|jbshellyV2.j2l||Shelly's JailBreak! Ver.2 :D||5.15 kB||05 Apr 2010|
|7th Lava Fall.j2t||7th Lava Fall||345.14 kB||06 Sep 2000|
Info about the level itself:
This is a basic + jailbreak level, Has special locations for spaz, lori AND jazz
Lori gets bouncers via glitching through thin wall,
Spaz gets RFs via sidekick
Jazz gets a bubbleshield via uppercut.
Also has a pit, but as i know some people hate theese, that’s why ive added coins + paid warps above the pit to prevent it :D
Has 2 RF Climb spots to get to PUs(bounce and seek)
And has special triggers for admins, just figure them out yourself.
Info about the making : My first map, A jailbreak level, took me arround a week to make it because i couldn’t figure out how the triggers work and how to use animation, But i figured it out by myself,
THANKS: Thanks to everyone who helped me and gave me tips on my level (Trey,laro,shaker, and everyone else i may have forgotten =[)-Apperently i forgot king king! (demon)
Copyrights: Have fun with this map, And feel free to edit and take ideas, Just do me a favour and dont forget to credit shelly~
For any questions – email@example.com
Ver 2.0 ;
Added a zone which opens when you step in a secret trigger zone that has carrots.
Removed the pit due to hatred of this feature, Removed the coins, portals inside the pit.
Resized the map to the proper fitting size.
Added a sucker tube on each side of the map to get to the spot which you can freeze the spring (Yes, theres two ways to get there, due to camping)
Connected the power ups at the top of the map, Removed “Admin special spot”.
Made a platform at the spot where the pit used to be.. Which is kinda fitting to the new look.
And thats about it!
Credits : Me for finding the time and stop being a lazy bum.
Anyway. Re-Review Please =]
Added some One-Way modifiers on 1 blocks platforms…
Nice Level! I like a lot your level! =)
Nice level! I played it on your servar =p
its ok, i like your level :)
It’s Shelly’s fiirst level and I must admit, this level is not bad for a beginner.
Yeah I don’t like the pu’s replacements but with a bit of practise she can make it. And also the eyecandy could be better.
so this level is good to be hosted…..
ok ok rating 5.5
[Review changed to quick review. ~cooba]
TreyLina: Your opinion on pits makes no sense to me as I don’t see any problem with warps being a means of escape other than defeating the purpose of it being a pit. Also, aren’t players going to use the coin warps as a means of escape anyway?
However, depending on the design of the level, falling into a warp means other players can take advantage of it and camp the warp target (assuming there is only one), thus discourage falling in the warp.
No ammo near jails? why not? give a reason.
Carrots are essential? maybe we can have a jb without carrots!
Shelly: For future levels I suggest better use of the tileset. The way you used the metal beams in the sprite layer certainly doesn’t look very pretty in my opinion, and I’m pretty sure most would agree.
As for gameplay, this level would be a whole lot better if it wasn’t so cramped in a lot of places. Not only is it cramped but it is also very limiting. Limiting layouts can be interesting if done right, but here it’s just a camp fest. The platforms in the middle have terrible placement because it’s somewhat difficult to move around them. I personally don’t mind as I can play anything for fun, but flow is generally highly regarded for mp levels.
Lastly, the gimmicks are nice, but misusing them results in really bad gameplay. So it’s nice the characters all get different stuff but does it balance out? jazz having a bubble shield and spaz getting rf certainly does not.
It’s a nice level, but the tileset’s using could be better. The background was really good, but a little ‘wild’. The game-play is bad, even if you jump and do some smart moves you will ‘‘eat it’‘ easily. Some of the PU’s are hard to be founded and reach them in a short timing. I can’t say more now, I have to do smt. :D
I don’t know if I recommend this or not. It only cares about your ‘taste’.
Agreed with FireSworD. Gameplay is NOT nice,pickup positions are random with Lori/Spaz biased parts,and the eyecandy… Coin stuff is probably stolen.
I would suggest admins to remove Unearth’s biased rating,since he is in the same clan as Shelly. I don’t know why Shaker rated it so,but it’s probably biased again. Try again.
EDIT: Let’s see the reasons. 1) He is in her clan. 2) He is in her clan. That’s enough. As seeing more biased reviews,I should say: Stop it.
ANOTHER EDIT: I didn’t see the re-upload. The eyecandy is really improved and a bit of gameplay. I am sorry,Shelly. I have fixed the rating.
Eat your lima beans, Johnny.