Jun 23, 2001, 10:24 AM | |
Talec must be blind, for him not to be able to open his eyes ever again. Oh wait, blind people are able to open their eyes, though. Hmmm.... ALl right, he lost them. Either that or it's just a fake. Either THAT or I caught Rumbo in a mistake. (Not that likely, I know)
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Jun 24, 2001, 10:54 PM | |
Um yeah the thing with the opening eyes, he hasn't opened his eyes since he is no longer the same person. You'll see....(not as if I'm just making this up to go over my mistake
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Jun 24, 2001, 11:22 PM | |
Splash took Talec to a small cave that sheltere them partially from the thick fog and the cold. The wind didn't seem as cool as it used to be. 'So, Talec...' Splash started, 'what's it..umm....like to be a Guardian of...time?' 'It was okay...' Talec started, 'but every rabbit that has been one will tell you the same thing...' 'Whats that?' 'It ruins your life.' Splash was silent. He didn't really have much to say on the matter. 'Can I tell you something, Splash?' 'Yeah...sure...what is it?' 'When I was very little I felt something inside me, like an aura placed within my body...' 'Yeah?' '...When I became almost the age of a teenager my life changed, for TIME came to me and told me of this inner aura, the powers of TIME he had held within me...' 'He gave you them?' 'Yes.' 'Why you? Not being rude or anything...' 'None taken. I do not really know. He said I had the strength to fight Nebula. That's what all Guardians do...' 'So who is the Guardian now?' 'Jelze Goldrabbit.' 'Oh yeah I heard of him. He's a time traveller from the future, right?' 'How do you know that?' 'I'm very knowledgeable.' 'I see.' Talec got up and looked up at the dreary, red sky. 'Awful isn't it?' Splash commented. '...' 'So did you ever meet Nebula?' 'No...not when I was a Guardian anyway. All I did was stop his minions and other TIME travellers who disobeyed the system.' 'Wasn't Blade one of them?' '...Yes...how do you...?' 'Like I said, knowledgeable.' 'You must have read up on that adventure. Those were the days...' 'Not like today, huh?' 'No....not at all...' 'Hey Splash who you got there?' Talec turned round. It was a new voice in the cave. He turned and saw a large red bird standing before him. It was the same size as him and it carried a normal blaster. 'Never seen you before!' the bird said. 'Kaz! Be nice!' 'Oh yeah...sorry...um....' 'Talec...um...normal rabbit...' The two shook paws and wings ![]() 'So what you doing here, Talec?' 'I don't know...I just came here...' 'Strange...' 'Hey listen!' Splash said, 'You want to help us save this planet?' Talec raised an eyebrow, 'How are you going to..?' 'We're joining a resistance in the North. It doesn't have a name but we know it's growing....' 'Resistance...up NORTH?' 'Yes...why do you know it?' 'Yes I was there with them! Do you know how to get there?' 'I usually fly and so does Kaz since hes a bird.' 'Yup!' Kaz said happily. 'So is there any way for me to...' 'I'll carry ya!' 'Don't worry!' Splash said, 'Kaz can carry lots of things. You'll be safe.' Talec remembered that he could just easily teleport there with his powers. But he realised that from his death he no longer had them. 'You OK?' 'Huh?' 'You seemed confused, Talec.' 'Oh...no...I'm fine really.' '...Okay man, hold on!' Kaz grabbed Talec around the waist and began flying upwards to see if he could withstand the weight. 'Yes!' Kaz said, 'You're light enough!' Splash turned on his rocket pack and said 'Lets go, gang!' They flew off into the distance. They would arrive at the resistance base early next day.
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Jun 24, 2001, 11:39 PM | |
Hey does anyone hear wanna help me with something. Im gonna create my own forum thing for Rumbo and his adventures. Does anyone wanna help me do this and does anyone want to write about Rumbo in your own stories or even draw Rumbo? If so reply immediately as I want some people to help me!!!!!!!
Rumbo (please help me on this!)
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Jun 26, 2001, 11:01 PM | |
Hey all you people who wanna write stories and draw for us go to the miscellaneous section. Ive done up something there where I want you to reply with what you are willing to do for us.
thanks. more of the story coming soon ![]() Rumbo
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Jun 27, 2001, 11:58 PM | |
Lori lay in a small chamber somewhere in TIME central, secretly kept there under Nebula's control. Nebula was plotting behind Garagnt's back... Gargant took Rumbo to a special part of TIME's world. It was known as... 'The visionary,' Gargant said to Rumbo, 'ever heard of it?' '...Once...something about reliving the past...' 'Without actually being there.' 'Why have you taken me...' 'I am going to show you something...' Gargant then suddenly closed his eyes and held out his hands to a large mirror that was placed in the centre of the visionary. As his hands touched the glass his fingertips went through it like it was water. 'What the...?' Rumbo said as Gargant began moving into it. 'Follow me, Rumbo.' '...Where is it going?' '...To your past...something needs to be shown to you.' Gargant and Rumbo went through the 'looking' glass. They ended up in a run down village which Rumbo used to call home... 'My village?' 'Yes, well after your first home...' 'My first home?' 'Rumbo, you don't remember anything about a castle do you?' 'A castle?' 'Yes....you see...your mother....' '...Is my mother a rabbit? Pure?' 'Yes both of these.' 'Is she still alive?' 'Indeed she is. You have met her many a time.' 'WHAT?' -Okay readers I am going to do something bizarre thats gonna put everything into perspective. It might sound a little odd but its gonna change the story for the better.- 'Your mother....' Suddenly the village morphed and changed into a large white castle, one that Rumbo remembered visiting many times before in the past... 'Carrotus Castle....home of....?' 'The Queen of Carrotus....' 'You mean...?' 'Yes...she is your mother....' 'Which makes Eva my sister?' 'Half sister....not the same father...' 'But why don't I remember this?' 'At a young age you lived at the castle...a very young age. But everyone realised that, since you were half rabbit and half owning the powers of TIME, you were dangerous. You were sent away to that village where they said you would continue living. You were only 2 at the time so you would not have known a thing....' 'That means that Lori is....?' 'Family...along with Jazz, Spaz...they are all part of your own family...' 'I don't....why didn't anyone ever tell me?' 'Nobody knows...not even the Queen...' 'Not even Eva?' 'Nobody remembers. When you lived at the castle you were not given a name, only a nickname....Hell's Angel...' 'Why?' 'You had unimaginable powers and you were said to be such a handsome young rabbit.' '...rumbo....' another voice spoke. Rumbo turned round and saw an incarnation of TIME standing before him. 'TIME?' 'The side of Nebula within you is that Hell's Angel...the one with those powers...' 'But wait a second....I have the powers of TIME...' '..and the powers of Nebula...' 'What?' 'Rumbo...you were banished from the castle because of your Nebula powers...or Gargant's powers to be more exact.' 'Then how do I have TIME's powers as well?' 'I prophesised you to be the next Guardian of TIME. I had to give you the powers...' 'You mean you lied?' '...what?' 'You told me I was born with TIME's powers, you lied to me. You never said about me owning both...' 'We never thought the powers of Nebula would come back.' Gargant said, 'Since you moved you forgot about them and they became too deep. Now they have been unleashed...' 'You LIED TO ME!' '..rumbo?' '....STAY AWAY FROM ME....YOU HAVE TO BE LYING! THIS ISN'T HAPPENING TO ME!' 'Rumbo...' 'SHUT UP! JUST, SHUT UP. YOU'RE NOT MY FATHER. MY FATHER NEVER LIED TO ME. I WASN'T BORN IN CARROTUS. I'VE ALWAYS BEEN ME, RUMBO RABBIT. HELL'S ANGEL DOESN'T EXIST....' 'Then who fought Blade in the forest, Rumbo?' '...' 'You remember when you changed...' 'THIS CAN'T BE....' '...it is rumbo...we never told you because we knew it would hurt you...now you deserve to know...' 'AND I DIDN'T BEFORE?' 'Rumbo please....' 'OH SHUT UP...YOU'RE WORKING FOR NEBULA ANYWAY! WHAT IS HAPPENING TO ME? WHY IS THIS MY LIFE? WHY COULDN'T I JUSE BE A FARMER LIKE I WANTED TO BE?' '...rumbo please....stop this...' 'NO! I WON'T! I NEVER WANTED TO BE A GUARDIAN. I HATED IT! EVERY MINUTE. MY WHOLE LIFE IS NOW FULL OF HATE. I'VE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH LORI, DIED TWICE, FOUGHT NEBULA AND NOW...' 'You have to fight him again....' 'WHY SHOULD I?' '...because you're the only one who can....' '...I DON'T BELIEVE THAT! IF YOU'RE SO DESPERATE TO STOP HIM THEN WHY DON'T YOU DO IT!' 'We can't...you are the only one...' 'WELL THERE'S ONE DIFFERENCE ISN'T THERE? I DONT GIVE A ****! I DON'T CARE IF THIS WORLD BURNS IN THE DEVIL'S WORLD! I'D RATHER SEE IT DIE THEN SAVE IT!' '..rumbo you don't mean that....' 'DON'T I? WE'LL SEE!' Rumbo then began to run, run from Gargant and TIME and run throuhg a TIME warp into the midst of TIME.... 'rumbo...stop!' 'Rumbo!' Rumbo's eyes were full of tears. He hated this. He hated himself and he hated what was happening to him. He wanted to die....he couldn't cope...
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Jun 28, 2001, 12:12 AM | |
Rumbo kept running. Not knowing where to...he just ran....
He stumbled and fell, his cheeks red and his heart burning with sheer hate. 'Rumbo Rabbit? Can you hear me?' '...Leave me alone!' He looked round. Nobody there. 'You can't see me, I am inside you...' 'Are you...?' 'Hell's Angel, yes...' '...Do you really exist?' 'All I can tell you is that I am a part of you. What Gargant and TIME said is true. I remember that past, for I used to be a great part of you as a young child...' '...It can't be true....can it?' 'You and I never knew of each other's existence. I lived when you were at the castle, your personality came along when you went to live in that village...' '...' 'You became the independant person you are now...who still cares about other people...you are Rumbo Rabbit...' 'Then who are you? What happened when we changed?' 'When you stabbed yourself you killed both me and Nebula. I don't blame you for that since you never knew I was there. Me and a part of Nebula fused, still inside you, keeping me alive...I am now an incarnation, a red rabbit...the same colour of Nebula's incarnation...' 'Can you get out of me?' 'I am trying to find that power...' 'So I was destined by fate to be a Guardian of TIME, yet by sheer coincidence I also had the powers of my father since he was Gargant...' 'Yes...I hav the powers of Gargant, you own the powers that TIME gave to you...' 'After my personality changed?' 'Exactly....explaining why we both have different powers...' '...' 'Rumbo...I know this is hard. At any time we could change, I didn't plan that in the forest. It just happened...' '...So Lori...the rabbit I love is part of my family?' 'Yes...I can only remember the Queen and Eva though...' 'You remember?' 'I was there you know, as a blue rabbit however...' Rumbo sat down. He began breathing in heavier to try and stay calm. 'Lori...' he saidto himself. Then he remembered, 'Where is she? I only fought a robotic version...' 'Gargant must know...' 'She has gone!' It was Gargant along with TIME, who had gone after Rumbo. '..rumbo...we are...' 'Save it there's no time. Lori...she's back in TIME central?' 'The robotic version was...' 'No...she's somewhere else in TIME Central...Nebula must have her...' 'That swine! He must know I am not really on his side!' 'Gargant...I mean father...do you really think I am the only one to stop him?' 'Yes of course, why?' 'Because I am not the ONLY one!' Rumbo then began running again, this time towards TIME Central... 'What does he mean?' Gargant asked. '...he means he believes us...'
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Jun 28, 2001, 11:19 PM | |
Rumbo, TIME and Gargant headed for TIME central. In the centre of the city was one rabbit, standing alone.... Rumbo went into the city first and saw the rabbit... 'It...can't be....' The alone rabbit within the city stood with a clear independant aura. It wielded a sword in its right hand, holding it like a ninjas' blade. 'We meet again, Rumbo Rabbit...' '....Blaze....' TIME and Gargant stopped. They saw the robotic Rumbo standing, facing the real Rumbo. 'You didn't think I would still be alive again...did you?' 'Where's Lori?' 'She is in safe hands...' 'Who created you again? Blade?' 'Blade is a useless rabbit. He left me in the midst of TIME to rot in my metallic flesh.' 'Then how come...' 'I managed to find a way out and now I am here for revenge...' 'Why? The past is...' 'The past is my rememberence of my defeat. I want a rematch...' TIME spoke, '...rumbo...we will find Lori. If you must fight him...' Rumbo suddenly closed his eyes with pain. '...brother....it is my turn to fight....' '....hell's angel?' '......please....i want to help....my time to arise has once been brought to me...' 'you'll kill yourself....and me?' '...nay...we are both separate people. if I die then you live prosper....' '...Angel....' '...once I am gone just take care of your family, okay?' '...okay.' Rumbo began to change again. His feet began turning red. The reddness crawled up his legs towards his body, which became white and revealled that mark down his side. Before the reddness had reached his mouth, Rumbo said, '..Angel...I will free you one day...' Angel only replied once the transformation was complete: '...and I will free you too...from all of this...' -LET BATTLE COMMENCE- Hell's Angel Vs Blaze 'We haven't met before.' Blaze said 'And this will be the last..' Angel replied. 'Too true, my friend.' Angel created a sword in both his hands. Blaze charged at him. Both raised their swords and struck. Their swords clanged loudly and partially vibrated. 'What are you?' Blaze said as he tried to puch Angel down to the ground. 'Like you...not real...' Angel replied, managing to push Blaze up into the air. Blaze fell to the ground with a loud THUD. 'You think it is that easy?' Blaze said 'Not in the slightest.' 'You don't have to fight alone you know...' 'What the...' Angel started, 'Jelze?' Enter Jelze Goldrabbit 'You remember my name I see, Hell's Angel...' Jelze said, who had warped in after feeling that Rumbo was alive. He had seen the change and heard what they were saying to each other. 'How do you know...?' 'I heard what you two talked about...I understand...' 'You're a strange rabbit for understanding all this.' Angel replied. 'I see...' Blade started, 'two against one. Maybe the odds are becoming unfair...' 'Too true...' Jelze said, drawing out his blaster. 'Maybe not, Blaze...' Enter Blade 'YOU?' Blaze shouted 'I am your creator....forget the past....the future is more important...' 'Nobody knos the future...' Jelze said 'Yes but it is created from the present, OUR PRESENT!' The fight split into two fights: Jelze Vs Blade Angel Vs Blaze 'ARGH!' Jelze shouted as he began firing at Blade. Blade rolled out the way and deflected some of them with his sword. 'You think it is that easy, do you?' Blade said Blaze and Angel looked at him. 'Bloomin heck you guys sound the same!' Angel said. Angel and Blaze struck swords again....neither allowing a chance for them to hit each other. Jelze then took out a sword he had kept hidden on his back, 'I was getting tired of old fashioned gunfights.' he said 'So you wisely choose old fashioned sword fights, do you?' Blade said. 'So do you...' 'Oh yeah....' Jelze ran at Blade and they struck their swords around chect height. 'So you're the new Guardian of TIME are you?' 'I am now...' 'You know that three Guardians have fought me in my lifetime. None have ever defeated me for good.' 'Yes but they have all defeated you, one way or another.' 'Maybe you will be an exception, Jelze.' Blade kicked at Jelze and he flew backwards and hit the ground hard. Jelze dropped his sword on impact. Blaze saw the mark down Angel's side as they clanged swords at leg level. 'The mark...I remember such a thing...the mark of creation...' 'Yes...I was created to kill rabbits like you!' 'You say I am a rabbit now?' Blaze jumped up in the air and kicked Angel in the stomach. Angel flew back, also dropping hi sword like Jelze. Blaze ran at Angel... Blade ran at Jelze... 'STOP!!!!!!!!!!!' Blade and Blaze suddenly stopped, frozen in one position... '...the effect will not last for long...get up!' It was TIME, he had frozen Blade and Blaze for a few seconds....he was with Gargant who held Lori. She was unconscious... 'Let us go to Carrotus...' Gargant said, '..we must form the resistance together...' 'Is Lori okay?' Jelze asked. 'She is still alive, don't worry.' 'Let us hurry, the effect is beginning to wear off.' 'Just one last thing!' Angel said as he began creating something around both Blade and Blaze's hands. He placed handcuffs on them and replaced their swords with bananas. 'That'll hold them for a while...' 'If anyone said you didn't have any humour Hell's Angel then they were wrong!' Jelze said... The foursome left the rabbit and the robot, who would both feel stupid once they awoke form their frozen position...
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Jun 29, 2001, 05:32 PM | |
CT, if I use your line I guess it is only fair you use mine.
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Jul 1, 2001, 01:48 AM | |
Sure defalcon, especially since your story you just started sounds kewl.
MMMM another TIME traveller eh? My hands are getting full ![]() Rumbo
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Jul 1, 2001, 10:01 PM | |
‘Sortec, Laman, Vortec, Karman…’
TIME, Gargant, Rumbo and Jelze went back to Carrotus, New Carrotus.... 'Jesus this is complicated.' Jelze stated. 'I know...I know...' 'Rumbo are you okay?' '...Not really...I feel kinda weak.' 'Sorry man.' Hell's Angel said within his mind. Jelze was able to hear him. 'That guy's impressive, creating swords and stuff...' 'Yeah...he's the rabbit I was long ago...' They travelled to the North of Carrotus, outside the forest. At the same time something else approached... The whole of the resistance stood outside the forest as Splash and Kaz, who was carrying Talec, approached and landed safely outside the forest. 'Wow!' Black Sheep said 'Talec! You're alive!' Nobara said, running over and hugging him. Talec blushed. 'Erm, yeah but I can't help you as much as before...my powers have been lost...' 'Did you die from the explosion?' Dr Jones asked. 'Yes...' 'What about Rumbo?' Black Sheep asked. 'HE'S VERY MUCH ALIVE!' Everyone turned and saw Rumbo Renegade Rabbit standing side by side with Jelze Goldrabbit, who stood next to TIME and Gargant... 'RUMBO!' Talec said. 'Good to see you made it mate!' 'But my powers...' 'I heard Talec...don't worry I'm back and this time nothing's gonna stop me....I'm sorry everyone...' 'For what?' Dr Jones asked. 'Thinking I was the best, now I realise that I'm like the rest of you.' 'Hey!' Black Sheep said. 'Not like that, I mean that we're all individuals, doing our bit. Listen things are gonna sound complicated but I need us all to go to Carrotus Castle, to save Jazz who's been imprisoned there.' 'Not again!' Dr Jones said. 'Hehe, this time it's not the Queen...' 'Whos the purple rabbit and that handsome rabbit?' Kaz asked. 'I'm Gargant...' he said, 'and this is basically TIME, an incarnation.' 'TIME...' Talec said, 'I am a slave to you no longer...' 'Hehe' TIME said, 'I am afraid the chat must now end. Rumbo has something he must do and we must must go with him.' 'For he is our leader?' Splash said. '....Erm...' Nobara said, 'WHY NOT?' 'Me?' Rumbo said, 'I can't...' 'You already are!' Kaz said, 'Come on...' 'HEY WAIT UP!' Rumbo remembered the voice. That sweet subtle voice... 'Lori...' Rumbo looked over to her, who had now awoken from Gargant's grasp. None of them knew it was her laying in Gargant's arms. 'Rumbo!' she said, running over to him and giving him such a big hug. 'Lori!' he said back, both their ears completely red. 'You saved my life, Rumbo! Thank you...' Rumbo suddenly remembered who Lori really was, his cousin....he felt like crying...yet he knew it was for the best... 'Let's go, mac!' Hell's Angel said inside his head. Lori heard it... 'What the...' she said. 'You'll find out soon enough!' Rumbo replied, 'Come on everyone!' The resistance left for Carrotus Castle, about three miles South...
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Jul 1, 2001, 10:11 PM | |
I'm the first to like it and say so!
(Unless someone posted while I was reading...) |
Jul 1, 2001, 10:27 PM | |
They all reached Carrotus Castle in under three hours. All were knackered, yet the ones who could fight were up the front. Dr Jones cuddled Lori who was still weak, Jelze and Talec stood together and behind the leader, Rumbo Rabbit...
Rumbo gave th signal to stop as they reached the gates. 'Beware, Rumbo,' Gargant said, 'this is not the same place you went to last time...' A loudspeaker was attached to the gate. Suddenly somebody spoke through it, 'Who is it?' 'Rumbo Rabbit, let us in at once!' 'That voice...' Lori said 'hehehehe' the voice croaked, 'you think I'm gonna let people like you in?' 'Rumbo!' Lori said, 'It's Devon!' 'What the...' Dr Jones said 'FIGHT ME, RABBIT MORTALS!' Devon said as he suddenly appeared out of the ground in front of the gate... -Let Battle Commence- Rumbo, Jelze and Dr Jones Vs Devon 'I can't fight,' Talec said, 'I'll sit out.' 'Lets nail him!' Jelze said. 'Let me take him,' Angel said inside Rumbo's head. 'Why?' Rumbo asked. Everyone else stared at him blankly. 'Because...just let me, please?' 'Alright,' Rumbo said, allowing his body to change into Hell's Angels. 'Oh no not again!' Nobara said. 'It's okay!' Jelze said, 'This guy is gonna help us, trust me.' 'Who is that?' Talec said. 'The Rumbo you never knew,' Angel said to him, 'Jelze stand together with Dr J. I'm nailing this sucker.' Angel created large metal gloved on his paws and ran at Devon. Devon jumped and tried firing his ice gun. He missed as Angel rolled to one side. He turned round and hit at Devon, this time getting his leg. 'Argh!' Devon said, falling to the floor. Angel then created a blade in his hand, the blade of a sword... 'WAIT!!!!!!!!!' came a loud voice from behind Angel and beyone the gates. The gates suddenly opened as from beyond the gates somebody approached..it was Blade 'What the...' Angel said. 'You were...' 'Wasn't me!' Blade said, 'Nebula incarantion of me! Yes I am still under his power and I'm going to show you what the real Blade is like...' 'Angel...' Rumbo said inside him. 'Okay...' Angel said, changing back into Rumbo, who kept holding the same sword. 'Lets end this now...' Rumbo said to Blade. -LET BATTLE COMMENCE- Rumbo Vs Blade 'I envy you...' Balde said, 'So popular, like your death with so many people. Pity you must die now.' 'Not a chance...' Rumbo said, 'Not until my mother learns the truth...' 'That a boy, son!' Gargant said, Everyone stared at Gargant. 'SON?' Nobara said. Just as Blade went at Rumbo, something struck Blade in the back. It was another sword, stabbing him right through the chest. Blade turned around. A rabbit stood there, alone, wearing a trenchcost like Rumbo...he even had blue fur, well sky blue... 'YOU...' Blade started. 'Yes,' the rabbit said, 'me Blade, I remember fighting you a few times...' Rumbo and everyone else looked at the rabbit... 'Defalcon!' Blade said as his last words, falling to the ground, dead. Defalcon looked up at Rumbo and said, 'He'll be alive when this is all over...' 'Defalcon?' Jelze said, 'I remember you...another TIME traveller.' '...' Rumbo said. 'Indeed that is,' Talec said, 'I met him once, many a year ago. Always travelled alone. A lot like you, Rumbo.' 'Indeed I am who you say,' Defalcon replied, 'And you must be the renegade?' '...Yes...' Rumbo said, 'Why did you...' 'Come here? I am here to help you. I travel through TIME, that is my job. Maybe I never became a TIME Guardian but I was one of the few TIME travellers, unlike Blade, who never did bad.' 'Thank you...' TIME said to him, 'I knew you would turn up some time...' 'Pleasure boss, a pleasure.'
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Jul 2, 2001, 01:05 PM | |
It's Devan. But good chapter.
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Jul 4, 2001, 12:49 AM | |
'Get up!' Lori said as she appraoched Devon. An angry expression filled her face.
'Ugh!' Devon said, 'Where am I?' 'Huh?' 'Whats up with him?' Kaz asked. 'Where am I.....' Devon looked up at Lori, 'oh god, oh god! Get away from me! GET AWAY FROM ME!' 'Now he remembers me!' Lori said with a smile. Dr Jones hugged her. 'Another trance?' Talec asked Rumbo. 'Yup. Nebula's messing with us.' 'Nebula must be stopped,' Defalcon said, 'but how are we going to do that?' 'We don't know yet...' Jelze said, 'but all we know is that its gonna be more then a gunfight.' 'Come on...' Rumbo said as he walked into the castle. As he walked across the front lawn something began to happen. A distinct feeling appeared in his head, one that was eery and unpleasant. Rumbo looked around him, then shaked his hea to try and loose the feeling. It didn't budge. 'Rumbo are you alright?' Talec asked. '...' The body of Blade began to move.... 'What the...' Rumbo said as his vision suddenly changed. Everything seemed blurry and different coloured. Everything was now either purple, dark green or dark red. Rumbo couldn't walk properly anymore. It was as if he had been spinning around on the spot and made himself so dizzy that even standing was impossible. Blade....unaware to anyone but Rumbo....got up from the ground. Everyone else saw the body just lying there as if he was still dead. 'They do not see the truth...' Blade said, 'you're seeing a world that Nebula has really created. Underneath this exterior is something even worse...' Rumbo fell to the ground. Blacksheep and Nobara ran over to him but suddenly some kind of forcefield stopped them at the open gate. 'Rumbo!' Lori shouted out. Everyone else stared on. 'Nebula is still creating New Carrotus as we speak...' 'Who are you?' Rumbo said, looking up to Blade, 'You're not the Blade I remember...' 'There never was a Blade you fool! I am still the same yet I am still non existant, not in the real world...' 'What?' 'Don't you get it? Don't you see the reality. Gargant thought I would be a useless experiment and so he banished me...' 'You're...a creation?' 'Yes...the same as you Rumbo...' 'No, that cannot be...' Suddenly everone else saw the truth, the blurry shapes, the Blade standing before Rumbo... 'Blade?' Talec said out loud. 'No,' Defalcon said, 'I know who Blade really is. He was the second creation...Nebula's creative brother.' 'What?' Blade ran at Rumbo and kicked him. Rumbo screamed in agony. The pain was more painful then you would believe. 'Listen to me, Rumbo...you and I are of creative blood. Gargant says he is your father...' 'STOP THIS!' Gargant said, running towards the forcefield. He managed to break through it. 'Well look at this, father and sons reunited. Isn't this a joyous of days?' 'Blade, you're wrong! Rumbo IS my son. You are nothing but a useless creation...' 'I won't have it! Father I should be the one with Nebula's power. I was created FIRST!' 'That's why you so badly want to take over Carrotus!' Rumbo said, 'Is this what it is all about, revenge on Gargant?' 'And Nebula! I tried to steal his power before but I failed...' 'Blade, you're time to die is now!' Gargant shouted. 'COME AT ME, POPS!' -LET BATTLE COMMENCE- Blade Vs Gargant 'Dad don't do this...' Rumbo said. 'Im sorry son but this is something I must finish...' 'AAAHHHHHHHH!' Blade screamed as he ran at Gargant, raising his sword and trying to slice his chest. Gargant moved backwards and created a sword in his hand. 'WHY DON'T YOU JUST USE A ROKET LAUNCHER ON ME, FATHER?' 'BECAUSE I'M MORE DECENT THEN YOU THOUGHT.' 'AND THAT WILL BE YOUR DOWNFALL!' BLade said, somehow creating another sword in his other hand. 'What the...' Rumbo said. 'This isn't Blade, Rumbo,' Gargant said, 'It's Nebula...the Blade we know is still in TIME...' Blade changed and morphed into the red rabbit incarnation of Nebula. -Sorry if you're not keeping up with all this. Lets just say that Blade is still tied up with bananas in his hands and this Blade is Nebula tricking them all. He's telling Rumbo all this to try and confuse him and twist him- The forcefield wasn't strong enough for Jelze and Defalcon. Talec tried to break through but then remembered his powers were lost. 'Oh here we go!' Nebula said, 'The party is all here to defeat me. How nice!' 'This is going to be the end...' Defalcon said. 'We must end this now...' Jelze said. 'Once we defeat Nebula it will be all over...' Gargant 'Then the final fight will begin!' Nebula said. -LET THE FINAL BATTLE COMMENCE- Rumbo, Defalcon, Gargant, Jelze Vs Nebula 'What a team you have there, Rumbo!' Nebula closed his eyes and summoned three zombies from behind Rumbo and three robots from the future beside him. 'Those robots...' Jelze said, 'I remember them...' 'They are from your time, Jelze, ones I purposly created.' Nebula replied. The Zombies appraoched Rumbo, running at him. They carried long swords. Rumbo tried to hold two of them off as they attacked at once. They were strong against him. 'RUMBO!' Slayer said through the other side of the forcefield 'What is going on?' Devon said out loud. 'SHUT UP!' Lori said, 'Rumbo you have to fight back. You need more weapons...' Rumbo suddenly smiled. His body began to change through free will. Angel now appeared in his place. 'HA HA now the party is about to begin!' Everyone saw him and smiled. Angel jumped high into the air by decreasing his gravity and created two stakes in his hands. Falling to the floor he stabbed both zombies in the chests, making them squeal like pigs. The third zombie wasn't far behind. Defalcon went at one of the robots, firing from his blaster. He shot at its head and nothing happened. '(/)!' he said. Jelze decided it was time he showed TIME what he was really made of. Noticing a small red crystal in the cntre of the robots bodies he fired at it, causing the body to crack open and reveal wires and circuitry. Jelze did a flying kick at the robot and caused it to explode. 'HAHA!' Nobara said, 'Nice one Jelze!' Jelze smiled. Defalcon did the same with the robot he was against. The third robot ambushed Defalcon and kicked him to the ground, holding a gun to his head. 'NO WAY PAL!' came Jelze's voice as he flying kicked the third robot.... The third Zombie then pulled out a Uzi. Angel jumped over him andkicked him in the back. The zombie fell down onto his front. He turned and was almost ready to fire. But as he turned he saw that Angel had gone. 'HIYA!' Angel said as he stabbed the zombie in the heart. He had moved round it and created another stake. Jelze and Defalcon had finished the last robot. All the zombies were dead. Only one person remained. Gargant went at Nebula, the experiment he should never have created. They both wielded swords. Angel changed back to Rumbo. 'You made a big mistake, Gargant!' Nebula said. 'Yes I created you!' 'I also made the mistake of allowing you to work with me! You betryed me!' 'YOU BETRAYED ME!' 'Why did you help me?' 'Because I thought I couldn't defeat you. Then I found Rumbo after all these years and realised that he never gave up. He has dies twice and still he lives. He is my son and I love him.' Rumbo sheaded a tear... 'Rumbo, if not me, will defeat you...wether or not you kill me now...' 'Then you won't mind me doing this!' Nebula said, stabbing Gargant right through the heart, 'Father!' 'NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!' Rumbo screamed as Gargant fell to the ground...Nebula standing before him... Gargant lay there, dead... Nebula looked up at Rumbo, Rumbo looked up at Nebula with tearful eyes. '...' Rumbo didn't have the words. 'It is time for me to leave. You can take Jazz and the Queen, they're inside the castle. Spaz stays with me. In the past my forces of Zombies are coming and from the future the robots are coming. The creations, followers of me still exist on this planat. If you still want to defaeat me you must stop them first...' 'Why are you telling me this?' Rumbo said. 'Because....' Nebula said, suddenly disappearing into nothingness. Everyone lay there in sorrow. Rumbo went to his father and rested his face in his fur, crying his eyes out. Everyone else cried with him. They felt his sorrow. Derby: Subtle content edit.
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Jul 4, 2001, 04:36 AM | |
Heh, kinda odd how so many turn out to be related to Lori...
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Jul 4, 2001, 09:28 AM | |
yeah sorry about that. its confusing me too.
More coming soon. Rumbo
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Jul 4, 2001, 07:23 PM | |
Gargant CAN'T be dead.... I hope not.
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Jul 4, 2001, 11:22 PM | |
Yeah hes dead. sorry everyone. Dont worry life still lives through Nebula's powers. Even though hes dead it doesnt mean we wont hear the last of him.....
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Jul 7, 2001, 01:01 PM | |
Everyone stood silently, their eyes all wet. TIME at that one moment stood still...
Rumbo Rabbit picked up his dead father and walked further into the grounds of Carrotus Castle. Everyone else followed like a parade at a funeral march. Rumbo walked inside, Jelze and Talec right behind him. Lori stood behind them, almost inbetween them. '...Mother....' Rumbo called out into the castle. No answer. '...Queen of Old Carrotus. My mother who I thought was dead...' No answer. 'The one who banished me away and left me cold, creating the rabbit I am today.' There was a shuffling sound at the end of the hall. The Queen came out. With her stood a painful looking Jazz and Princess Eva, who kissed him on the cheek to try and make him feel better. 'My mother,' Rumbo continued, 'my half sister, my half cousin. The brother of my half cousin Lori.' Lori gasped a little. The Queen looked in Rumbo's arms and saw Gargant lying there dead. 'You mean....?' 'I was the rabbit you gave birth to with Gargant. He left me with you but then you realised the power of creation from Gargant...' 'Rumbo...it can't be.' 'Maybe I don't have those powers,' Rumbo said, as he began to change into Angel. By the time he had finsihed with the Queen gobsmacked, Angel replied, 'but I do, mother. I remember the past and I remember the way you through me out of the castle. Do you remember me Eva?' Eva looked back and said, 'I don't...' 'We used to play in the garden together, you know, hide and seek in the maze. I remember I would hide in the far corners and see if you would spot me as you glanced down there. You had a funny way of doing that...' Eva began to remember. 'I remember you'd hide in one specific place where raspberries were growing on the sides. Boy it became so easy for me.' A tear came out of Eva's eye, 'Brother, the one they called...' 'Hell's Angel, I am that one. A part of Rumbo Rabbit who now lives of Nebula's powers. It all happened when Rumbo tried committing suicide.' Angel changed back into Rumbo. 'You...' the Queen started, 'it is you...you were my little guy. I couldn't keep you for I knew damage might be taken on people from your powers...I needed to take you somewhere far away to avoid any damage, where you would most likely forget...' 'Forget my powers?' Rumbo replied, 'Well that worked, then TIME summoned me as his new Guardian and I found my TIME travelling powers..ones I sippsedly had when I grew up...' 'Rumbo,' Jazz said, 'I thought you would be dead...' 'Hehe, I've died twice in my lifetime. Im still living on. I have to stop Nebula once and for all.' 'But how?' Talec said, 'If you kill him you end all life everywhere...' '...rumbo...the likeliness of changing Nebula's mind is impossible...' it was TIME who stood as a light blue coloured rabbit. 'I want my revenge,' Rumbo said, 'he killed my father and I want him......back........alive......' 'Rumbo?' Jelze said out loud. 'Talec how far would you say the TIME mountain is from here..?' 'About twelve miles, why?' 'Meet me there half way!' Rumbo said as he transported himself into TIME, directing himself towards TIME mountain... Only TIME and Talec (and Jelze a little) realised what Rumbo had in mind...
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Jul 7, 2001, 01:25 PM | |
Just a little???? I haven't got the smallest idea of what you're going to do, rumbo
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Jul 7, 2001, 01:51 PM | |
He's going to morph into a giant badger and upset the whole mountain SOOOO much it cries and the tears somehow revive Gargant! Aren't I clever?
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