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Kaz

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Jun 6, 2001, 02:51 PM
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I'm so happy I won't have to write for a while =P



HAHA! THE THIRD PAGE IS MINE NOW!

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Jun 6, 2001, 03:05 PM
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That is unless we...FORCE YOU TO WRITE!

HAHAHAHAHAHA! *ahem*

...hyper...
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Jun 6, 2001, 05:13 PM
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I CLAIM THE THIRD PAGE!!!!





Bravo everyone! Very funny idea kovu! i got acces to my dad's laptop!!!!! i might be able to continue my part!



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Jun 7, 2001, 05:31 AM
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Woohooo, continuingfullness, yay!
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Jun 8, 2001, 03:09 PM
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Ouch. *chases Kove in a circle* Just wait until I get put back together, you! *bounce*bounce*bounce* No legs. . .
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Jun 24, 2001, 04:40 PM
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Chap. 11 Part 4:



After a few minutes everyone was assembled(including Copper, who was now put back together)at the top.



"Kaz is this way."



After a few minutes they came to the medical ward where Kaz was strapped down.



"Hi how are ya you scaly bird?"



"Will you shutup and unstrap me?!?!?!!?!"



"Sure. Ok you guys let 'im go."



After another few minutes everyone was back together.



"So. Now wha...." Kovu was cut short as an alarm screamed throuthout the building.



"Good. Just what you all need. A fight." said I.



Everyone gave me one of those "if looks could

kill- you'd be dead now" looks as guards can into the room.



"Freeze you scum!"said the first guard.



"That was my line!" said the second.



"Forget it we have a job to do!" said the first.



"Are those guys idiots or what?" asked Copper.



"Definately." agreed Ducky.



"I think they should cool off."said Kaz.



"Couldn't agree more." I said and I activated the machiene again in in a few seconds the guards were frozen.



As we exited post haste Kaz yelled to follow him outside. We chased after Kaz and he lead us to a starport he had passed.



"So we're gonna hijack a ship? Alright!!!" Kovu seemed a little to enthusiastic about it.



"Kovu. Do us all a favor and lay off the Pixie Sticks."



"Ok...."



We slowly made our way down towards a vacant ship. Then suddenly the dragon that had led Kaz through the city reared up in front of us.



"Oh crud...."



TO BE CONTINUED.....



Alright Kaz you gotta end this segment of it. But before we leave the planet. Somehow you must claim some item to symbolize Dragon's Fire. This is crucial.



Chow.




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Jun 24, 2001, 05:19 PM
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But...I NEEED PIXIE STICKS!!!!!!!!!!

Ehe, goodish Tobias, bout time we had a

continuation.



P.S. The 'chow' you said, as in goodbye,

is spelled caio, I think...
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Jun 24, 2001, 06:04 PM
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Chow looks better ;P i think anyway.

Groovy, um, great chapter

but pxie sticks rular. E he

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Can I be in the story please? If I can, my [profile is on War Tavern Profiles topic, page 2. THere are 3 different ones (I update alot). Check for the latest one. Page 2, okay? Please can I be in it?
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Jun 25, 2001, 07:26 AM
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lets us see....where can I put you in if i can....



(leaves fumbling through sheets obviously containing more of the story)
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Jun 25, 2001, 06:11 PM
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lol, Tobias

Great part, c'mon Kaz, WRITE!
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Jul 7, 2001, 01:42 PM
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Hello my dear old friends... im back! I am not revealing who I really am... so if i email you and tell you... then SHH! no tell.... hehe. Kazzy can i have ur email addie? I would like to tell you.



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Jul 7, 2001, 02:46 PM
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O-kay. Whatever you say.

Tobias, are you gone or something? We want mooorrrrrrreeee! That is, we want our tuuuurrrrrrrnnnn!
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Jul 7, 2001, 03:54 PM
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Hmm, I'm kinda lazy busy so I'm trying to get tobias to find another person.
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Jul 7, 2001, 05:05 PM
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yes. someone else do the chapter if you will. just make sure kaz picks up somethign to symbolize dragon's fire.
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Jul 8, 2001, 12:30 AM
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Message me too about it becuase some things need to be specified =P.
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I've got a lovely bunch o cocoanuts... there they are all standing in a row. big ones small ones soe the size of your head
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Jul 8, 2001, 06:07 PM
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Boo!





im not here shhh






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Okay, I just simply wrote this chapter to move the story along, not quality, but it'll move the story along.



"You again!" Kaz yelled getting really mad at this guy. It was bad enough one takes advantage of another's trust but spamming and bugging them is antoher thing.



"Don't these guys even give up?" Tobias sighed. Fireball opened his mouth to make a witty statement... or so they though. A spectrum of red and yellow burst through the air towards Tobias scorching him.



"ow..."



"Hey! Let us out of here, what'd we ever do to you?!" Kovu asked. Another inferno was almost fired except Kaz was behind him and hurled a convientent splash of water from a mysterious bucket on his head.



"I'm melting you bas-!"

"Oh can't anybody do this right?! Soembody use Rumbo's style of fighting..."



Fireball (lame name =D) VS Tobias and co.



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Fireball was apparently soaking and furious... he just flew away.

"Did we win?" Kovu asked.

"I don't think so..." Tobias responded

"It's odd for him to leave..." Kaz added.

"What's that?" Ducky pointed up into the sky.

"That's the sun Ducky, it gives us warmth,"

"NO! That isn't the sun!" Ax man yelled backing away.

"What makes you think not?" Tobias asked and stopped looking at it.

"It's coming closer!!!" CT yelled and started to run.

"IT'S A GIANT FIREBALL!!!" Kaz yelled starting to run and going into a flight mode.



Indeed it was a giant fireball, that's why he was called that. Everybody scattered... some ran in circles... the city was empty so some thought the explosion may be huge...



Have you ever played deaf? The explosion's shock wave was enough to kill everybody... but the gang had found cover just in time... but the fireball it self put everything in a flaming inferno.



"CT?! Ax Man! Tobias!!!" Kaz called out after getting up from some rubble. Everything looked like a firestorm had come through, which in sense it had. "They're alive, but not next time..." a voice told Kaz in his head. I must be crazy he thought, but it gave him relief, enough to try and search. Then he noticed a faint energy from the sky, another fireball! This one was impossibly huge! Why?! Where did Fireball get all this power?! He found CT... a gruesome sight of singed bones... then the rest all in the same spot conviently. The fireball being so large was moving very slowly. "Wake up guys! We've got to get away from this place!"

"Just 5 more minutes mum..." Tobias said.

"I can't move..." said Kovu

"I can't feel my feet," CT said

"You don't have any," Ax Man retorted.

"Another fireball is coming, it's huge, I think he's planning just to destory the planet... why is beyond me," Kaz urged.



They all got up and tried to see the grim sign. It was going to be 5 minutes until it got there... it would take 10 minutes for them to get to a decent distance. "What's that?" Ducky questioned.

"THat's the fireball, not the sun..." Wild Angel (is she in this story?)

"no, that..." Ironically she pointed out a little spec in the massive ball, triangular, orange, no wait, red, no, now yellow... they couldn't be sure.

"A flame shard! That's why it's so huge!" Ax Man yelled. He explained that a long time ago, an orb of pure magic was used to contain a pulsar, and in sense, a pulsar is many suns, the orb was overstuffed and exploded into many flame shards. Fireball apparently had a few and was using them as a weapon.

"Theorictcally, if we took that out of the core of the fireball, it would explode before it got here... it's a chance that the explosion may reach here... or not."

"it's worth a shot,"

"you're forgetting something, we're all toasted... it's like trying to go into the sun,"

"It is going into the sun..."

"I can do it, I'm untouchable by fire," Kaz said, it would figure since he was writing this that he would make himself with a large ego and a large reputation of invincibility =D.

"Yes! You go! It doesn't matter you die!" Tobias commented anxious to kill kaz (yay!).

"Fine..."

Kaz had to get to a running start before he could get to a flying start, and then to a soaring start, and then to a mauqe five staight up into the air start. But after all this impossible to do plot hole type stuff he got there.

"Man, it's hot... ah well, all I have to do is grab it and fall, I'm sure somewhere down there somebody's willing to catch me.



"Shouldn't we set up a shelter and a trampoline for landing on?" Wild Angel asked.

"Nah!"



Kaz was now in the massive flame, heading towards the little piece of sun.



"Geez! This place is and oven," With that in mind he pulled out a large string of marshmellows. (mmm, crispy...)

It was .5 a mile there, if he could elevate himself and then take a dive it would save some time.

"AHHH!" he screamed, his claw ingnited on fire... stupidly, he tried to blow the fire out. There was no time, he'd just have to make a mad dash. Kaz dived, (MY EYE! IT'S BURNING! Oh wait, that's the eye drops...")

He caught it! It was evading him but he caught it! Then he found out why it was evading him. Fireball was right on his tail (well actually 3 feet behind it)

"Go away!" Kaz swished his tail and somewhat slapped him with it.

"No! We will rule this system! You cannot stop us! You are intruders and must be-"

"Shuddapppp!!!" Kaz said and did a 180 holding out a flamming fist and punched Fireball in the nose. Strangely he felt nothing, he didn't know if it was his fist being numb or just Fireball not being there at all...

"You're not there!!!" Kaz yelled in frustration.



The flames disspeared, the migit dragon found himself in the air, still scourched, still holding the fire shard, but all of the threats were gone... why?

"I'm falling!!" Kaz said as he realized his wings were burnt again. He searched the ground for a soft spot! "There we go!" he said and tried to land on a certain silver spot.



"OW!" Tobias said as Kaz nearly crushed him.

"Thanks for breaking my fall..." Kaz bowed his head getting up.

"There's something wierd going on, Fireball and the fireball dissapeared..."

"Maybe it was an illousion,"

"Maybe he escaped,"

"Maybe..."

"I don't care, lets get out of here..." Kovu said. They all agreed... and started their walk to the remaints of the space port hoping to find a decent ship.



"This fireshard is hot..." Copper examined it, even she didn't have the nerves to tell her that but she could tell.

"We'll take your word for it" Tobias commented noticing a miniature heat wave forming over it.

"We can crush it, distribute it with crushed crystals, contain it in a bottle and have a power source." Ax Man said,

"I'll consider it," Kaz said keeping it as a Trophy.
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Aug 27, 2001, 04:44 PM
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YaY! Who goes next? (How long has it been since this topic was last revived?)
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Well... a button claiming it had been a tad over a while said I should write now...
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Kaz, you had the 100th post! *cries*



Is it my turn now?
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No more? Tobias is gone, but we can't continue?



I REBELL!!



I scowled, or I thought I did. My fingers were slightly singed, but maybe that'd wear off.

"So where are we going to now?" I asked. I still hadn't figured out how I could do anything, considering I was nothing but dry bones.

"I dunno," Kaz said, turning to Tobias (I'M not cutting him out). Tobias sighed and headed for the controls.

"Why is it always me who gets everything done here?" he grumbled. Kovu emitted something very akin to stifled laughter. I eyed him suspiciously, and tried not to say anything.

"Kaz, your feathers are smoking," Ducky observed. Kaz gulped.

'T-they are?"

"Yes."



Gotta go, or I'd a finished it.
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Oct 1, 2001, 03:29 PM
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Talking Odd.....



This is odd.....

(looks around)

this topic looks familiar.........oh yeah.........I'm back and ready to continue! I shook the beginning of school stress off my back and go my mind back in one piece again! so let's see.....dare i say?

LET THE STORY CONTINUE! (even though you were doing it anyway. thanx.)
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