Que Passa!!!!

Hey, I like it- I just try to keep from talking too much.

(Also, all the good complements have already been given.)

Nice, but not enough humor in this one

It's cool!
But one thing bothers me...
When did the fight end?
It stopped so suddenly!^.^;;

Are you all ready for a maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaajor spoiler? Or should I just keep writing and not tell you what's going to happen next.

(Actually, I'm reaching about the end of my story. Giving away the next part will probably just give away the end!)

BTW, I already spilled the beans to Piccolo over MSN. He now knows what's going to happen, unless I throw in a few plot twists...*evil grin*

Eli_m33@hotmail.com

There. And my MSN username is currently BigBadBen, so just don't be too surprised if you see that in MSN messager.

And also, about your question about the other peoples, they're gone because Acid and Terminator got warped away to fight in that arena, and they were left behind. You will see them in the next chapter, I promise.

So, when is the next chapter?
Am i in it?

Nice story, keep it up!
Oh, some plot twists should be nice.

(yeah I know this is a short worthless post, but I gotta show my support for this tale, its really good.)

“I DON’T THINK THOSE ORGANIC BEINGS WILL BE EXPECTING THIS.” Said Omicron, giving the robot version of a grin. “BLACK JACK, HOW IS THE WORK COMING?”
“Very well. I don’t believe those pesky animals will get in the way when you’re in charge. Terminator was just too overconfident for his own good.” Said Black Jack, tweaking his gun. “Nobody can stand in our way when we’ve got our ultimate weapon!”
Omicron Hellbot began calculating. He took on a worried expression. “YOU’RE RIGHT. WE SHOULD MAKE SURE OUR SHIELDS ARE DOWN AND OUR WEAPON SYSTEMS OFF WHEN WE’RE NOT ENGAGED IN A BATTLE. THAT WAY, NOBODY CAN’T BEAT US.”
Black Jack looked puzzled. “Why? We don’t need to save energy, and what if they surprise us?”
Omicron whirled to face him. “WHY?!? WHY?!?!? LOOK, WE CAN’T DEFEND AGAINST NOBODY WITH OUR SHIELDS AND WEAPONS RUNNING. YOU SEE, NOBODY HAS TAKEN FORM. HE CAN DEFEAT THE STRONGEST ARMIES, BUT HE CAN’T HANDLE A DEFENSELESS ANIMAL. HE RULES OUTER SPACE, THE OCEAN, EVERYTHING SOMEBODY DOESN’T OWN, BUT HE IS A STRANGER WHERE THERE ARE MANY PEOPLE. HE IS ALWAYS BEING SEEN. BE WARNED. NOBODY TEAMED WITH ACTUAL LIFE FORMS CAN BE DEVASTATING; YOU CAN DEFEND AGAINST ONE OR THE OTHER, BUT NOT BOTH.”
Black Jack had receded a bit, but looked less puzzled. “Ah. I see.”

We now return to our show after that important news brief…

The group began the walk back to Carrotus City.
“So what happened with you and Terminator?” asked Fawriel.
“Well, to make a long story short, I pushed him into the lava. I’m not sure if he’s dead though, evil villains have a knack of popping up again no matter what.” Acid replied.
“Don’t worry, Acid, I’m sure he’s gone, and we can return to normal.” Said Electrik, patting Acid on the shoulder.
“The one thing that bugs me is that robot of his… And your evil clone.” said Acid.
“Omicron and Black Jack? No ide- you have a point there. We have to tell Jazz.” Said Jack.
Acid looked at his watch. “I’ve gone for 48 hours without sleep? Where’s my coffee maker?”
Headcheese didn’t know where Acid’s coffee maker was, but decided to use her own special way of waking people up. The mallet practically left a dent on Acid’s forehead.
“…That worked,” Acid said. He continued walking, but a bit more dizzily.
They soon arrived, beaten and battered, at Carrotus City. They walked up to the palace, and asked to speak with Jazz.

“So, in conclusion, we’re afraid that there might still be two of them out there, ready to strike.” Acid said, finishing their report.
Jazz nodded. “Yes, I can see why you think that. We can send you tomarrow, after everyone’s gotten a good night’s sleep. And I hope R.O.A.R. can pay for the damage your sister has done to my room, Jack Flash.”
Jack looked sheepishly at Headcheese, who was trying to find the best angle to swing her mallet with to smash the vase sitting on Jazz’s dresser. There was a crash, and the tinkle of glass. Headcheese stared proudly at the remains of the vase. She was going to cost R.O.A.R. at least $1,000.00.

The next day, Acid got up bright and early. He walked unsteadily over to his lounge, and pressed the button on his coffee maker. This one worked.
*BOOM!!!*
“AAAUUUGGGHHH!!!”
He then ran down to the launch pad. He was early this time. He sat down and waited for the others to arrive.
When they did, they all looked very interesting. Acid was black pretty much all over. Fawriel had dropped his computer on his foot while he tried to move it to a different place in his room, and was trying to cringe and smile at the same time. His foot was starting to look a little like a balloon. Phoenix Wing was having a serious bad hair day, to make a long story short. Jack Flash had accidentally grabbed the wrong gun, and was sheepishly holding a purple and yellow spotted pistol. Wizard of Odds had made several scientific errors, and looked a lot like Acid. Headcheese had accidentally bopped herself on the head with her mallet in her sleep. Electrik looked like a light bulb. Basically, everyone in the group was looking strange in their own way. Flint had joined them for this time, because more is better. He was looking very strange because he did not have any apparent problems, as the others did.
“Que Passa!!! Wait a second!”
The people in the crowd parted to reveal Batty Buddy.
“Don’t leave yet! I’ve got something for you!” Batty Buddy pulled off his backpack, and began digging through it. “Ah, here it is!”
Batty Buddy pulled it out. The chicken didn’t look like it liked being held by Batty Buddy. It scampered off, squawking.
Batty Buddy blinked. “Umm… That wasn’t it. Let me se…” he continued searching. “THERE!!! Found it!”
Batty Buddy placed a glowing red diamond in Acid’s hand. “I don’t remember where I got this or what it does, but I’ve got a feeling you’ll need it. Sixth sense stuff, you know?”
After that was over, the ship launched. Acid stared and stared at the red stone in his hands. What could it do? Why could it help them?

There! Flint has made a small appearance so far(being one of the people going on the ship) and I've finally done Batty Buddy's cameo!

Trafton AT's still not given me his profile, and I'm afraid that after this, he might not be able to fit in the story.

Also, my sense of humor is back!^.^ Enjoy.

Que Passa!!!!

Hmmm... CAMEO!

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Now where'd that chicken go off to... I have an emu I want to introduce it to...

Headcheese! You're grounded!

I've always wanted to say that.

But seriously, nice story. Authors with a sense of humour r00lzors. Unfortunately, I'm not one of them. *sniff*

I claim page 7!
Contuine on!
More!
Wheee!!
I like how you use the paradox of my name!

`N0

Dun forget tha plottwist!^.^
(Still)Cool story,got a lot funnier again!^.^

Yay, this story is great, the plot continues to get better(and not just because im in it)

DooD!!!
Don't stoP!!!!!!
Or I will eat yoU!!!!!
`N0

I know, I know, strange topic.

okay, what I wanted to say is, I've not only got room in my story for a few more ppl, for the plot twist I'm planning (muchos thanks to Phoenix Wing, who had the idea) I need at least 1 more!

But, for the extras, there are these rules:

They must NOT be your main character. The extras are the kind of 'expendable' characters and I don't want to use someone's real character in a slot like that.

You should make them up specifically for this story. This isn't required, but as I said earlier, they are going to be kind of the 'expendable' characters.

I need at least 1, and I'm not taking more than 3.

There. See? I am making progress on my story. (A little bit)

Emigna
This is a cat character I made up!^.^
She's a nature person and very vivid.
No much further description!

Agent 00Zero is an agent for... well, Nobody knows that.
She trusts nobody, and nobody trusts her.
She is a weird cross between two animals, nobody is sure what,
but she has a tail and is purple and furry.

She lives in space with nobody, and is on nobody's team.

Ahh... The paradox of my name.... I just love it.

Dark Hauc:

The semi-evil twin brother of Jack Flash's friend Hauc. He's slightly taller than Spaz, slightly shorter than Jazz, and has blood-red eyes. (not bloodshot... he's not high, dammit! ) He carries a silver pistol with a gold stripe along the top, and is ready and waiting to fire at anything that moves. Even if it is one of his own team members.

Now you can tell why Hauc doesn't really mind whenever Dark Hauc leaves to go on a mission. There's a slight chance he'll get killed.

The evil person! I am just plain evil.

errr... You got here a bit late, didn't you?

I'm sorry, but I have decided not to use these characters. None of them really work with what I had planned. They're great characters, just they don't fit in well here.

I think I'll think up my own character, anyway. The problem with yours is you don't know what I'm thinking of. Because of that, you can't make characters that fit in with it well, unless by luck, because you don't know what they're going to be for!

Lol,Acid,how was that supposed to work if you don't tell us what we have to give ya?
(I have lots of ideas for characters in my brain already,would just have to draw them!)

Yeh, you didn't tell us what kind of characters you wanted! I gots lotta dem!

(Hauc, in the background): Does this mean that Dark Hauc still isn't dead yet?!

What I was thinking of was someone like what the EVIL person was supposed to be like at first. Seemingly nice, but a traitor. I just didn't want to give away the plot.

Pretty darn rux0r, man.

*bawls*



Do carry on

DON'T LET THIS STORY DIE!!!

“FAWRIEL!!! HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU!!! THE WEAPONS CABINET DOES NOT NEED TO BE MOVED TO THE OTHER SIDE OF THE SHIP!!!” Shouted Acid. Fawriel was at it again, trying to move the weapons cabinet to the other side of the ship. He had kind of turned into a game, where he tried to move the cabinet while Acid wasn’t looking. Acid wasn’t amused.
The shuttle was getting close to Omicron’s ship. Acid began to fidget. He tried not to think about what might happen. He walked into the lounge. He sat down.
“Tough day, huh?”
“Yeah, it’s as if they’re children! I don’t understand. They’re always taking up sports that could be harmful to the ship, to them, or to us. It’s as if you’re the only one not doing it, Jiaike. I’ll be mostly glad when we get to the station.”
Jiaike began tossing one of his grenades up and down. “I agree. They’d better stop goofing around and get their act together. I don’t want to attack Omicron with you and a bunch of clowns on my team.” He put the grenade back down.
Acid looked toward the red furred rabbit. “They were like this last time. All goofy and such. As soon as we got on Terminator’s ship, however, they started being serious again. I just hope they do the same this time.”

A little while later, after docking on Omicron’s ship…

Jiaike stopped. They were at a 6-way intersection in the halls- forward, right, left, the directions in-between, and back. “Okay, let’s split up into teams. We’ll have a better chance of finding Omicron and Black Jack if we split up.”
“Okay,” said Acid. “Good plan.”
Fawriel and Phoenix Wing edged closer together.
“I’LL make the teams, thank you,” said Jiaike. “Okay, Acid and Electrik, take straight forward. Flint and Jack Flash can take the forward right diagonal hall. Wizard of Odds and Headcheese take the path on the right. Blaze, Firefox and Fawriel take the path on the left. Phoenix Wing and I will take the diagonal forward and left.”
The search teams split up, and went down their paths. After a little while, everyone got a message from Jiaike.
“Somethings fishy. I can’t tell what, but I know something’s going to happen. I’ve just got that feeling that BOO-“
The explosion was cut off. It was probably because of the radio getting destroyed in the explosian. Everyone hurried back to the middle.
“We have to help them! We can’t just leave them alone!” said Acid, and they hurried down the forward left diagonal path. They kept walking for a while, then they found the remains of the radio, and a black scorch on the wall.
Acid began looking around. “The hall’s to skinny and goes on too long for there to have been a fight…” he looked closer at the ashes. “What the- fragments of a grenade! Jiaike sat us up!”
They began sprinting down the hall. They got to a large metal door.
“Locked!” said Electrik.
Acid fired his bazooka at the door. It did nothing. “The door’s bulletproof!”
Blaze, while everyone was trying to get through the door, had found a computer lock. He fiddled with a few combos on the keypad, and then he found one that opened the door! Fawriel flew right through the open space, as he had just launched another kick at the door, only to find it rise up right before his foot hit it.
“Oof!”
“Sorry.”
They all walked through. They were in a very large room. It looked like the perfect spot for a battleground. It was.
“SO, YOU FOUND US. VERY GOOD.”
The group looked up, and saw Omicron, Black Jack, Jiaike and Phoenix Wing standing on a platform above them.
“heh. You are definitely smarter than Terminator. A spy! Jiaike did his work well.” Acid commented.
Jack flash began aiming his blaster at one of the supports for the platform. He had found his, and given the purple and yellow spotted one to Headcheese.
“WE HAVE YOU RIGHT WHERE WE WANT YOU. NOW, IF YOU WILL ALL SURRENDER NOW, NOBODY WILL GET HURT. ATTACK, AND YOU MAY LIVE, BUT I CAN’T SAY THE SAME ABOUT YOUR FRIEND.”
Black Jack made his point clear by pointing his blaster at the side of Phoenix Wing’s head. “Yeah, what he says. If you don’t come quietly, then we know for sure you’re going to return to Carrotus with at least 1 less member of your team.”
Jack Flash fired. The shot ricocheted of Black Jack’s blaster, and into the support. Black Jack dropped his blaster, and it fell onto the platform where the team was standing, where it was promptly kicked off into the blackness beneath them. The support snapped, and the platform began leaning. Jack fired again, at another support, and the platform shifted to a 90-degree angle. Needless to say, the four standing on the platform fell onto the platform with the others.
Omicron got up first, and launched himself at Jack. He hit him head on. The two rolled back a little, then Omicron threw Jack Flash. Jack slammed straight into Acid, Electrik, and Flint, and the four hit the wall and were knocked out. Emmi ran over to help them. Omicron then leapt at Blaze, who did his best to defend, but failed. He was thrown on top of the heap, knocking into Emmi on his way. Wizard of Odds and Firefox attacked Omicron from both sides, but the attack was thwarted by Omicron grabbing one and using him as a bat to smash the other with, resulting with them being added to the now quite large pile of unconscious rabbits.
Headcheese walked over to Omicron with her hands behind her back, and putting on her angelic look. Omicron Scanned her. Headcheese took the opporitunity to show Omicron the object behind her back. The mallet actually left a dent on the top of Omicron’s head. Omicron looked surprised, then gathered his circuits and kicked her into the heap.
Now it was just Fawriel, and it didn’t look like he would win. He edged over to the wall.
The door opened.
“DARK HAUC? YOU’RE LATE, AS USUAL.”
“Oh, great. It looks like I missed something important.”
“ACTUALLY, JUST ME BEATING THE HECK OUT OF THEM.” Omicron gestured towards the pile of unconscious rabbits.
Phoenix Wing had grown tired of being held by the back of her neck, and began open rebellion. Black Jack had not been ready to battle Phoenix wing, or her with her claws extended, and much less a very TICKED OFF Phoenix wing.
Black Jack regained his senses as fast as he could, and tried to combat the new threat.
Fawriel ran over to the fight.
So did Omicron, who cut into the fight with a harsh kick that landed right on target. Phoenix Wing crashed into the railing, and almost fell, but caught the platform.
Omicron wasted no time in knocking Fawriel to the other side of the room.
Meanwhile, Acid started to come to.
“Uhhh?”
He accidentally kicked Electrik. Electrik woke with a start, and a burst of electricity. The electricity woke up all the other rabbits in the pile. They all jumped up.
“YOU WANT TO FIGHT AGAIN, HUH? I DON’T THINK THE OUTCOME WOULD BE ANY DIFFERENT.” Omicron was beginning to receive anger messages. “BLACK JACK, I’M GETTING TIRED OF THIS. I THINK IT’S TIME WE PUT AND END TO THIS.”
Black Jack nodded, then turned to Phoenix Wing, who was trying in vain to pull herself up. He took out another blaster.
“NO!!!” Fawriel began to run over.
Black Jack ignored Fawriel, and fired.
There was a silence. It was one of the silences you get when someone has just done something REALLY bad.
Fawriel started running again, fuelled by a rage he had never known before. He slammed into Black Jack with such a force that Black Jack fell off the platform as well. Fawriel then looked over towards where Omicron, Jiaike and Dark Hauc were standing.
Omicron Launched at Fawriel, but was repelled back by a kick from his foe. He had never experienced being hit with so much power before; he had only used it! He got up again, and Fawriel grabbed him. Fawriel threw Omicron straight at Jiaike, and they both skidded off the platform. Dark Hauc ran for his life, but didn’t make it to the door. A small trail of smoke rose from Jack Flash’s gun.
Fawriel looked over the edge of the platform. It was a long, black fall. Driven by his rage, he dived down off the platform.
“NO!” shouted Acid. It was too late. Fawriel had already jumped. They all ran over. Blaze produced a length of line and a grappling hook.
“Use this. Someone can climb down, and see what happened. The others will stay up here, and secure the line.”
“I’ll go!” said Acid, before anyone could even finish taking in what Blaze had said.
He began climbing down.

It was a long way to the bottom. When he finally got there, he got off the rope, and started to adjust his eyes to the darkness. That didn’t help much, but he did see a few wooden crates. He used a little flamer ammo to set one on fire, as a makeshift candle. He looked around. He looked around. There appeared to be some kind of padding on the floor. That was pretty lucky for them. He looked around until he found the motionless figure of Phoenix Wing. She was still breathing. He couldn’t see Fawriel anywhere. He knew calling out would be stupid, as he would probably have been knocked out from the fall.
A figure limped out from behind a pile of boxes. It walked a few steps, and then collapsed next to Phoenix Wing. Acid brought the crate a little closer, and saw that it was Fawriel. He knew they were both still alive, but they couldn’t get back up on their own.

There! Ninth chapter. I'm sorry I forgot to make Flint do something.

To anyone who wants to know, Jiaike is pronounced Jee Iy ake

NOBODY is going to be in the next chapter, I promise. And this story is NOT going to die, not if I have anything to say about it!

What she said!
*smiling all the way*
Just the way I like it!^.^

*claims page for Acid,the story,Pho and himself*

Originally posted by acid
Headcheese walked over to Omicron with her hands behind her back, and putting on her angelic look. Omicron scanned her. Headcheese took the opporitunity to show Omicron the object behind her back. The mallet actually left a dent on the top of Omicron’s head.

rux0r!

In other news, I can't believe I was so useless...

*double-claims the page for the story*

Don't worry, I'm plainning to let off a few characters in the next chapter. These will be ones I think were a little overused. When I'm done, I'll probably be left with Acid, Electrik, Jack Flash and Flint. It just seems that I get all the inspiration for some characters and none for others.

Originally posted by acid “WE HAVE YOU RIGHT WHERE WE WANT YOU. NOW, IF YOU WILL ALL SURRENDER NOW, [b]NOBODY[\b] WILL GET HURT. ATTACK, AND YOU MAY LIVE, BUT I CAN’T SAY THE SAME ABOUT YOUR FRIEND.”




NOBODY is going to be in the next chapter, I promise. And this story is NOT going to die, not if I have anything to say about it!

Whadya mean, "in the next chapter". I was in this one! And, thankfuly, I didn't get hurt.
`N0

Btw, Thanx for not letting this story die!

Originally posted by acid
Don't worry, I'm plainning to let off a few characters in the next chapter. These will be ones I think were a little overused. When I'm done, I'll probably be left with Acid, Electrik, Jack Flash and Flint. It just seems that I get all the inspiration for some characters and none for others.

HEY!!!
YOU CAN'T LET ME OUT!;.;
I OWN ALL THOSE GUYS!!!
AND I CAME UP WIF A BIG,FAT PLOT-TWIST!!!!
I'M IMPORTANT,MAN!
*goes into a corner to cry*;.;

I'm confused.

Piccolo, the reason I've decided to continue only with Acid, Electrik, Jack Flash and Flint because hey are the ones with the least action so far. Heck, practically the only thing Flint did was come along!

I know I've done quite a few things with Acid and Electrik, but it is my story, and what would that be like if it didn't have my own characters?

I'm sorry I have to leave the others out, but I want to give my brain a chance to think up plot twists for the characters it hasn't been able to use yet.

I'd say something more useful here, but I'm still completely stunned...

*Sniff*
THE STORY JUST DIED!!!!1
AND YOU DIDN"T EVEN GOT TO TEH BESTEST PART YET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
*/Sniff*
`N0

what do you mean the story died?

I'm just taking a break, that's all.

(And I'm home sick with a cold.)

*sends card*
Get well........And write some more of that story.

What flint said.

The cold seems to be going around like an evil epidemic of ultimate doom.

Get well, acid, and i hope to see more of this truly RUX story soon.

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!