold a hand in front of him, to make sure he didnt bump into anything.

Louie hear silent breathing, something he wasnt able to do anymore.. since vampires dont breath, but how could there be anyone alive in here, and where was this person?

"Hey mister". A voice said not beeing to far away from him. He stopped and looked around, but the fog was like a wall that blocked his vision.

All he could do was trust on his hearing.

"Pssst, over here". It was the voice of a young girl, what was she doing here? The screaming, the terror.. it all sounded like hell, but he didnt expect ****to be such a foggy place. Louie walked a bit to the left, still holding his hand up, but he dropped it a little, because the bigger part of his concentration was at the voice,

he tried to locate where its origin was, but this was very hard.

His hands dropped to the sides of his body and by this he did not notice the low dooropening, his head bumped against the stone wall and he fell back.

"Oops, im sorry mister, this wasnt my intention, are you ok"?

A young female rabbit came close to Louie, the fog didnt seem to bother her and she looked at him to see if he had been hurt bad.

Young rabbit: "My, arent we good looking". She said with a grin, after she looked around her lips moved to his and suddenly Louie's hand shot out and closed around her wrist.

"Now your gonna tell me exactly who you are and what you want from me".

"Err, im Coppertop dude, dont hurt me, i have no money on me i swear, and i dont want anything from you, i just havent seen anybody in a while".

Louie: "Whats this place"?

Coppertop: "Errr.. its like a maze man". Coppertop said shaking her head with a grin. She looked at him as if he werent to bright.

Louie looked at her pulling a face like a thunderstorm, Coppertops faced changed right away. "People.. ghosts come her after their dead, i think its some kind off hell.. or.. something, sometimes when i try to go to sleep, it feels like everything is breathing".

Louie's eyes grew bigger. "Then i know where we are.. this is her mind, we are inside the darknesses mind".

Coppertop: "You didnt sleep to well did you"?

Louie looked around and pushed against the walls, a scream could hear troughout the whole universe, Carrotus shivered. And Rumbo knew where Louie was, and he knew he was alright.

Rumbo: "Louie.. it is him, he is the Slayer, the one that was send here by Carrotus, to be his protector, and the protector of his home".

A silence fell amongst the rabbits the stood near rumbo.. as the fear the was carried by the other rabbits grew.

Kain sat on his torned trone, wearing the crown of blood looking down on his servants, all of his servants.

Kain: "My mother.. she is beeing hurt, if i get my hands on him, i will crush him like an insect, soon she will be free". His eyes glew.. the anger in his voice grew.

The people gathered in the streets in front of there houses, what seemed like lightning where the tears of darkness. Louie hit a hole in the wall.. a gap opened and a ray of light was shot trough the universe.

creating something..something yet unknown that fell down to Carrotus and landed somewhere in a forest.. on the east side of the planet.

Jelze: "Looks like we are going to travel".

Ducky send a kiss to the sky. "Goodbye cousin.. thanks for giving us the sign, you will be missed".

Cobra cryed and crawled in a corner, Kove could feel what she was going trough in the few days he knew Louie, he had grown close to him.

A cry could be heard..it went trough the universe..Louie's.

The night just got a little darker, as Kain, who had also seen the yet unidentified object, and went on his way to search for it.

Louie: "Coppertop, you want to get out of here"?

Coppertop looked at him, with a scared look in her eyes, she could almost guess what was coming. "Yeah i want to".

Louie put an arm around her waist and walked towards the hole he had created.

Louie: "I hope we'll make this alive.. if not, we have tried".

Coppertop: "Oh dear god, you have lost your mind".

Louie: "No..only my life". He jumped out off the hole and they both fell down, at an incredible speed, the wind rushed trough theyre furs.

They got closer and closer to the planet as they fell, but Louie had forgotten one thing, he didnt need any air.. but coppertop was still partially alive.

He looked at the girl as she was gasping for breath.. it would take another 35 seconds before she could breath again.

Louie: "Oh god, what did i do... hold on Coppertop".

Her eyes closed and Louie hold her closer against him ... 30 seconds...

Mega-spiffy Slay

SLAYER!

YOUR A MOD!

WHAT HAPPENED!!!!

WHAT DID YOU DO!!!

I MUST KNOW YOUR SECRET!!!!!!

I just asked

Can i be in slayiiie? ... I wanna be a meenieee.... ^-^ *likes meenies*

Ooh, wonderful Slayie

Very brilliant..*sigh*

`Ducky

....

Ok then...Well what else?

i behaved.

And thnx gummybear, i need a bad guy/girl

aw.. i furgot... relly great story slayie! *huggles* ^-^

oh btw...... need a profile or sumthin for my bad character?

Finally! You put me in! Mwahahaha!



Thanx, Slayie. . .

Yeah a profile would come in handy.. tyf?

....What the *happy, happy, joy, joy* man?

What happened?

So your no longer with 'us'?

Oh well...

Thats fine by me

I gave up on that mod crap some time ago, they'd never put me there







Indeed blizz, ive changed, there are little childeren in here to, be an example and watch the language

Language, Blizzy :P

You want my job?

*Eeyoreness*

`Ducky

okeh.... well herez muh baddie profile.. heh heh



Name:



Age: Doesn't look too old, neither young. Must be around 17-18-19



Looks; Dark-blood red hair falls down on her shoulders, her left eye is navy blue and the right one is black. Her fur is black with some red into it. Her long black ears are pierced by three silver rings in each, all the rings has weird symbols on it (the meaning is a too long story haha... so just invent one urself if you feel like ). She has a (yeh know... like in diablo!! lol..) star with a circle around it engraved into the skin of her shoulder, half-hidden by her fur.



Personnality; She's quiet, calm and lonely. She has a lot of mood swings and can be very dangerous. If she smiles at you, you better run. Though she also can be nice when she wants to...



Equipment; She always carries an UZI (or just a gun) with some bullets. She can fight with anything she finds, except ninja stuff and staffs, wich she cant take and makes her mad n confused..



Home: None... Or you choose where she lives



Family; None. Her parents were killed when she was young and she was sent in an orphanage. She was too wild, they kicked her out and she learned to live by herself, by stealing and fighting.



Magic: None... She is skilled in healing living stuff though. noone knows if its magic or not.





well.. tell me if its alright hehe.. icq me if theres missin stuff slayie ( i might edit it.. if i change of idea or i furgot sumthin hehe)

ok... it wont let me edit my own post!! heh



Name is; Gen or Genny (pronounce Jen / Jenny)

*heh*I do....you don't know me in real life...so you don't know how much I censor myself on here...

Too bad...but someone has to be evil...and I'd rather be good...but Jazz2 pointed it out to me that im suppsose to be the villian

Why would anyone here do something stupid like that?

Why would the ever cut me some slack(and slay, *censored, censored, censored*

heh, you saved me the trouble...whats wrong, you don't want them to know?



Its your own fault there...you SHOULD help her out...but whatever.

This is none of my business

Cool story Slaya/Patriot



Making the worlds sort of 'mixed' was a good choice.

Just a small part to add some people to the 'Slayer-Story universe'





King Jazz looked out his window, glaring over the forests of the planet he was now king off. He dedicated his life to protecting this planet and its rabbits, and worshipping and spreading the word of the god of light.

He wasnt the kind of king that sat on his trone all day, listening to boring bards, neither the one that gave party's for all kinds of reasons.

Jazz Jackrabbit was the brave and adventurous kind of king, the one that liked to go out, taking on the people that worshipped the dark god.

He sighed. "I know that something is going on, i wish my scout would return and tell me about it, hope she's still alive". He said with a worried voice.

Someone knocked on his door. "Hmm? Come in".

The door openend and a muscular blue furred rabbit stepped inside.

"Welcome Jones." Jazz said to his good friend and brother in law.

"What brings you here? " Jazz asked still looking outside.

Doc didnt know where to start: "The followers of the dark god have been quiet active lately, but there are forces fighting them.. putting them to a stop".

"Well thats good then isnt it". Jazz said.

Doc shook his head. "Kain... he has took the powers of the monster that was burried in the ice off Diamondus, he has enough power to destroy us all".

Jazz jumped up. "Thats impossible.. where is he AND WHY DIDNT ANYBODY TELL ME THIS EARLYER"?

Jazz stormed trough the doors into the kings hall, where his trone was and his sister Lori was doing her mothers hair, while a band played some relaxing music on the background. "STOP THE MUSIC." Jazz shouted.

The music died out and Jazz walked trough the kings hall as if he was looking for something. "Honey, what is the matter"? Eva asked him, she was worried about her husband storming trough the king's hall like this, she knew Jazz could do stupid things when he was mad.

Jazz mumbled a little before he replyed. "Jones just told me that Kain has absorbed the powers of that monster in the diamondus ice mountian, i gotta go find him". The comb slipped out of Lori's fingers. "Jonesie.. " She said, with fear in her voice. "Your not gonna go out there by yourself are you?"

Dr. Jones took Lori in his arms and comforted her. "Its okay, i've seen allot of things happen, and i always managed to get out of it, there are lots of good people, who are ready to help me".

"Promise you'll come back to me". Lori pleaded and she grabbed his hand.

"I promise". Dr. Jones said and he kissed her hand and then rubbed it over his furry cheek.

Dr. Jones and Jazz walked trough the door, Jazz was carrying a crossbow with wooden arrows and dr jones carried a blade carved out off wood with a sharp end.

"Lets kick some vampire-back".

Nice Slay

anyone interested in whats going to happend next?

Yes

YES!!!!!!!!!!!