Most ppl like blowing things up

CONTINUE TEH STORIE!!!!!!!!!!!

Page claim in the name of the Legions of Grath's Story that Doesn't Have a Name Yet.

wow...
'kay. No more final chapter (Basically, it would've been 'it was all a video game' the end.)
Now... TO CONTINUE!
Storyname: The conquest of devan, PART 2
(If I feel like it, I'm gonna make a prequel. Warning: Prequel will be pretty much the badguys winning, so be warned)
For now, be happy with this artwork of my character, as he is in my story. Also, artwork of Forte:
www.crynwr.com/jazz/GrathArt.png
www.crynwr.com/jazz/ForteArt.png
Images digitally retouched with:
The gimp (For Forte)
and Paint (For Grath)
Oh yeah, and for those who can't see .png: I LAUGH AT JOO, FOO!
Edit #2: 4I, I need input: How is skyrider an idiot around women? Like, blush and become partially non-functional, or just stupid things. (Like, a woman's obviously attracted to him, but he says 'Hold on, I've got an appointment with someone else')

Originally Posted by Grath

Edit #2: 4I, I need input: How is skyrider an idiot around women? Like, blush and become partially non-functional, or just stupid things. (Like, a woman's obviously attracted to him, but he says 'Hold on, I've got an appointment with someone else')

The first one. Except he becomes almost completely non-functional whenever a female shows any sort of feelings towards him.

Chapter 3

As the team headed back to the airships, they noticed that Schypher looked a bit funny, as though there were some stains on his back. These corresponded to the bones, and Grath noticed it especially.
'Schypher, did your internal computer notice any new abilities?' asked Grath.
'Yes, I noticed something funny.' said Schypher. As they walked, a survivor crawled towards them. Schypher said 'I think I'll try my new ability.' Schypher ran to the survivor, and plunged his hand into the survivor's back, though no hole existed. schypher pulled out his hand, holding something black, which seemed to seep into his hand. No mark was left on the victim, the only thing stopping his life, was that he was, well, DEAD!
As they got back to the field, the small army rejoiced at seeing the heroes come back. Grath pointed at three robo-rabbits and one squirrel, then motioned for them to come to the group. These robo-rabbits/squirrel were named: Blacksheep, Tiger Reibeck, 'Gasp', and Acid.
'I think these people shall be excellent additions to the group.' said Grath. Acid, an inventor, pulled out a coffee maker, and said 'Anyone want some coffee?' Unfortuanatly for Acid, Blacksheep poked the coffeemaker, and it exploded in acid's face. 'He's always coming up with some new way to blow things up' said Blacksheep.
The team boarded one airship, and the army people headed onto the other three. As they flew back, Grath at the controls, the group was greeting the new people. Unfortuanatly for him, Skyrider got stuck with greeting Blacksheep.
Skyrider and Blacksheep walked around a bit, Skyrider fortuanatly not acting stupid... yet...
Then they found the holo-training machine, and started doing a bit of training. Skyrider immediatly went for the groups of turtles that appeared, causing miniature tornados around them, then picking them off by teleporting behind one, then kicking him out into the tornado, to slam against the roof. Blacksheep pulled out her Raspberry Jello Gun (© & ™ Blacksheepie) and picking off turtles, shooting them in the head, trapping their head in a block of jello.

Blacksheep noticed how good Skyrider was, and once they finished that training excercise, she said 'You're pretty good at this.' Skyrider turned away and blushed, and Blacksheep noticed this, and went over to hinm. 'Is something wrong?' she asked. At this, Skyrider fainted, and Blacksheep caught him. Blacksheep carried him up to the deck, and asked Grath 'Is something was wrong with Skyrider? He fainted after their training.'

*laughs evilly*
I figured I'd make Blacksheep fall in love with Skyrider (Both are Air-type magic users, and otherwise I'd have to have Sherry be the love interest for him. Given he's an idiot around women, I figured I had to make someone fall in love with him.)

Originally Posted by Grath

Grath pointed at three robo-rabbits and one squirrel, then motioned for them to come to the group. These robo-rabbits/squirrel were named: Blacksheep, Tiger Reibeck, 'Gasp', and Acid.

Acid isn't a robot. He is a 100% organic rabbit. Nyar.

*can't wait to see what'll happen when Grath sticks him in a battle*

Heh, I just imagined Acid in the training simulator...

"Nyarharhar!"
BOOM
"Whatahuh?!?"
"Darn it, Acid, you blew up the simulator again!"

Acid: Roborabbit means in the story now, organic rabbit means in a few chapters in.
Roborabbit ~= rabbits, just better at fighting, stronger, higher endurance, and sometimes even smarter.

¬_¬

I dun care. I am an organic rabbit.

You do realise, that no matter how hard you fight with me, I'm still going to be as persistant as a 3-year-old.

I know how much i asked for people to allow me to join the fanfics,but this one,mabye or is the last one,my element will be "Wildcard" Grath said that i could be like that

Fine. Acid's a test, which fortuanatly resulted in a live, organic, rabbit, not a robo-rabbit.

Yay^_^

Good for you,>_>,<_< (just hope Foo isn't here..)

Just got here. Good job with Skyrider passing out and such.

What element would Foo be, anyway?

Foo?

um

Wood, probably/possibly

YaY! My name was mentioned!
*hugs Grath*

Is a chapter gonna come soon?

I am no longer taking applicants to the story, unless they are willing to:
die, and be evil.
NEW CHAPTER! AT LAST!

Chapter 4

Tiger Reibeck, a silver furred rabbit, with black stripes, brought Skyrider to the infirmary-place, and put him into a machine. a green glass tube came up, swallowing up Skyrider, so that he floated inside, in stasis. Tiger started the scan, and then left to train some.

An excerpt from Skyrider's journal:

3/6/19XX (Writing is smeared, and is unreadable)
I woke up in a tube thing after the training. I managed to attract the attention of a passing worker, and he let me out.
Right now the airship is nearing a large forest with patches of field. these patches together form a wiggly X in the forest, only viewable at about 500 feet up in the air. At this time, Ninja is piloting. He is carefully flying down into the very center of the X. As I speak, we should be landing. (After this, the writing's rough, and not very good) I wonder what happened to me during training? I have no bruises. I must stop now, as I am wanted on deck.

The reason why Skyrider was wanted on deck, was because some hedgehog/human thing just went hurtling down from space, wearing huge mechanical boots, and crashlanded near them. Since they didn't want to reveal the lab's place, they decided to teleport in. Grath took the controls, and pressed the green button labeled 'Do not touch', and the ship started hurtling along at speeds of over 300 miles per hour. Grath then turned all power to the engines, speeding the ship up to insane speeds until suddenly the landscape became just swirling colors. After ten minutes, a loud, sharp, 'Crack' was heard, and the swirly colors dissapeared, and the ship was in a large metal room. People unstrapped themselves from the seats, and shakily got out. At this time, the hedgehog/human creature came out, suprisingly, of the lower decks.
Grath says 'A stowaway? Acid. Him. Fire.' And Acid went off to a portion of the lab with ultra-strong walls for sparring (It would take quite a few atom bombs to CRACK the wall. Unfortuanatly, this material is unmoldable, as it would take a constant stream of atom bombs to forge it.), locked him in, and then set off his Atom-bomb strength fire in the room. The hedgehog somehow didn't get scratched even, and burst through the door. Then, a black swirl appeared out of the air. A dark figure, human, with brown hair, did some kind of spell, and banished the cheater, then disspearing.
Grath took everybody to the main hall, where Sherry was waiting. 'May I suggest we all train a bit? Afterwards, it's time to head toward Devan's base!'
'What training do you want?' asked Grath. The answers were:
Sherry said 'Magic training!',
Ninja said 'Target practice!',
Blacksheep said 'Target practice' aswell,
Skyrider chose 'Unarmed combat',
Tiger Reibeck chose not to train,
Gasp, and Acid, chose 'All around training'.
Grath set up the machines for each person.
Sherry was forced to watch turtles 'killing' some simulated animals, which REALLY got her angry.
Sherry's eyes started to glow blue, her hair blew as if in high wind, and the cross necklace started floating. Then, she made a throwing motion at the turtles, and immediatly a large wave shot away from her, smashing the turtles against the wall, breaking the backs and shattering their shells. Then, Sherry's rage-based power faded away. She was amazed at the wreckage she had managed to cause. Grath's voice came to her: Focus your face. Think of the innocents killed by the turtles. Concentrate the anger, then release it in full! That's the secret to magic! CONCENTRATE YOUR ANGER. Again, she saw some turtles. This time, she needed no extra pushing, and slammed her hand to the ground, then, as if a river flowing up from underground, water blasted out at insane force, slamming the entire group into the ceiling. Sherry's rage had unlocked to her the secret of magic.
Ninja and Blacksheep started target practice. Ninja was pegging bullseyes right away with ninja stars, then Blacksheep would shoot out the entire center hole cleanly with one shot. They obviously needed no training.
Skyrider was kicking and punching, killing on first hit. He too needed no training.
Spaztic, A.k.A Gasp, and Acid, were also not needing much training.
Everyone but Spaztic/Acid came out, then they heard maniacal laughter from Acid, unconsious (Conciousness being the part training) and Grath yelled 'HIT THE DECK!' and they all dived down. Then, Acid blew up his training simulator. 'Huhwha?' said acid as he woke up in the smoking wreckage. Spaztic saw acid's smoking 'corpse' hit the ground after he blew up the bomb, and quickly got out to see how Acid was doing. Fortuanatly, Acid was fine, just a bit burnt. Acid said 'Anyone up for some coffee?' and everyone laughed, recalling the episode with Acid's exploding coffee maker before.

Then, Grath headed towards the hangar bay, with the rest following after him.
As they reached the hangar bay, he stopped... 'Wait, Didn't devan look a bit... strange?' said Grath. 'Yes, he did.' said Ninja. Grath brought up an image of the old devan on the computer, and then said 'Oh. My. God. He's got IT. Quick! we must head to tubeelectric!' They all went into the hangar bay, and headed towards the battleship. 'Okay. Ninja, Tiger, Acid, and Blacksheep, you man the guns. Sherry, you keep an eye on the radar for enemies. Skyrider, you get co-pilot. Gasp, you prepare the sub-ships.' said Grath. They all went to their positions. Gasp returned to the cockpit after preparing the fighter ships. 'Okay. Let's go!' said Grath, and took off. (The battleship looks like a cross between the millenium falcon and a X-wing, FYI.) They headed for Tubeelectric, finding a few un-manned fighters, not much trouble since the CMP beam(Concentrated EMP.) shot them out of the sky with ease, then zapped with machinegun turrets, or blown up by the missile racks. (Acid manning the CMP, Blacksheep with the machinegun, and Ninja/Tiger with the missile racks.)
They made it to Tubeelectric, and headed into the planet through a very hidden airvent, using the fighter ships that Gasp readied. These are one-man flyers, green, grey, and brown, with six guns (a pair of each: Lazer cannon, flamethrower (Flame about 30X the heat and size of a blowtorch flame, little ammo) and missile launcher) and found a large vault, with a locked door. Grath was in the lead, and blowtorched the door open.
Behind the door was an airlock. Everyone flew into the airlock, it filled with air, and they got out of the ships. Then, they went in. Inside, on a pedestal, a black pistol lay.
As they approached, a voice came out of nowhere: 'You try to obtain Thanatos, the onyx pistol? Your bodies will rest in pieces when I am done with you.' Then, a black figure appeared, holding a katana in each of it's 6 arms. The creature also had four legs. Ninja pulled his energy sword from the air, Grath formed an energy sword, Gasp pulled out his circular saw blade, and formed a katana from leaves. Sherry started preparing some water magic, Blacksheep pulled out her raspberry jello gun, Acid prepared some fire spells, Tiger pulled out his katana, and Skyrider began teleporting around the room. the creature, Thanatos, started spinning around, whirling his blades. Ninja leapt to attack, slashing from the side. Grath performed an uppercut, though both slashes were deflected.
Acid cast Fire on Gasp's sawblade, which he hurled like a boomerang at Thanatos. The sawblade sliced one swordblade off, Thanatos discarding the hilt. Blacksheep shot at Thanatos' 2nd arm down on the left, encasing it in jello, immobilizing it. Tiger waited, then slashed at Thanatos, taking off an arm, though it didn't bleed. Skyrider kicked Thanatos in the back, distracting him long enough for Grath and Ninja to get in some slashes, both of them managing to hack off a single arm. (Two arms off so far.) Gasp sliced at Thanatos with his katana, slicing off another swordblade. (3 swords, four arms, left.) Now, Ninja put away his sword, and pinned one of Thanatos' arms to the wall using shurikens. (Ninja throwing star, four points.) Thanatos yelled: 'NOW YOU DIE.' and ripped away from the wall. Grath said 'Everyone back off!' and dematerialized his sword. Then he formed a katana in each hand, and said 'You. Duel.' pointing at Thanatos.
Thanatos said 'We shall go all-out. Your Caroc cards, I get to use my full power.' 'Allright.' said Grath. Thanatos began changing, turning from a black monster with six arms, into a cloaked figure. He pulled the hood back, revealing a skull, with blue eyes. (Skeletal body) Then formed a scythe, the blade looking a bit blue. 'So it is you, Death.' 'Yes. It is me' said Death.

Next chapter: THE DRAMATIC FIGHTSCENE!

Yay!

Killthings!

Wheeeeeeeee!!!!!11111 *crash*

"Don't just stand there, shoot something!"

Nice chappie, Grath.

Aww, where was that? I missed it!

In case you didn't get the idea from my last post, I agree with CT on the "good chappie" point.

Good news, Bad news.
Bad news: I'll be gone until sunday night (EST)
Good news: I'll be having tons of fun without you guys! HAHAHA!

Originally Posted by 4I Falcon

Aww, where was that? I missed it!

That wasn't in there. I got it from somewhere else. I plan to use it in my story.

Oh.

Eeyay. ^_^

Yeah, that's what I thought.

Been back for a few days.
No progress yet...
Oh, did you know, in pokemon sapphire I have/had 112 pokemon, (Some evolved into another pokedex entry,) and 153 seen?
And I'm only missing one legendary, and that's because I can't have it in the game without cheating/trading, and I can't trade?

That's why you must cheat. Cheating, despite everyone else's opinion and all those moral laws and junk'n'stuff'n'things, is good.

I know Master Cheater's going to applaud this, so I'm going to pre-empt him with oh my GOD WHAT'S THAT BEHIND YOU?! *yoink*

*looks from side to side*
I had to cheat to get one, but it's legally available in the game (I just had to get the Eon ticket, which is being given away by nintendo. They aren't gonna be anywhere near where I live, anyway)
And I've got 99 leftovers, and 99 heart scales. And 99 Master balls.

I need six votes of approval before continuing the story. *runs off*

*gives 7 votes of approval, by rigging voter turnouts*

here you go,

when you need help,

always consult the family,

we'll be there to help.

(mafia)

Just Kidding.

I've never actually read this story, but I like the concept of underage voting.

+1 vote of approval.

4 more votes!

Ah Voteh!!! Keep Teh Storie!!! =(((

*reads thread*

You need evil characters to die? Yay, feel free to use my Rafael or Senor Enchilada! (find their profiles in the "Everyone's Characters" thread and see why I want them to die so badly.)

*Decides to have half-off week in voting*
K. Continuing... Now!
Chapter coming in about a half-hour.

Edit: Or less.
Chapter 5
Grath reached into his coat, and pulled out a vial, painting the contents in a five-pointed star on the ground, then casting a card onto it.
'Death, I have a call for you!' and the card burst into fire... and Death dissapeared, re-appearing in the star.
'Hey Death. Did you know that only I can release you from that circle?' said Grath.
'That's cheating!' said Death.
'How about this: You give me all the weapons, and I'll let you go if you promise not to interfere with me. Deal?'
'Deal.'
Death handed over several sword hilts, and the schythe, then dissapeared.
Grath handed out sword hilts, keeping one for himself, gave NinjA Death's schythe, and grabbed Thanatos, the pistol, for himself.
'Rotate the hilt and it activates' said Grath.
Blacksheep's was a large broadsword.
Sherry's was a katana.
Skyrider's was a katana.
Grath's was a whip.
Acid's was a longsword.
Everyone trooped back to the ships, and went out of Tubeelectric, back to the main ship.
'We've got incoming fighterships' said Acid, looking at the radar.
'Using the degaussers is too easy. I've got a few fighter ships of my own in the hangar bay. Anyone with me?' said Grath.
'I'll go' said Blacksheep.
'Me too' said Acid.
'Me three!' said Ninja.
Sherry went to training, and the others hung around.
Focusing on the ones left behind...
Sherry started training, but the enemies were too strong for her, and she was overpowered. Unfortuanatly, these training machines are like the matrix. When she got killed in training, she shuddered, then fell over. Dead. Everyone saw there was trouble when the alarm went off. 'Accident in training! Level 5 alert! Be careful!' said the loudspeakers.
Everyone rushed to the training room, and on careful examination the machine had a small, removable, device which had caused the defect.
Grath and the others returned from beating up enemies, and saw the sad looks on the rest's faces.
'What happened?' asked Grath.
'This.' said Skyrider, opening the door to reveal Sherry.
'Oh my... What happened to her?' asked Grath.
'Training machine defect. We found this in it.' said Tiger, holding up the chip.
Grath took it, and saw on it, faintly, 'Rafael' etched onto it.

OMG EVIL TACO OMG OMG

Ow. How can a taco (or whatever) kill someone?

Wow, I didn't actually think you'd use them. I feel 44% specialer now.