Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

I will not rate this because your link isn’t working.

Try re-uploading?

Okay now it works…

It’s a reasonable level set, but too many ice blocks, as everyone says. I like the way you set up the rapiers in the swimming level. Just a good set from you. I think this is your best work

PS. I was first poster haha[This review has been edited by AcId]

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:( :( :( :( :( :( And I was looking forward to this, I feel that your levels seem to slowly be improving, try renaming the zip file, and then re-post it :)

Well, I’m not going to rate this. But I can say that you REALLY need to work more on your levels. Basically every aspect except story.

it has good ideas, but the levels are way to small…..and way to easy……you need to take more time on making the levels, so that they’re bigger and more challenging.

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! You are good son. I love can help you. Son!

Bjarni, do not rate yourself. Don’t deny it because Bjarn… Ali-Mega is also an autist, uses the phrase ‘powerful level’. We can be nice but you can at leaste not cheat, seriously.

Well, at least your “feeling” for level detail is getting better. Not that’s it good yet, tough…

The levels are all kinda the same. Very linear, very boring, very small, very full of enemy’s, and all the same tiles where used for the levels. I son’t think I’ve got much more to add… a 4,0 for the effort.

I think you’re slowly getting better, bjarni, but these levels still (sorry) suck. Maybe if you take much time for every level, add much more eyecandy, add much more variety, add less enemy’s, and stuff. I usually take 2 months to make my levels (Always MP, tough), and I try to make the levels very “comfortable” for the user, what means that they can easily play the level and have fun. So make a level with much eyecandy, much variety, and explain me what “grunts” means :). And: if you really can’t make SP levels, whatever you try, try some other mode, like Race or Treasure (or MP, ofcourse)

OK, I won’t rate this, just review it. Bjarni, what are you up to this time?

The way I see it, this is more of a story than just a pack of levels. Even though the levels could be a lot better, it’s good to see that Bjarni’s improving a bit (not much). The levels are too liniar (too straight, in one direction), too short, they have too much ammo and too many same enemies. Same places are reachable only for Spaz! Still, i like some ideas (I even liked the pattern the ghost rapiers make when they attack you, how about that? I know, I’m weird).

Bjarni, it’s good that you keep trying to make good levels, but how about sending them to me first, huh? I don’t think others like you for filling this place up with your levels.

- JelZe GoldRabbit

This is supposed to be a level? This reminds me of my first level which I made using 190,00 enemies :) This just sucks Sorry Bjarni

yea….owkay….
Dude, I like lvls with a story! ^_
too bad you didn’t spend alot time on this. And btw, whats the big deal with eva missing spaz, Is she a ‘player’ or somethin’? :D

owyea, the level.
Well, its like…flat
very crowded, but the eyecandy is ok.

Please note to RedXILL,
post GOOD and USEFULL reviews, not just “bad level. 1.0 for you”. Like EvilMike said before, explain the mistakes…

It isn’t good at all…but at least your levels are improving..

Maybe it’s a idea to take some beta-testers. People who will test your levels and gif your Tips etc.

You still need to work more on it..The eycandy should be much better, your weapon placement and all of that kind.

a 3 from me…Go on like this and you will be once a good level creator :-)