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Jul 7, 2001, 02:52 PM
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Um, I don't think so. I have my ideas, but I'm not telling as they're prolly wrong.
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Jul 7, 2001, 03:53 PM
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Not another C. Trigger I hope!



Excellent story.
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Jul 8, 2001, 12:46 AM
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Thanks Kaz.

Nah your all wrong. Just think about the TIME stone....
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I did, but what good is halfway up a montain going to do? Ah well, I'll see I guess. You had better continue this.
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Jul 8, 2001, 02:03 PM
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Keep up the good work rumbo
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Jul 9, 2001, 12:20 AM
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Mmmmmmmm Molecules......



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Jul 9, 2001, 12:38 AM
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That's it! The giant badger will make Gargant and the TIME Stone one and the same, so TIME will be dead too Everythign will be hunky-dory!
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Jul 9, 2001, 03:49 AM
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It's another C. Trigger!
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Jul 9, 2001, 08:00 AM
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whats a C Trigger? Im stupid



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Jul 9, 2001, 11:52 AM
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Chrono?
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What's Chrono Trigger? I've never figured it out.
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Jul 9, 2001, 05:06 PM
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HAHA! I claim FOURTH page!
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Augh... not knowing what a C. Trigger is... for shame!
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Jul 9, 2001, 11:53 PM
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'This aint no dream, this is reality to the extreme...'



Rumbo found himself at TIME mountain. He saw the TIME stone...standing alone. This was undoubtedly a trap.



'So who's waiting for me behind the next corner?' Rumbo yelled out, drawing out his sword, already realising who it would be.

'You guess correctly, my old friend...'



Blaze suddenly appeared from behind the TIME stone, wielding another golden sword like Rumbo's.

'Left Blade back at TIME Central?'

'He betrayed me. I only fought with him due to the numbers...it was fairer on me that way.'

'The last time, Rumbo,' Blaze said, clutching his sword firmly.

'You don't have to do this...' Rumbo replied.

'We are enemies of the extreme, the extemities of life.'

'You were created to defeat me?'

'It was my only purpose...'



-LET BATTLE COMMENCE-

Rumbo Vs Blaze



Rumbo and Blaze held their swords out, ready to do battle. There was only to be one winner this time.....



Meanwhile....back at Carrotus castle.

Talec and TIME stood beside each other, knowing what Rumbo was going to attempt.

'Would it really still be there?' Talec said.

'..no...'

'A trap?'

'...yes...'

'The molecular structur, right?' Jelze said.

'...yes...to alter it back...'

'To the way it was before?'

'Yes Jelze.'

'But why didn't we do this before?'

'Because we all knew the TIME stone wouldn't be there, even Rumbo...'

'So why has he gone there?'

'...TIME?' Talec said.

TIME smiled, 'Because not even Nebula has the real stone...'

'WHAT?'



-Confusing isn't it? Rumbo-



'Then who has this TIME stone then?' the Queen asked.

'...the TIME stone is the stone that creates the world. Gargant invented it. Nebula was a creation from Gargant who was meant to take over Gargant's role and become the new creator. Now Nebula is evil he wanted the TIME stone to alter the world, rather then create. Therefore by doing so he has altered the TIME stone itself, not just the molecular structure but....'

'It's location!' Jelze said.

'Exactly!' Talec said, 'which means that not even Nebula knows where it is...'

'If we can find it...' Jazz said.

'We can stop Nebula, the way he changed our planet by changing it back!'

'But who is going to go?' Defalcon said.

'Huh?' Lori said.

'Remember what Nebula said to Rumbo, the attacks from past, present and future...people must go to each and stop these attacks. Another party must go and find the TIME stone, meaning four parties. I say about three in each...'

'So the resistance has to split up?' Jazz said.

'Yes in order to defeat Nebula.'
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Jul 10, 2001, 12:10 AM
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Nice story Rumbo, got good lines



BTW ALL: check my story plz, its been hard work and i wanna know what ya think about it
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Jul 10, 2001, 01:51 AM
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The first three people who reply after this message will head into the past. Then we will start over and the next (new) three will head into the present, then the future. The last team will head for the TIME stone, which Rumbo will lead. Make sure that theres a TIME traveller in each party so Defalcon and Jelze don't get mixed in the same party. Same for you Talec.



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Jul 10, 2001, 02:07 AM
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This is my reply
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Jul 10, 2001, 02:49 AM
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My reply.



Wow, it wasn't a complete C. Trigger at all (actually it was I'm trying to get myself to shut up).



Very accurate plot Rumbo.
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Jul 10, 2001, 07:32 AM
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Groovy chapter

Really.

:P

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Jul 10, 2001, 12:06 PM
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Thanks everyone. You are the first three, now the next three for the future...



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Jul 10, 2001, 12:24 PM
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This is my reply for the future....
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Jul 10, 2001, 01:54 PM
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All right, but I don't want to die please.
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Jul 10, 2001, 02:19 PM
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my reply, hehe (j/k)
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Jul 10, 2001, 06:55 PM
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I guess I'm off to the future ^_^ (assuming someone else hasn't posted while I was reading your *cough*awesome*cough* updates )



Woah, I just thought of something... I'll PM you about it, Rumbo.



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Jul 10, 2001, 07:42 PM
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Wah, I asked to be in a loong time ago, Rumbo! *cries* Now, CAN I be in? You said yes then
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Jul 10, 2001, 07:43 PM
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Oh, right.

Very good, I wanna be in one team.



Pleez?
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Jul 10, 2001, 08:07 PM
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Ack! Guess I'm stuck in the present, huh. Oh well. Not too bad.
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Jul 11, 2001, 07:34 AM
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Coppertop did you send me your profile? If not send it to me through private message. Sorry I totally lost track of everyone. I have too many fans



Defalcon I might be sending you into the future instead of slayer. Sorry but I need a time travller to go into the future. Hang on a sec somebody swap with Slayer so he can go into the past and face the vampires. He is a vampire hunter you know! Somebody volunteer. Once that is done I will continue with the story. Im just about to look at my messages Talec....



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Jul 11, 2001, 08:23 AM
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hey, i was joking about the future thing, im already goin to the past in this story, so its solved.

Vampireslayer is the job for me ok, so dont take away an honest man's living.



And there are no vampires in the future? ACK!!
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Jul 11, 2001, 06:11 PM
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Wait... now I'm confused... list where all the people are going and I volunteer?
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Jul 11, 2001, 07:54 PM
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'Kay. . . I'll send you a PM.
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Jul 12, 2001, 07:37 AM
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Okay, heres the list so far:



Past:

Slayer

Kaz

Ducky



Present:

Coppertop





Future:

Defalcon

Ax Man

Unknown Rabbit



Don't worry Kaz your in it already. I need two other main people for the present so Ill add Splash and Talec to that list. Hope none of you mind



More of the story soon

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Jul 12, 2001, 08:57 PM
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okay, I just got a little confused... it's not my fault I'm dumb ^ v ^
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Jul 13, 2001, 07:38 AM
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Check out Lonely Voyager everyone! Reply if you want on there. Sorry about the delay as Ive been back at school :P



Ill add a little more later, maybe tomorrow....keep reading! (even if there's nothing new to read )



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Can I join? I'm a Dark Traveller, I have dark powers but the soul of good, like HA.
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Jul 14, 2001, 07:14 AM
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If there's more room, i want to be a ravenous demonic killer with psychological and telekinetic powers
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Jul 14, 2001, 11:13 AM
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Rumbo and Blaze fought. Only two survived.....



Rumbo and Blaze struck swords. Blaze kicked at Rumbo and made him collapse backwards to the floor. He rolled over and got up, defending a very quick attack from Blaze. Rumbo spun round and did a kick right at Blaze's 'chin', cutting Rumbo's foor on the metal and denting Blaze's chin. He stumbled yet managed to stay on foot...



'Okay then...' Talec said, 'I suppose ill stay in the present. Splash and Coppertop your with me.'

'Right!' Coppertop said

'Gotcha!' Splash said, checking his booster was stable on his back.



'So I'm in the past for definite,' Slayer said, the Last Patriot. He checked and saw he was loaded nicely with stakes and such.

'Me too!' Kaz said.

'One other we need.'

'Mmmmm,' Kaz said, 'how about you, Ducky?'

'Erm..err...' Ducky said, 'I don't know...'

'Come on!' Slayer said, 'Join the team!'

'You'll need a way into the past,' Jelze said, 'So I'll go with you!'

'You coming, Ducky?' Slayer said

'Why not then!' Ducky said with great hesitation.



'Okay then!' Defalcon said, 'I'm in the future. Who's with me?'

'Me!' Ax Man said, 'I wanna take on some hard nut robots!'

'Whatever,' said a mysterious, unknown rabbit.

'Okay then you two will come with me.' Defalcon said, 'But what about Rumbo?'





The fight still continued....


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Jul 15, 2001, 06:46 AM
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The fight lived on.....



Blaze struck Rumbo on the chin, causing a massive bruise that stunned him. Rumbo collapsed and felt a presence inside his soul.



'I am ready to break free.'

Rumbo blinked slowly and realised what it was and what he had to do.



He got up and slowly he let his sword loosen from his grip. He walked towards Blaze, facing him like a true warrior.



Blaze raised his sword.



Rumbo simply stared....



Blaze lowered his sword with a mighty swoop.



Rumbo felt the blade stick deep into his heart, exactly where he wanted the sword to go.



Now his heart was in two, both souls were free at last.



Rumbo collapsed to the floor, his front covered with blood.



As Blaze walked away Rumbo's body began to glisten. Blaze didn't notice at first.......
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Jul 15, 2001, 07:16 AM
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Nice 1
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'Whatever,' said a mysterious, unknown rabbit.



Amazing that Defalcon instantly accepts that as a volunteer, and asks no questions, but 'Whatever' way that works, works.



Good chapter, or whatever.
 

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