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Jul 16, 2001, 07:27 AM
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lol Unknown. Sorry but I wanted to leave you mysterious and unknown



By the way 5TH PAGE IS MINE!!!!!!!!



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Wack! I was going to claim the page. Curses!
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Blaze turned round and saw Rumbo lying there, blood covering his chest. He started to turn white, yet a mysterious glow formed around him like an outline. It made his cheeks shine from blood red to sunshine yellow. Blaze winced his eyes as he saw the outline becoming brighter and brighter, which in turn made the outline larger and larger.



'What in the...' Blaze started but what he saw next made him unable to speak...



Laying on the ground was not just one rabbit but two! One was Rumbo Rabbit, the other was Hell's Angel. They laid there as if they were dead, yet both got up at exactly the same speed, each looking as alive as normal.



'No!' Blaze cried as he realised what had happened. He hadn't hurt Rumbo, he had helped him by splitting the two apart.



'Congratulations!' Rumbo said, drawing his sword.

'For helping us break free!' Hell's Angel said, holding his hands forward and creating a samurai sword in his grasp.

'And allowing us...' Rumbo said, jumping forward a little.

'To defeat you!' Hell's Angel said, also jumping forward.



Blaze stared back at them, 'You two should be dead! Neither of you exist!'

'Well start believing in us, pal!' Hell's Angel said, 'For it won't be long until you won't get the chance!'



As Blaze ran at Rumbo, Hell's Angel stepped in with a foot and tripped Blaze up, smashing his chin a little on ground impact. Blaze dropped his weapon.

Rumbo walked up to him and picked his body up with his free hand.

'The trouble with people like you,' Rumbo said, 'Is that you're not really people after all.'

Rumbo then threw Blaze in front of him, making Blaze dislocate his right arm. He screeched in pain a little.

Hell's Angel approached him, 'And you say that neither of us exist?' Hell's Angel kicked him and Blaze screamed.

Rumbo came over and did the same, 'There's a question you have to answer, Blaze. Do any of us exist?'

Hell's Angel then stabbed his samurai sword through his right leg, going straight through and impaling him on the ground, 'For it seems that Nebula overpowers us with his powers of creation. But he doesn't truly exist either!'

Rumbo stabbed his sword through Blaze's left arm, 'And neither does Blade, and therefore neither do YOU!'



'NOOOOOO! Blaze screamed as Hell's Angel made a new samurai sword and stabbed it where it would undoubtedly leave Blaze for dead......



A few minutes later they took the blades out and Hell's Angel made the two samurai swords disappear.

Hells Angel smiled, 'You freed me.'

'I know...'

'Why?'

'Nobody deserves to be inside me, Angel.'

'You think so huh?'

'Yeah.'

'You don't know yourself that well do you?'

Rumbo laughed and then looked at Hell's Angel.

'We must go somewhere,' Rumbo said.

'Carrottus?'

'Not yet. Nebula's realm?'

'Yes, the home of my father. I sense him there.'

'He is still alive?'

'Not in that sense.'

'I am beginning to understand. If only I knew myself more.'

'You will one day. Angel, yet I do not, as you say, know even me yet!'



The two hugged each other in gratitude.

'You know what I'm gonna do when this is over?' Rumbo asked.

'What?'

'Stay a renegade. That's what I am and that's what I'll always be. What about you, Angel?'

'Um...I don't know. Live an ordinary life? Return to the castle?'

'Its up to you Angel, you are your own person now.'

'It doesnt feel like it yet. Nebula must be defeated.'

'Don't worry,' Rumbo said, 'We'll defeat him, one day.'

'Soon?'

'Soon, very soon.'
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What Psycho said



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Who is this mysterious unknown rabbit? Weird. Oh well, nice chapter!
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Jul 18, 2001, 07:37 AM
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the mysterious unknown rabbit is Unknown Rabbit, obviously!



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Jul 18, 2001, 07:57 AM
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Slayer, Kaz, Ducky, Jelze....



The four who will travel into the past to fight against the vampires....



This next coming chapter will be souly based on the Past adventure. It will then move onto the Present chapter and then the Future chapter. Read and be amazed at all of them...



Chapter 2: PAST

Jelze, Slayer, Kaz and a nervous Ducky held each others hands as Jelze began the process of warp invention.

'Fight with honour, Jelze,' TIME said to him.

'I will, my lord, I will...'



Then after a few seconds a warp appeared at their feet and began to slowly suck them into it. They would not be back for some time.



Destination: PAST

TIME: Unknown

Location: Wild West territory



All four found themselves in the middle of a desert where nothing appeared to exist.

'Okay,' Jelze said, 'We have to find our way to whereever the vampires are planning to head into our present.'

'Say what?' Kaz asked.

'Look we find the warp the vampires are going through and we shut it down ok?'

'Erm, yeah Jelze I get it now.'

'Good.'

'Shhhhh!' Slayer said.

They were all silent for a while.

'What?' Ducky said in a whisper.

'They're nearby.' Slayer said.

'Vampires?' Jelze asked.

'Yes...Southwards.'

'Okay, we head that way.'

'Many of them..' Slayer added.

'Great so what do we do about the odds against us?' Ducky asked.

'We destroy them!' Jelze said, 'Come on gang lets go. Make sure your armed well.'



They went south through the desert, past scraps and bits of bone that were left from camels and such.

'Do camels exist on this planet?' Slayer asked.

'Well if we have even heard of them then yes!' Kaz said.

'I guess so. Lets keep going. It isn't far now.'



They reached the edge of the desert that led to a run down village where the vampires seemed to be gathering. They all gathered in one large hotel like building.



-It Dusk till Dawn all over again -



More story coming soon



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Nice Chapter....Actually a friend of mine you might know him: Tom Savini did the SFX for that movie. I own an awesome latex model mask from taht movie..the eyes are dead yellow. Some freaky stuff...
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Slayer led the party of four towards the hotel, with Jelze behind and Ducky and Kaz neck and bird neck. Sand got wedged between the feet of each rabbit, which irritated Ducky immensely as it made her walking so much more difficult.

‘This sand’s annoying me!’ Ducky pronounced as she stopped to shake her feet. That wouldn’t really help much, considering they were always walking on sand.

‘Just think of something else!’ Kaz said, ‘like buttercups in an open field.’

‘Or how about you carry me, Kaz?’

‘No way, dude I’ve had enough of that for one day. That Talec was bad enough.’

Slayer then put a smile on his face. He turned to Ducky and said, ‘You’re a gorgeous genius you are!’

Ducky blushed through her fur. Her ears lit up.

‘Kaz,’ Slayer then said, ‘fly up and see what you can see. Fly over the top of the hotel and find anything that would be of use to us!’

Kaz nodded (with regret) and flew up into the air, soaring high above everyone so that the vampires wouldn’t notice him as an intruder, only as a mere bird. As Kaz flew over he noticed something strange about the formation of the vampires.

‘The story of Noah’s Ark,’ he said as he went over them and inspected the hotel. It was a tall building, so tall that Kaz had to fly higher to get over the roof. It seemed normal to him.

After about five minutes, with the other three travelling closer about a quarter of a mile, Kaz returned and found them.

‘Well?’ Jelze asked.

‘They’re going in two’s!’ he said proudly.

‘And?’

‘Nope that’s it. The hotel looks all right to me.’

‘Okay,’ Ducky said, ‘that wasn’t worth it.’

‘It’s a ritual…’

‘What did you say, Slayer?’ Jelze asked.

‘Moving in a formation. They’re attending some kind of a meeting. In twos it means some kind of a ritual…like a ceremony…’

‘The ceremony of them coming to our world?’ Kaz asked.

‘Most likely.’

‘Let’s move gang!’ Jelze said as he began to run towards the village hotel. Slayer and the others followed persistently.



The words of Nebula could be heard spoken within the walls…



Slayer reached the entrance and noticed all the vampires were inside.

‘Go inside and hide somewhere!’ Slayer said, ‘I have to get something…’

Slayer waltzed off into the village, the other three left bewildered. They did as he asked though….





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Jul 20, 2001, 11:55 AM
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I wanna know what slay's gonna get!





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Man, i haven't replied for quite a while Anyway, good going, except for one thing: you always seem to forget that Kazooie's a boy, not a girl like in Banjo-Kazooie.
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Methinks Rumbo is ethier blind, deaf, selectively blind, or ignorant since I already said that too.
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Jul 21, 2001, 10:33 AM
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As Slayer went deeper into the village, Kaz, Ducky and Jelze went further into the hotel, their hearts beating like mad.

They entered a small chamber room at the front of the hotel where a reception desk was with a small bell on it. The floor was quite clean but there were numerous vampire sanded footprints positioned in one constant pattern that led into the next room. The chamber also led up to another floor with a set of red carpeted stairs with a golden edge all the way round.

‘Nice carpet!’ Kaz said as he walked into the room.

‘The footprints lead on to the other room,’ Ducky said, ‘shall we go in?’

‘Lets take a look,’ Jelze said as he followed the footprints. The next room was blinded with a set of blood red curtains so Jelze simply had a sneak peak through the middle of them. He made sure he wasn’t visible to the vampires inside. What he saw was horrific.

In the room were about a million or so vampires all standing in some kind of pattern. They were all staring at this strange pattern in the middle of the room. It was a circle with a star in the middle of it.

‘The apocalypse,’ Jelze said out loud, yet in a whisper.

‘What’s happening?’ Kaz asked.

Just as Jelze was about to reply the pattern on the floor began to glisten with bright eccentric colours. The vampires shielded their eyes from the light.

‘That makes sense,’ Ducky stated, now able to see too, ‘they hate light.’

‘So what do we do now?’ Jelze asked.

‘We thought you knew!’ Ducky said.

‘…’

‘Kaz have you got any ideas?’

‘…Err…’

‘Kaz are you…’ Ducky said turning round, to find a vampire clutching him by the neck and a gun pointing at his feathered head.

‘Any of you move and the bird becomes a bat, understand?’

They did even if it did sound daft. The vampire had been hiding behind the reception desk.



The vampire forced the three of them into the room full of vampires, still clutching Kaz around the neck.

‘Let go of me!’ he screamed at it.

‘Quiet, Kaz,’ Jelze said, ‘there’s nothing we can do now. We’re gonna be sacrificed.’

‘How do you know?’ Ducky asked.

‘The mark of the apocalypse, plus the fact they need energy to create the warp. They need life energy.’

Some other vampires came over and forced the three onto the mark of the apocalypse, which suddenly lit up with a tall round purple clear force field that prevented the three from escaping.

‘For your treachery you shall be sacrificed and used to get us into the present.’

‘That’s it!’ Ducky said, ‘that’s why Nebula told Rumbo about the vampires so he could USE US AS THE SACRIFICE!’

‘It was a trap!’ Jelze said, ‘but what about the ones in the future?’

‘I don’t know, Ducky, I don’t know…’

Suddenly the pattern on the floor lit up with a red colour.

‘It was nice knowing you all,’ Kaz said.

‘HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAA!!!!!!!’ came a loud scream as Slayer broke through the roof and landed next to the force field. He clutched a very impressive flamethrower and a stern look in his eye.

‘The last patriot!’ one of the vampires shouted, ‘get him!!!!!’

As the vampires ran at him Slayer ignited the flamethrower and fired flame after flame onto each vampire. They screamed as they saw the light and screamed even louder when the flames spread across their bodies. It was like the scene at the end of the Alien film with the Alien and the eggs…beautiful to the hero’s eye.

Slayer stood in a quite impressive pose as all the vampires in the room were set alight and began to burn on the ground. The purple force field and the red colours on the pattern faded and disappeared.

‘Thanks, man!’ Jelze said as he stood out of the pattern.

‘Come on everyone!’ Slayer said, ‘we have to get to the roof, there’s a warp there that we can use…’

As they went out into the reception area they saw sand footprints heading up the stairs.

‘Oh no!’ Ducky said, ‘they’re going after the warp!’

‘Let’s go!’ Slayer said.

‘Kaz, fly up to the roof and see what you can find. We’ll meet you there!’ Jelze ordered

‘Right!’ he said as he left the chamber and flew off into the sky.

‘Stick together, team!’ Slayer said as they went up the stairs after the vampires.

When they had reached the top of the stairs, on the second floor, they found that the lift was in use.

‘Ducky, go with Slayer up the stairs!’ Jelze said, ‘I’ll stay here and try to stop the lift.’

‘Don’t play hero, Jelze!’ Slayer said.

‘Look I’m gonna prove myself as TIME’s Guardian, so let me do this!’

‘Okay, Jelze. Ducky lets go!’

Ducky and Slayer continued up another flight of stairs.

Jelze forced open the lift doors and looked up to the see the lift was indeed heading up. The cable that went up with the lift dangled underneath and went up with it. Jelze saw the cable an jumped for it, only just managing to clutch it. He started to climb up the cable as the lift went closer to the top.



Kaz had just got to the top and saw the warp, yet no vampires were about. They were in the lift. Kaz landed by the warp and waited. If the other’s failed it would be up to him to stop them…



As Ducky and Slayer went up the stairs they saw more footsteps. Slayer drew out a stake as a massive vampire came out and attacked them; colliding with Slayer and knocking him back. Ducky went over to Slayer and helped him up.

‘Kill it for me, Ducky!’ Slayer said as he suddenly passed out.

‘Oh no,’ Ducky said as the vampire came closer….



Jelze had now climbed up so he was about a metre underneath the ascending lift. He drew out his blaster and fired at the bottom of the lift, creating a massive hole. Three out of seven vampires fell through, one hitting Jelze and almost knocking him off the cable. The other four vampires, like the other three, carried blasters and fired down at Jelze. Jelze got hit on the foot yet he persevered. He fired up at them as foot bled severely.

‘AAAAAAHHHHH!’ Jelze screamed as he took out a grenade and threw it into the lift. He then saw a lone cable that wasn’t moving close by and he jumped for it, leaving the lift to continue heading up. After a while the lift exploded, killing all the vampires and destroying the lift. It became detached from the top cables and so began to fall down, towards Jelze.

‘Crap!’ Jelze shouted as he began sliding down the cable as a burning lift came plummeting after him. Jelze used his blaster and shot at one of the lift doors below, causing it to explode open. As he became vertical with it he threw himself off the cable and went for the lift door. As he jumped the lift became ever so close. Just as Jelze clambered through the lift door the lift catapulted past it, meaning that Jelze would have only had a split second left to stay alive. Jelze laid there, out of breath and completely shattered……..





I think thats the best bit of the story so far, dont ya think? What do you think the best bit was?



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Jul 21, 2001, 10:37 AM
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Oh right with Kazooie. Erm yeah sorry I never actually played that (very poor) game.



I apologise Kazooie, I have a bad memory as Im not totally devoted to Renegade, as I have certain things like Lonely Voyager any my life that I live. Ill have more time later.



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No problem... Strange hotel I say...
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So, if they went back in time to destroy the vampires, they can't suceed without endangering themselves forever. After all, if they destroyed the vampires, then they wouldn't have gone back in the first place! And if they didn't go, then they wouldn't have stopped them, so they WOULD come, so they wouldn't, so... oh, I'm all confused. Just keep it up, confusing or not.
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Have you ever heard of the Dynamic (infinitite) Time theory? For short it means there's more than one set of time running.
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Wahoo! Good stuff!
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Hey everyone reply on Lonely Voyager Ive added to it. Plus it looks really good and its gonna be the story I do after Renegade so keep in touch with it. Let me know that ur seeing it (ie reply (--))



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Ducky watched the dangerous and monstrous vampire slowly walk towards her. She was scared stiff yet she managed to take the stake from Slayer's paws.



'Erm....nice vampire...' Ducky said, feeling a little embarrassed.

The vampire strangely roared at her, causing her to fall on her bum.

Ducky saw that her hands were shaking, as well as the stake.

'You dare to challenge me?' the vampire said.

Ducky stood up and stared back with a stern look in her eye.

'Yeah, so whatcha gonna do?'

The vcampire laughed loudly. Just as he did Ducky leapt forward and stuck the stake deep into the vampires heart, killing it in a matter of seconds. The vampire fell down and began to bleed all over the floor's carpet.

'That'll teach ya!' Ducky said, wiping her hands and going over to Slayer. She stayed by him for as long as he began to wake up...



Kaz stood on his own, bedazzled that none of the vampires were even on the roof yet.

'Must be a very tall hotel.' Kaz said to himself.



Jelze began to take the stairs. He was two floors below Ducky and Slayer. They met up as Slayer was coming forward...

They all went for the roof....



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Good story sofar rumbo, very good parts
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You're going to leave me there aren't you? =D, jk, nice story.
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REPLY ON LONELY VOYAGER PLEASE!!! Oh go on I know you want to. Don't worry Kaz Ill see what I can do with you



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Kaz stood by himself, alone, hearing the wind whisper through his ears. He turned and saw the warp. It seemed smaller then before...



'Oh no!' he said, 'It's closing. We don't have much time!'

'And neither do you, Kaz!'

Kaz turned around and saw something horrible standing before him.



'Come on!' Jelze said as they ran faster up the stairs, 'I can feel the warp closing. We don't have long!'

'Why can't we use the lift?' Ducky asked.

'Um...well...it kinda got destroyed...'

'Jelze!' Slayer said out loud.

'I couldn't help it okay? Look the worst is over with we just need to get to the roof.'

'One floor to go!' Ducky stated as the last floor, floor forty, approached them...



'Wh..wh...what are you?' Kaz said to the thing in front of him.

'My name is Necromancer,' the thing said to Kaz, leering down at it with its gaupy and horrific expression. It was like a sewage monster made of paper, 'I am here to fight my nemesis...I shall use you to...'



'NECROMANCER!' came a familiar voice to both Kaz and Necromancer.



Necromancer turned round and saw who he was looking for...



'We meet again, Last Patriot!' Necromancer said.

'Indeed we do!' Slayer replied, 'Guys get in the warp its closing.'

'What about you?' Ducky said.

'Just go, forget about me, I have to fight this guy...'

Necromancer was about to pick up Kaz and use him as a lure but Kaz flew up into the air and dodged his grasp.

'Nice one, Kaz!' Jelze said.

'GO!' Slayer said, 'Before its too late!'

'No way man!' Ducky said, 'I wanna fight this time, by your side!'

'Me too!' Jelze said, 'The resistance sticks together, right?'

'Right!' Kaz said, landing next to Ducky.



The four stood opposite the warp, with only Necromancer between them...



-LET BATTLE COMMENCE-

Slayer, Ducky, Kaz and Jelze Vs Necromancer.



'You will all die for your pathetic courage against me!' Necromancer said.

'Nay, it will be you who falls at my hand!' Slayer said, then looked at the others and saw their expressions, 'AT OUR HANDS!'

'YEAH!' the other three said at once.



Necromancer placed his hands into the air and started to create a tornado to try and blow them off the roof.

'Hold onto something!' Jelze said as they went for some piping that led down into the hotel.

Kaz simply flew into the air and dodged the tornado completely. He then went in for an air attack, firing his blaster down at it. The bullets simply moved away from Necromancer when they got too close.

'HAHA!' Necromancer said, making his hand longer and swiping at Kaz. He hit him with a sheer force that made Kaz fall down towards the ground, damaging one of his wings.

'Dammit!' he said as Necromancer started to move closer.

'NOOO! Ducky said, taking out her staff and creating a thunder spell down on Necromancer. It had little effect yet it knocked him to the floor.

'Ducky!' Slayer said, 'Can you cast healing spells?'

'Erm, I think so, I can try!'

'Then do it on Necromancer!'

'What?'

'Just do it, trust me!'

Ducky stood by herself as she tried a healing spell on Necromancer before he got up.

White dust appeared round Necromancer and laid themselves on its body.

'NOOO! Necromancer said as he body began to deteriorate slightly around his legs.

'What the...?' Jelze said.

'Its undead, healing it kills it!' Slayer said as he got up and drew out a stake.

'NOOOO! Necromancer said as his head began to peel off like wallpaper. There was only one thing left for the 4 to do.

Slayer walked up to Necromancer, placed the stake gently on its heart and puches the stake in with his foot. Necromancer screamed and exploded into black dust particles as the stake sunk through its heart. That was the only thing that remained of his entire body.

'Let me!' Jelze said, walking over to the heart and picking it up, removing the stake.

'Ewww!' Ducky said.

Jelze then moved to the edge of the roof and simply threw the heart off the top.

'That won't kill it,' Slayer said, 'But it'll keep him held for another ten years.'

Seeing the warp hole getting smaller and smaller they all jumped in, heading back for the present time.



One down, two to go...



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You overdone yourself this time, rumbo



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looking good mate, still readin mine to i hope
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Jul 25, 2001, 11:26 PM
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Chapter 3: PRESENT



Coppertop, Splash and Talec have been called to fight the Creations, possesed members of Carrotus under the powers of Nebula.



The three saw Jelze and his team head into the past at the same time that Defalcon and his team headed towards the future. That left only them in the same TIME to fight the possesed.



'Okay everyone,' Talec said, 'Lets find out where we have to go...'

TIME then spoke in their minds, '...head south until you reach troubled waters...'

'You hear that?' Coppertop said

'Yeah, it was TIME,' Talec replied, 'he speaks the truth. We must go...'



The three left and headed south, watching and waiting for them to all see these troubled waters. Talec was out front, souting the area a few metres away from the other two. Splash was saving his rocket fuel and so walked with the others, by Coppertop.

TAlec suddenly stopped and held out a hand.

'Stay there,' he said as he continued forward. Coppertop and Splash did as they were told.



Talec had seen something glistening in the near distance. It was coming from a forest that was on the other side of a small river that had a wooden plank going across it as a bridge.

Talec saw the plank and began to inspect it. He was picking up some kind of scent.

He noticed a small shadow coming from underneath the plank.

'Show yourself!' Talec said out loud to whatever was there.

A small rabbit came out, who looked normal yet was very isolated looking.

'What is your name?' Talec asked.

'Well,' the frightened rabbit said, walking towards Talec, 'I don't really have a name...you see...'

The rabbit suddenly leapt at Talec, strangling him around the neck with a tight grip. Coppertop and Splash heard the cries of Talec and rushed forward, both preparing to fire at the Creation.

'No, don't!' Talec said, 'He is a simple rabbit who is possessed. If we kill him we kill the rabbit inside! Just get him off of me!'

Splash rushed forward and picked the small rabbit off Talec with ease. Coppertop fecthed some rope out of Splash's backpack as Talec held a sword to the Creation's throat.

Coppertop tied the Creation's hands up and placed him beside the plank.

'Troubled waters, eh?' Splash said with amusement.

'Indeed.'

'You think so, Talec, that was too ea...'

'Don't you get it?' Talec said to him, 'the Creations look like normal people. We don't know whether they are evil or not.'

'Wait a sec!' Coppertop said, 'with the attack in the north Dr Jones and Nobara killed a load of Creations, didn't they?'

'They did?' Talec said.

'Yeah, just outside the forest where they fought Titan.'

'Oh...um...' Talec blushed a little.

'So can we kill it?' Splash asked.

'I don't know...' Talec said, 'if a person lives inside it then we shouldn't, but...'

'WAIT UP GUYS!' came a familiar voice form where the three had come fro. It was Nobara running as fast as she could towards them.

'What a coincidence!' Splash said, 'put some light on the situation for us!'

'The Creations,' Nobara said, 'are spirits of rabbits who have already been killed. In other words when they are possessed...'

'They kill of the being in order to possess it!' Talec finished.

'Yes!'

'SO CAN WE KILL IT?' Splash said.

'Splash!' Coppertop said.

'Oh alright. It didn't kill anyone so lets just leave it...happy now?'

'Yes!' Coppertop said.

'Come on everyone!' Talec said, 'I say we head to the forest and find out where the Creation are being possessed from.'

Just as Talec walked across the plank and got to the other side, he felt his foot slipping away on the cold grass.

'What the...' but it was too late to say any more. Talec's entire body suddenly fell down this deep hole, down a large pipe into an underground sewer system. The other three leered down the hole and jumped in after him.

Talec had landed in some sewage and began to smell a little.

'Now I know what he meant by troubled waters!' Talec said out loud.



-More coming soon!-



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Jul 26, 2001, 12:08 AM
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Nice job ya done there, Rumb
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Jul 26, 2001, 04:29 PM
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Wow, Splash has one one track mind there. Good work.
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Jul 26, 2001, 05:51 PM
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Ewwwwwww! ;_;



Good continuation! Continue! ^_^



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The others followed Talec down into the sewer system. Talec, since he fell no jumped, was covered in muc from the bottom of the water.

'Ewwwww!' Nobara said, 'I can feel that stuff on the bottom of my feet.'

'And thanks to Talec I can smell it!' Splash said.

'Oh shut up!' Talec said to them. He then looked around at the sewer piping.

'Where do you think this goes?' Coppertop asked =.

'I think a long distance north,' Talec said, 'remember there were creations by the forest up the north?'

'Oh yeah!' Nobara said, 'you think they're using the sewer system to get around Carrotus?'

'Specially made by Nebula I bet,' Coppertop said.

'But it would take ages to get from here to the north wouldn't it?' Splash said.

Talec saw Splash's backpack, 'They'd need something to move about with, something fast...something that would go across...mucky water...'

Nobara laughed then quietened down when Talec gave her an evil look.

'So are we gonna head north then?' Splash asked.

'It is a trap,' Talec said, 'they are expecting us...'

'How do you know?' Splash replied.

'Think about it, that one creation protecting the sewer entrance here? He was small and unable to do a lot.'

'Good point,' Coppertop said, 'So they might have wanted u to know it was a trap right?'

'Right,' Talec said, 'hopefully TIME will tell us where to...'

'...head South.....'

'Wow that was quick,' Talec said, 'head south you all heard right?'

They all nodded.

'Right so lets go...' Talec said to them, running down the pipe, half covered in...well...whatever it was...



-MEANWHILE- (I bet you lot were waiting for that word...)



'Where to now?' Angel asked Rumbo as they stood on TIME's border.

'We go to Nebula's realm, to meet my dad...'

'Gargant? Isn't he dead?'

'Yes...but not in THAT sense. Trust me I've died three times in my supposed lifetime.'

'I know Rumbo, I lived in your body remember?'

They had a little laugh about that. The Rumbo decided it was time to go.

'Lets go,' Rumbo said.

'Lead the way...' Angel said.

They left, not seeing any other form of life for some time......
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Jul 29, 2001, 09:20 AM
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did I ever ask if I could be in this?

Nice chpater.

Ca n I?

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Jul 29, 2001, 09:28 AM
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Ducky you ARE in it. Read back to the 'Past' Chapter. You're one of them!!!!!!!



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Jul 29, 2001, 01:06 PM
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hmm, makes me wonder if people read our storys. Gah, i guess they dont unless you add them to be in it >: (
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Jul 29, 2001, 01:07 PM
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YaY! Tis good! Continue!



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