|Sea.j2l||Haunted Sea of Rabbits||5.74 kB||26 Sep 2009|
|inferno.mod||Inferno||426.32 kB||26 Sep 2009|
:D have fun in my 2nd CTF level :p
Well placed and i like the style too
Not a bad level. The atmosphere is quite good, yet nothing overly special. The issue I have with this level is that it tries a bit too hard to be like semi. At least it has two carrots, so it’s not quite as campy, but more chaotic due to being very small yet open. The eyecandy is okay. Might be fun, but I highly doubt it will become a classic.
Rather too similar to Happy Semiconductor for my tastes. I found the way the same tiles are on multiple layers to be rather confusing with regards to figuring out whether or not I can stand on something. Eyecandy is all right, but is rather messy and could be much improved.
Good level :)
that’s a good one
keep on creating
[Review changed to quick review. – cooba]
This is a good level for someone who isn’t that familliar with levelmaking yet.
This level doesn’t have a good flow, there are some dead ends and also paths of only a few tiles big. Though, you managed to keep the damage minimal by having a good flow in the middle of your level. Maybe you should try to make your next level a bit bigger, so it will be easier to avoid small paths and dead ends.
My first impression of the eyecandy is good, you have a nice moving background and rain on the foreground, also you used some tiles to mask other tiles or events. Though this level contains quite a lot of tilebugs. Try to look at other levels and see how the authors of those levels used the tiles.
You used quite some events in your level, which allowed one to warp to powerups they can’t shoot and also roll through a sucer tube square. Though, this level lacks original design, amazing eyencandy and renewing combinations of tiles and events. Though for your second level this is a good job, you can be proud of it.
Final grade: 5.5
It can really be better. More for layers 1,2,3 and more in the background. You did a good job with the ship and rain but it can still be better.
It really looks like semi. Good the blue base was fixed. There are some bugs.
Good ammo placement. Not too campy,though the RF part can be.
It is good for a second CTF level. Try to be more original and fix the bugs. Hope the next one will be a lot better.
Eat your lima beans, Johnny.