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|Diamond.j2l||The Diamond Caves||4.45 kB||29 Nov 2003|
|song11.s3m||29.86 kB||15 Jan 1998|
My first level I ever made. Please don’t rate it any higher or lower because it is my first level. Enjoy! :)
Nice level for ya first whan!
2-nice food placed
3-nice ammo placed
5-not small not big
overall good for ya first whan. i give it a 7.
Make more yor good in it.
better then me.
Here is my review,
1: It is nice for your first level,
2: The iron crate puzzle’s are cool
3: The ememy’s and the food are placed
4: the rating: a 7.5 nice.
Actually cooba… you probably just haven’t found any of the secrets. There’s quite a bit. Maybe you need to work on finding secrets. :P
Wow! This is great if it is really your first level, keep making levels because I feel that your next will be really good. OK Let’s review this:
Gameplay is good there are almost no bugs (what is incredible for a first level)Eyecandy is nice, well this level is a little bit boring but it’s not as much as I played other.
I will give you 7.0 – Ithink that this rating is perfect for this level.
Hahahah… evil reviewer comes back :P
First thing, you’ve used Diamondus 1 that is overused tileset as heck. it means that on all of the world is probably lot of them. See my article.
Level is just a dark cave. Things were made good, but I’ve stuck that Spaz can’t jump on the platform, and that means that lower-jumping Jazz can’t also. But it’s only simply bug.
No points here.
There’s too less goodies. Some gems, TNT, and Toaster. Not food. Confusing.
Next time place them more. The same thing with secrets, which there’s not in here! Why? Maybe you don’t know how to use layer 3…
-0.5 points here.
Enemies were repetive, just turtles and beehives and sometimes skeleton. Why? Level is gloomy and Demons, Doggy-Dogs, Rapiers, even Witch fits here. Try again.
-1 point here.
Tileset use : As i mentioned that Diamondus is 2nd of most overused tilesets. But back into topic, I’ve not saw tilebugs. Only there’s less of animations and less of animations makes me angry. There should be some plants type for “window” encovered with plants. Too less eyecandy tiles. Aargh.
-0.5 points here.
And finally music choice. Orbitus. Well done. Her fits also standard JJ1 Diamondus, Turtemple, and (believe or not), my favourite, Battleships. But no pity.
+1 point here.
Overall : 7 – 0.5 – 1 – 0.5 + 1 = 6
Six points to be exact.
PHT thanks[This review has been edited by Cooba]
Eat your lima beans, Johnny.