(Back from Holiday #1)



YES

Yes

Louie fell down into the ground leaving a huge hole and his bones almost crushed.. almost, his vampire powers seemed to have saved him, Coppertop was slowly opening her eyes and she got up. "Thanks for breaking my fall". She said as she tapped the dust of her coat. "Are you ok".

"I think i broke more then your fall". He said, she could see the pain in his eyes, but he didnt want to show it.

"Its ok to scream.. i wont tell anyone". Louie shook his head. "Im alright". And he wanted to get up.. He screamed, louder then he ever did before.

"Aaah, dang it". Coppertop turned pale, Louie's body was bleeding all over, little pieces of rock where sticking in his body, from his neck down to his heels.

He almost managed to get up but he fell down again. "Aah, it hurts to much.. i cant, i cant get up". Coppertop removed his shirt and pulled the rocks out of his fur. "This might hurt a little".

Louie grined his teeth togheter and squeezed his fists and let out some sounds, showing the pain he was in.

Coppertop: "Come on, stop acting like a baby".

Louie's eyes got a red glow and his mouth foamed. "Thats really easy for you to say isnt it?" He said with a deep voice.

"P.. please dont eat me". Coppertop stutterd.

"I dont eat other rabbits OK, im an ok vampire-rabbit, BUT NOW IM MAD".

He ran trough the forest and kicked against trees, loose rocks and kicked up some sand. "I had it with these vampires, theyre gonna die, each and everyone of them, ill make them suffer the way that they let me suffer, theyre second dead will be ten times worse then their first, ill make them wish they never died".

Coppertop sighed and nodded. "You do that vampire".

"It's Louie, call me Louie".

They heard something crawl in the bushes, his face changed into a monstoures face. "Who's there, come out or ill come in and it'll be to late for you".

Something shot at him and barely missed him, he dived for the floor and grabbed his gun, he aimed at the bushes.

"Wait hold your fire." Two man came from the bushes, Jazz and dr. Jones.

Dr. Jones: "Are you hurt girl"?

"He's one of us." Coppertop said. "He wont hurt the good guys". She bowed as she saw king Jazz. "It's ok, im not on duty." Jazz said.

Jazz helped Louie back up. "Nice to meet you, so your on our side hey.. Then you must be the one we need to destroy Kain".



***



Kain and his gang of vampires arrived at the object that fell from the wound earlyer then Jelze and the guys.

"Mother, it is you.. you are about to break free".

It was a huge, glowing heap of slime, with a small figure in the middle, Kain fell on his knees and wrapped his arms around the slime.

"finally we are back togheter again.. but you need strength, ill give you some".

He turned his head 180 degrees, he looked at 3 of his vampires.. they walked towards him, as if they where in some sort of trance.

Kain stepped back and raised his hand.. the vampires followed this, and their hands touched the slime.

"Drink mother.. drink from the undead grail".

The vampires screamed in terror and wanted to break free but their hand was sucked into the slime, their skin rottened off and bright light flew threw the air.

Kain laughed, he saw the beauty in this, as the monster he was.



"Enough of that Kain". A voice said behind him.

Jelze and Rumbo stood behind him, side by side pointing their blasters straight for his heart.

"I've waited for this moment all of my life".

Kove looked into Kain's eyes. "You pig, you embraced my, you brought me into this state.. and im here, i want to see you scream, to satisfy me".

Cobra and Ducky jumped out of another bush and fought of some vampire rabbits. Rumbo shot at the remaining vampire rabbits, untill only Kain was left.

"This ones for you Kove." Jelze said taking a step back.

Kove didnt hesitate, the grin on his face, the satisfaction.. he enjoyed this moment.. pulled the trigger piercing a thick wooden bullet trough Kain's heart.

"DIE KAIN". Some bullets followed untill Kove started to realize.. Kain didnt dissapear. ".. oh my.. what are you".

"Your ticket to the never". Kain replyed.

Ooooo, scary, slay Do continue.

Yah. Freakie (sp?!)

Ooh creeeepy Slayie. Very nifty.

Freaky

`Ducky

Creepy, and scary...

and Creepy...

*applauses*

more slayie!

creeeepee! but but continue ^.~

And there they stood, face to face.

Rumbo, Jelze, Kove, Cobra and Ducky.. Facing the most powerfull person in the known universe. He was able to destroy them all.. and now his mother was about to join him.

But they wouldnt give up without a fight.. without knowing that there's still a chance to stop them. Even if the chance was very small.

Kain looked over the group of rabbits and laughed to annoy them a bit more.

Cobra ran forward and wanted to jump kick Kain in the face, Kain was caught by surprise and Cobra's feet found their way to Kain nose.



Kain: "You broke my nose little girl, now ill have to break you".

Kain's hand closed around Cobra's neck and he squeezed his fist.

Kain: "By the way, you've got the cutest terrified look i have ever seen".

Cobra kicked against kains legs, but it didnt matter.

Kain: "o.. vampire to hey? hehe, well then, lets see how you handle this".

He summoned dark powers within him, to cast a spell.. two yellow lights flowing from within to the outside, hanging there and suddenly struck into cobra's heart.

She gasped for breath as she hung there. Kain must have restored her need for air.

the gang stood their like their feet stuck to the ground, all not believing that Kain could do these kind of tricks. Ducky realized Cobra would suffocate if she couldnt get air soon.

Ducky screamed: "Enough of this!" She pulled the blaster out of Jelze's hands and fired

at Kain, who absorbed the bullet and spitted it out in front of his feet, Cobra fell on the floor. Ducky hurried for Cobra's body but Jelze stopped her by laying his hand on her shoulder. "You should be carefull, he's just making us think that Cobra is dead.

Kain: "Oh yeah i am right?".

He freed the blaster from Ducky's grip and let it move towards him, and then when he gripped it from the air, he aimed it between Cobra's eyes.

"Lets see how undead she really is."

A shot could be heard and the group turned around.

"Who are you?" Kain said to a grey furred rabbit with a red bandana around his head.

"Call me Grath, Kain.. here to stop you".

Kain laughed. "You are here to stop me"?

Grath pointed his finger at Jelze and then at Kovu. "Actually.. they found the protector, the slayer.. whatever you want to call him, and he is here to stop you, im only the guy that guides him, keeps him on the right track and stuff like that, but enough chatting".

Grath pulled out his shotgun and took a shot for Kain's head.

"So thats who you are hey? Well.. dont you think you can stop me by yourself old guy".

Jelze, Kove and Rumbo took a shot and Kain's chest and hit him.

"He doesnt, but the four of us can".

"six". A voice came from behind them, Cobra had woken up and kicked Kain's behind while the four guys and Ducky fired away at him.

Kain dissapeard in a cloud of fog. "Alright.. we did it, we destroyed him".

"Im sorry to spoil your fun.. but we didnt, he went away to regain his strength, and to learn how to use the power of the four corners of the universe".

The group sat down, moments later. Louie,Coppertop, Dr. Jones and Jazz Jackrabbit joined them.

While they where having a nice talk in the forest, Grath called Louie to join him on a little walk, so they could chat up on the happenings.



"You have figured out the strength you posses, i take it".

Louie nodded, "I fell down from out of the athmosphere, and i managed to survive".

Grath: "Still there is allot to learn, i am here to learn those things to you, the arts of magic, fighting and several other things, but first i want to give this to you".

Grath showed Louie and beautyfull gun, gold and silver on its sides mixing togheter, forming one solid gun, with an inscription on its side, 'He who is worthy can deal with Chaos'. "Chaos is the name of this gun, its been there forever, handed over from Slayer to Slayer, if one dies, the other one follows him, untill that one dies.. and so on, and so on".

Grath explained. "But i have already died, it would be hard to kill me again". Louie said.

"Thinking that has costed the lives of the ones that came before you, you are the protector of Carrotus, you have a major responsibility, never think that what you do is easy.. because it isnt, you will find that out.

bravo!! keep goin! great story ^-^ *hugs*

Ya did it slay



keep up the good work

W00t. Very nice, Slayie, brilliant, rux0r, etc etc.



`Ducky

Good to see you all enjoy it, i will post more later, but im a bit busy lately, so ull have to excuse me for not posting to much.





RAGE OF EVIL LIVES !!!!

Ya dont have to rush this, cuz it has to be the same quality as the rest



Btw: RAGE OF EVIL DEFENITELY LIVES, check my story for the origin of Rage of Evil

The group decided to take some rest, they put up some sort of a base camp in the forest near a lake. They slept on soft grass, Cobra was the last to close her eyes and take a trip to dreamland.

They had taken Kain's mother, who was still trapped in the thick slime with them, it stood in the middle of where the gang was sleeping and started to glow and make a soft humming sound.. but noone woke up, they where very tired from the happenings. the humming became a little louder and the slime started to crack. light came from it, the light jumped and flashed trough the enviroment and woke up Dr. Jones.

"Holy cow". Jones stood there with his mouth hanging half open from amazement. "We're in trouble." He sad, his face had a worried look.

The slime flew over the floor into the lake to dissapear and a creature more horrible then anything he ever saw before was exposed. All black with great fangs and claws, three eyes in the front of her head, and all three of them stared at Jones who didnt move and inch.

"Easy, pretty girl". Dr Jones tried to calm the creature that represented Darkness. But she started to scream and run for him.

The other slowly started to wake up from their sleep and Rumbo rubbed the sleep from his eyes, he saw the Jones was chased by the creature.

He dived for Jones's sleeping place and took the gun.

"Jones, catch this". Jones jumped and catched his gun, within his jump he turned around and fired away at the creature.

Rumbo ran towards Jones. "Ok lets both shoot at it and see how much she can take". Jones and rumbo pulled their trigger, but Rumbo's was empty, and Jones was shooting with his last bullets. The monster rised her claw and dropped it over Jones. Rumbo hit her in the stumach with the other side of his gun.

The monsters stumach grabbed the gun and swallowed it.

"Woah darn". the monster changed her direction and she picked up Rumbo.

'Bam, Bam'. Two bullets found the way into her elbow.

Jelze hold his smoking gun out in front, the moonlight lightened his diabolical face. Kove jumped high in the air and made some sort of a stop in mid air.

Jelze threw his blaster at Kove and Kove now had two blaster.

Kove fired away at the monster while Jelze ran at her.

"NOW KOVE". Jelze yelled at him, Kove shot the Darkness trough the head and Jelze's hand crushed her right trough the stumach.

Cobra now run for the creature, she took her spikenecklace of her neck and turned it inside out with the spikes turned to the inside and she put it around her opponents neck.

Grath yelled: " FINISH HER GUYS".

Ducky and Jazz hold their guns against eachother and they casted a spell. When they fired, their beams flowed over inside eachother and now formed one powerfull beam. It hit Darkness right in the heart and she was very weak.



Darkness made a counterstrike and clapped in her hands. The ground under the gangs feet started shaking and the slime came back from out of the river.

It crawled in the trees, the group shot at it with no effect.

The slime fell over Kove and Rumbo and their puppils turned inward.

Darkness yelled something in a language unknown.

Kove and rumbo turned to the group and aimed their guns at them, since Rumbo's gun was empty he had to fight, and he gave Ducky a smack on the back of her head, Coppertop jumpedkicked Rumbo and Jazz ran at Rumbo to.

"STOP" Rumbo yelled and he froze Jazz in time.

Coppertop took advantage of this, Rumbo's attention was with Jazz and she wrapped one of her arms around his neck, she had a firm grip on him and Rumbo couldnt move anymore.



Meanwhile Jelze and dr Jonees had another problem.

Kove was firing away at them and they couldnt fire back. So they jumped and dodged as good as they could do.

Slayer wrapped his hand around his icey gun 'Chaos'.

"Lets see what you can do." he said and he kissed the side of his gun.

He fired at darkness and the bullets flew to find the deepest parts of her body.

when they had burried themselves deep within Darkness, they exploded with an incredible strength. Darkness fell over, parts of her body lay everywhere and Kove and Rumbo snapped out of their trance.

Rumbo threw Coppertop over his shoulder. "Its you? what happend?"

something rose up from out of The body part of Darkness and headed deep into the forest.

"You where possesed, i had to calm you down". Coppertop explained.

Slayer: "She isnt dead yet is she"?

Grath came joined the group and clapped his hands.

"Nice fight guys, and as an answer to your question Slayer, if evil was destroyed, would you still be here?"

"What.. what do you mean?"

Added a bit of action

Rather nice, Slay. Very.

`Ducky

yay!! go on

Good chap. Slay

The ghost that had left the body of Kain’s mother was flying trough the forest untill it reached a small house, it flew trough the walls and noticed a girl laying in her bed peacefully.

‘That body is mine’ Darkness thought.

“Wake up cutie”. The girl opened her pretty eyes and looked at the ghost in front of her bed.

“Hi Tyffanie, your body now belongs to me, sweet dreams pretty girl”.

Tyffanie screamed as loud as she could and the ghost entered her body trough her mouth.

Tyfannie jumped right up but something went wrong when the Darkness entered her body.





Louie couldnt fell asleep anymore.

He pulled his army boots out. His choice of clothes was a very interesting one.

Army boots, baggy trunks and a hawaiian style shirt, orange with yellow sunflowers.

He looked around him to see if everyone was sleeping and pulled a small package of cigarrettes from a pocket in his shirt. He checked on his friends again and lighted one of the cigarettes.

‘You guys dont need to know that i smoke’. He thought to himself.

He sighed and sat down at the lake near them. Louie looked over the water.

‘i cant believe this, me.. the Slayer, why me?’ “Why me”? He said out loud.

He kicked in the water with his bare feet and took another puff of his cigaret.

Louie then died the cigaret and took the package out of his pocket. He threw it all in the water.

“Im a Slayer and this isnt good for my health. Slayie’s quitting”. His mouth had almost dryed out and he spitted in the soft grass, after that he splashed some of the cold water out of the lake in his face and drank some. Then he heard a twig snap and pulled his gun in the blink of an eye he was facing a rabbit that came up behind him. “Hold your breath, i come in peace”. The tall black furred rabbit said, he wore black clothes and had a cigaret in the corner of his mouth.

“Want one?” He asked.

“No, i just quitted”. Louie replyed looking at the angry eyes of the rabbit, he noticed something else to.. his wrists where cut.

“So your the Slayer hmm? Mighty interesting, you look like someone i could trust, the names Jack, Jack Cole, others call me Psycho, Because i am crazy. You got it in you to kill Kain, and you’ll probably can take on his mommy to, but remember.. evil doesnt die. It’s something that will keep coming back forever. You should destroy Kain in a struggle of the minds and spirits, your hate towards him is great, but dont let it overwhelm you, you should act with a clear mind. Every false step could be your last Slayer. Soon...” Jack stopped and turned around.

Louie looked after him: “I thought someone else was training me already”.

Jack: “Im not here to train you.. im here to help. I will return to check on you later, dont bother to look for me, because you cant follow me where im going”. After saying this Jack cole dissapeard behind a tree and when Louie looked behind it.. he didnt see a thing.

“Wow.. i wont be able to sleep anymore, argh”.

Louie felt an incredible pain in his stumach... “Food..gotta have...Blood.”

A worthy update, Slay. Do continue, you know i hate unfinished stories

well thank you jelze



and i wasnt planning on leaving this one unfinished

Hey hey. Sorry I haven't replied in a while, its cause of me with Renegade and Lonely Voyager, plus my lack of free time Ne ways this story is too good for words. I'm now waiting for the next chapter after reading this so far.



Keep writing. Btw check out your p.messages Slay.



Rumbo

I guess Louie neds blood



Cool story Louie

Louie rushed trough several fields that where once filled with fruit and vegetables.

But all that remains now are brown leaves and bits of rotting fruit.

A couple of small creeks with very little water in them where running trough the fields.

An old scarecrow stood in the field, looking out over what was left of his territory.

Just a piece of cotton that had lost its purpose, birds where pecking his chest open and stealing the hay, stealing his body. They flew away in fear when they saw Louie coming closer.

He slowed down and stopped a few inches away from a creek, he fell down on his knees.

“Help me” his soft low voice was only heard by the wind and he looked around trough his half-closed eyes to see if there was anything or anyone to help him.

There he saw something to the left of him, an old farm, and a young girl on a swing just about 12 feet away from the farm. She was singing a song, full of innocence.

Louie crawled towards her, lucky enough for him, she didnt notice a thing.

He could feel his heart beat in his troath as sweat dripped down his neck and the cold howling wind send a shiver down his spine. Suddenly out of nowhere Louie jumped for the young girl and a small yell could be heard, just before she passed out. Louie drank and as he did this two people came out of the farm, one male rabbit was holding a shotgun and a female rabbit. Both with tears in their eyes when they saw the little girl, their daughter.

“ You demon, how could you have done this, son of Kain.” The father yelled as he loaded his shotgun and aimed it at Louie’s face.

The mother cryed out loud and hold the dead body of her daughter against his chest.

Louie didnt seem to be the person he used to be.

Instead of talking, he growled, at the man with the shotgun who pulled the trigger, shooting Louie to defend himself. The bullet entered Louie’s head and he fell down.

The man then fired several other shots at him, to be sure he was really dead and then walked to his daughter. He lay an arm around his wife and cryed.

‘Ugh.’ Louie made a soft sound and crawled up, unknown to the two people.

He pulled out his chaos gun and aimed it at the father, he pulled the trigger and the bullet shot out, but it stopped in front of the fathers head and fell down to the ground.

The man turned around and saw Louie was still alive. “Oh my god, the demon has arised.”

His wife flee into the house, Louie ran into the fields back in the direction of the forest.

But in the middle of the field, he was standing in front of Cobra and Coppertop.

“We’ve seen everything happend. Your a monster.” Cobra slapped him in the face....

Thats so sad, Slayie

Nice, though..

`Ducky

Nice twist ya amde in ya story

Slayer looked up, he didnt know what to say, what he did was terrible and he now started to realize it. "Oh my god.. what did i do."

He fell down to the ground and tried to forget everything, his whole main purpose.

He could see Psycho walking trough the field and got up. "There he is again."

Grath looked in the field and saw Psycho: "Attack him, kill him."

Rumbo pulled his blaster and aimed at Psycho's head, slayer jump-kicked the gun out of Rumbo's hand. "Nobody kills him, why do you want him dead?"

Kove: "I dont see anybody."

When Slayer and Rumbo looked again, Psycho was gone.

Slayer aimed his blaster at Grath: "Who are you for real?"

Grath started to sweat. "You know who i am, im here to train you."

Jelze pointed his gun for grath's heart. "I dont believe u either, why didnt u fight against kain hmm"? Grath didnt feel to comftrable with this.

"Come on guys, you dont think i am on his side right?"

Kove growled in his direction and pushed his gun in Grath's face.

Grath dodged and grabbed the guys guns out of there hands with a very fast movement. "Fools."

His skin seemed to be burning away to make place for another skin.

"Jonathan, you."

"Hello old friend." He threw a blaster at Slayer, slayer catched it.

"I challenge you to a duel Louie or should i call you by your new name, Monsigneur Cannibal, i saw you enjoying the flesh of that little girl, how did she taste? As sweet as she looked."

"As bitter as you tears are going to be when you are kissing satan's feet." Slayer replyed with a emotionless voice and a develish grin on his face.

"If i am going to ****old friend, i am going to take you with me."

Jonathan yelled his war cry, hundreds of vampires came running towards them.

"Oh my god, there are to many. What can we do?"

Suddenly a bright light was shining over the battlefield the blinded the sight of all the vampires. One by one the vampires dissapeard.



Jelze, Rumbo and Kove opened their eyes.

Rumbo: "A possible time rip... no.. i dont think so."

They heard devilish laughter and quickly turned around.

Kove spitted on the floor. "The laughter is everywhere, its like this whole place is laughing at us. A big room with walls of flesh, living flesh.

A faul smell of dead and urine hang in the room, the smell of the grave.

Laughters filled the room again. "Come out and fight like a man."

A young girl, named tyffany.... stepped out of the walls.

"Maybe not like a man, even better, fight me.. little boys.



Slayer opened his eyes and looked around him, he was surrounded by sand and a big wooden board on top of him. 'humph'.

He kicked and pushed and after several minutes the hard wooden material gave away and he was free. "OH GOD."

His hands went to his head and he grabbed some of his fur.

He fell down on the floor gasping for breath.

"Fool, you cant suffocate, you already dead..you can thank me for that."

Then Slayer saw something he couldnt believe, he rubbed his eyes to see if it was true. The little girl he killed was swinging in a swing, between the dark graves.

"Hello sir, are you the person that has killed me?"

Slayed shook his head. "Nooo, this cant be true.. please forgive me".

She stopped swining and got out of the swing with a big grin on her face, the little girl walked towards Slayer and hugged his big, strong leg.

Slayer fell on his knees and hugged her back.

Then he fell two teeth sinking deep in his neck.

He kicked the girl away and when he rubbed his eyes again, she was gone.

"Oh no.. this is ****again." He looked at the place where the girl had been standing minutes before and he walked back slowly, then he bumped into something...someone... Kain...

Kewlness!!!

Nice

Amazing, Slay

I wish I could writ like that.

`Ducky

Long time no see. But it's ruxor!

OiY! FIGHT LIKE A WOMAN YOU FOOL! hehee e ee

yay.. keep writin ^-^ gweat stowy

lol, Gummy

More, Slayie, or I'll diiee. . .

Great parts, slay. Keep it up!

OMG? YES? yah.. why not? Its been a while. (2 years and a month)

I wonder if anyone remembers this.

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He heard a loud laughter, Kain had vanished.

"Im right here hero."

SlaYo looked at the cabin, the voice came from there. He walked closer to it and reached for his gun.

"Darn, i lost it." His mouth was dry and he was really tired, he fell over a rock.
When he looked back up he saw Rumbo, Jelze and Kove fighting a beautyfull young rabbit.

"What is going on in here?" He searched for the cabin but couldnt find it anywhere. The laughter in his head continued.
He scratched his head.

"Stop it." Slayer shouted. "Stop laughing, come out here and fight me."

He felt a hand on his shoulder and jumped up. Cobra was standing in front of him, she reached out her arms and he held her close.

The fighting between Rumbo, Jelze, Kove and Tyffanie went on, but he didnt care. He was happy to have found some peace in
Cobra's arms. Dr. Jones, king Jazz, Coppertop and Garth came running to the scene as the pale moonlight shined down on them.

Jack Cole was leaning against a tree smoking a cigarette. "Tyffanie." He said.

Tyfannie looked in Jack's face. Rumbo and Jelze took advantage of this and shot Tyffanie straight trough the heart.
She slowly sanked down to the ground and looked in Jack's face.

"Bye dear." Jack said as he threw his cigaret away.

Slayer approached Jack. "Great timing pal, now, who are you?"

Jack sat down with his back against the tree as the group gathered around to listen to what he had to tell.

"I was send here by Carrotus, the person you worship, to protect you, he wants you all to know that he is proud of you."

"We should burry her." Ducky said as she looked over at Tyffanie's body.

SlaYer felt a great pain in his chest, and suddenly the enviroment changed.

(-)

He walked trough a large hallway, he could see his friends imprisoned in small cages.

"Come out and play coward, i lost my patience." Slayer shouted.

"Join us SlaYer, join us, join us." he heard troughout the hallway, thousands of voices.

"I wont ever join you Kain."

Kain showed up at the end of the hallway holding Cobra in his hands, he pushed her on the floor.

"Are you sure Slay? Would you want this pretty girl to die because of your stupidity? You could live like a king."

Slayer walked over to Cobra.

"I dont think so." Kain said as he showed his fangs, a barrier of some sort of energy blocked Slayer's path, Kain moved his mouth
closer to Cobra's neck.

"Join me, or you pretty little friend will die Slayer." Kain said, with a sarcastic grin on his face.

W00t?

This seems to be a very old story, but it looks to still be good.

Is there still an opening? 'Cuz I'd like to join.

Ooh, you actually continued ... I'd given up on it.
This will probably be the first story (besides my own) that i'm in that actually gets finished.


Dark ...

A bit confusing and lacking detail. I'll reread everything.

Its a bit hard to write in a language different from your own Kaz.
Ill try my best on the next chapter. (last chapter sorry Jack Flash)

Writing in Dutch is much easyer for me, since i can use many more different words to describe scenery and stuff. My English isnt perfect (far from it)