Is here anyone knows how to make cartoons, in Flash ,i thought maybe we could make a jazz cartoon or something.Cause i'm a good cartoon maker, but sometimes i can't think of a good story so if someone could think of a good story,and help me with the cartoon too.
I have one cartoon all the animation is good but the story is stupid.

Do you have examples of your work? You're more likely to get help that way.

$5 that HOI just found out how to motion tween.

Stupid stories rock, so you would have no problems!

Originally Posted by Radium

Do you have examples of your work? You're more likely to get help that way.

Well yes i have but i don't know how i can show it to you.

Send it to good ol' Radium ( a@foxmage.com ) and he'll most likely upload it.

Originally Posted by Fawriel

Send it to good ol' Radium ( a@foxmage.com ) and he'll most likely upload it.

i send you a message!with my cartoon!

Just some random plots. Take most sonic flash movies for instance, none of them have any real plot, but they're hilarious. A few random gags, and you'll be fine.

Originally Posted by HEART OF IRON

i send you a message!with my cartoon!

Actually, that wasn't my own e-mail address, but I'm sure Radium will upload it anyway. ^^'

well, my cartoon don't look like real cartoons ,but of flash cartoon my are good but not very good like Happy Tree Friends but maybe like this http://www.mult.ee/mrman.shtml

It's WORSE than HappyTreeFriends?

God save us.

I thought that's impossible.

Originally Posted by HEART OF IRON

http://www.mult.ee/mrman.shtml

violence plz

Originally Posted by LittleFreak

It's WORSE than HappyTreeFriends?

God save us.

W00t!

Originally Posted by Fawriel

violence plz

W00t!

What? You want cartoons with blood?Well if somebody could give me a good story ,maybe i could make.BUT one tiny problem i don't know how to draw Jazz and Spaz!!!

I don't think Fawriel wants bloody cartoons. ^__^;;;

Originally Posted by Heart Of Iron

i don't know how to draw Jazz and Spaz!

Step by step tutorial

Originally Posted by HEART OF IRON

What? You want cartoons with blood?Well if somebody could give me a good story ,maybe i could make.BUT one tiny problem i don't know how to draw Jazz and Spaz!!!

...sorry, I should've made that clearer. ^^;
What I meant to say is that there seems to be some gore on that site you posted, so you should perhaps add a warning.
...I don't like gorey stuff. Especially gorey humor.

EDIT: And.. the tutorial in JSZ's thread is for heads only and stuff.. perhaps I could give HOI some description of what I found out about the original JJ2 style in general.. and stuff.

I'm not getting a message.. did you send it? Are you sure you spelled "A", "Foxmage", and "@" correctly?

yes i'm sure!!!!

Uploaded. The Blessing (EXE file). A plot explanation was provided in the email, but personally I think it's rather straightforward.

It's a show of fair animating ability, but I can see why you would say you are bad at coming up with stories, because that made no sense whatsoever.

so, do you think the animation is good?

Want i'll send you my Cartoon (RADIUM)???

The animation was surprisingly good. I really liked it. I also liked the backgrounds a lot.. they sometimes reminded me of old, abstract paintings.
...but the story... well.. was pretty miserable.

Originally Posted by Fawriel

The animation was surprisingly good. I really liked it. I also liked the backgrounds a lot.. they sometimes reminded me of old, abstract paintings.
...but the story... well.. was pretty miserable.

well that's what everyone says it's nice but stupid

I don't understand the story at all?!

Originally Posted by White Rabbit

I don't understand the story at all?!

hehe noone does

well, that good animation was very hard to make ,i made this cartoon maybe in 2 weeks every day 6 hours.So i don't feel like it to make another one maybe we'll make like a comic with sounds?All i need is a good voice of Jazz and Spaz , someone who can think of a good story and someone who draws Jazz and Spaz good so you can show me how to draw them!!!!so ,what do you say?

I say here is a good candidate for voice acting. =P

He seems to be inactive though.

This film was made like 3 or 4 years ago!! I dont think he could be in JJ2 or J2O!!!

well still someone here must have a voice of Jazz and Spaz.don't you think ?

well comeon give me a good story, if i like it i'll make a comick with sounds (only i need a good voice).

Radium please upload my cartoon!!! I'll send it to you!!!

Email it to me...ive got some hosting space spare.

No need, Bags.

http://www.foxmage.com/The%20Plank.html

TNX Radium....Can you teach me how to upload files like you do????

Originally Posted by NaT

TNX Radium....Can you teach me how to upload files like you do????

http://aplus.net/ + $$$ = http://www.foxmage.com/

Still i don't get it!!!

So did you liked the cartoon???And did you anderstood the story???

The drawings were okay.
The idea behind the story was funny, but the movie didn't seem too funny itself. The whole thing just drags itself along, and there's just something about it that doesn't exactly make the movie seem incredibly hilarious, at least for me.
And stuff.

Well ok....I hope you really anderstood the story!
O and please tell me was the animation bad??

As I said, the drawing style in general, well, it works in drawings.
But the movements are off. The legs and fingers and all that just don't move right. I guess it would be hard to change that with that style of drawing, where fingers and legs are that short.