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|bunnyhotel.j2l||Bunny hotel||2.00 kB||30 Aug 2006|
|Hoteldream.j2t||Hotel Dream||139.29 kB||06 Jan 2002|
its my first level.enjoy!
i have re-uploaded it.please re-download!and delete the other version.
i want a review.pls!pls
you know that this is my first level?
Ok I’ll Review this level for you.
This is supposedly supposed to be a hotel level. Well, its rather small and you could of made it larger. You didn’t use a textured layer 8 background (which most levels have). There were only about 6 rooms in the entire hotel. There was one room called “Gem Shop”. It wasn’t really a “shop” because you could just go in and get unlimtited gems for free. It would of been better if you had made them cost coins. You could of put a battle room (there’s a sign saying:“Battle”, but I can’t find a battle room anywhere.” There was no music, either. The eyecandy was very poor, there was only items of eyecandy in the level. I am afraid that I’m going to have to give this 2.5.
Try looking at this: http://howtojcs.zeepost.nl/
It will give you a good tutorial on making levels. That’s were I learned to make my levels. I would like to see what you could make after looking at that website.
Also, try checking out JCS Ref
Your first level? Its kind of good u know! You wwant an hotel? >>>>Download this ||||:) ! I garantee u! With an level like this one you will never get BORED! ask who knows>me! Who dosen’t download this level is |||NOOB!
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Eat your lima beans, Johnny.