watery wonders

Rating
5.2
Reviews:
3
Downloads:
180
Date uploaded:
20 Feb 2011 at 05:16 (Minor update on 1 Jun 2011)

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Author
aritra1115 (More uploads by aritra1115)
Type
Capture the flag
Credits
anyone who rates+reviews this
Version
TSF+ (This file requires JJ2+)
Satisfaction
N/A
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watery wonder.zip (601.64 kB)

File contents

ReadMe.txt 0.44 kB 20 Feb 2011
water.j2l watery wonders 5.33 kB 01 Jun 2011
DiambMidn.j2t Diamondus ? Midnight 247.21 kB 16 Nov 2004
Diamdust.j2b Diamond Dust 337.66 kB 01 Jan 2011

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Heh well updated this one too maybe you might change ratings

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User Reviews (Sort by Helpful Index or Date Posted) Average: 5.2

Review by master sven

Posted:
22 Feb 2011, 10:33 (edited 22 Feb 11, 10:37)
Spaz Slackrabbit (121 Points)
Number of reviews with ratings71 Featured reviews10 Average helpfulness59%
Rating
5.2

Eyecandy

Well, I like the waterfalls in the top left corner of this level.
Too bad it has tilebugs at the top of the pillars on which the rocky thing is standing. Below it is also a tilebug in the grass. There are more tilebugs, especially at borders of the platforms. Try to spend more attention to that before uploading your level. The layer 8 background and the falling leaves look nice, but you’ll need more of that. Make some more background eyecandy in the other background layers and maybe some forground tiles which overlap a small part of the layer 4.

Gameplay

First of all, try to fix the spawning problem, players can spawn near their opposing team’s base. In JCS at the multiplayer spawn point event you can enter a team number, 0 or 1. Both are different teams. Also try to never have dead ends, always make a path lead somewhere. Try to find the right balance of tiles and empty space in your levels. In the middle of this level there is just too much empty space, which gives not very attractive gameplay. Try to make the bases a bit harder to reach if they are close to eachther. By the way, if you don’t want your level to have the CTF bug, which is taken care of by JJ2+, make a 3 tile thick layer at all borders of your level. Now this level is only CTF bug free in JJ2+. By the way, try to spread ammo more evenly over your level, also non PU ammo.

Originality

Well this level certainly has a nice shape, I bet if you continue to make progress with making levels, you’ll be able to make some very nice original work. And you’ll have many years to improve because you’re still young.
So my advice: Never give up, practise makes perfect!

Eyecandy: 5
Gameplay: 5
Originality: 5,5
Final Grade: 5.2

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Review by Zoro

Posted:
11 Jul 2011, 10:20
Bee Boy Swarm (28 Points)
Number of reviews with ratings16 Featured reviews3 Average helpfulness61%
Rating
N/A

Too much dead ends ;d

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Review by aritra1115

Posted:
21 Feb 2011, 08:57 (edited 22 Feb 11, 10:48)
Frog (13 Points)
Number of reviews with ratings13 Featured reviews0 Average helpfulness22%
Rating
N/A

hm yea now works the spawn positions
work perfectly now and ill try to make lvls better :)

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