Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

Another level by you :)

Eyecandy: This is still not a lot. Background is there and there also is a tree, but overall very basic. There are also a lot of bugs like at pos 47,188. You should search the right tile to fill up the green block. Also a lot of things have been cut off. At 26,167 you can see the cut off, and right next to it is a tree which also has been cut off in the middle :/ The background also has been cut off (Layer 8), add some of those root things. I got a screenshots of the level in JCS. The rest looks fine and the leaves are good :)

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a299/lustingheart/thewratheyecandybug.jpg
^— Circle around the cut off tree and the tiles in the wall. Also use those things on the left to make the background in layer 8 look not so cut off.

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a299/lustingheart/thewratheyecandy2.jpg
^—- the cut off background and the ledges were Jazz has to run fast and leap to a platform while Spaz can double jump.
this is at pos 58,170 to 82,170.

Gameplay: This is nice. There are a few dead ends and it seems spaz-biased though, look at screenshot 2. The water is cool too, that you can walk in it. You used it really good. The level is kinda small though.

Weapons: Not a lot, but it could be enough for few players. It’s nicely spread out over the level. Maybe try to hide the powerups in a wall and add the electroblaster so they have to shoot it through a wall. Or coins. Right now it’s easy to get all the powerups.

Comment overall level: I’s okay :) Maybe should have better music? This getting better.

Thanks, ill try to improve from what you have said…. anyone else got any good comments??

I am kind of interested in swamp battles because then you could make great use of water.

EYECANDY: 13/20

Eyecandy is OK. You could improve the backround a little bit. A few tile errors in some parts. Great use of water!!(Like I said in my first comment).

GAMEPLAY: 15/20

I also like water because it improves your gameplay!!!! Some areas lack gameplay so improve that in the future.

ITEMS: 12/20

Some areas of the level could use a little more ammo.

SIZE: 17/20

I found this level quite big. Big areas to move in (except some water areas).

OBSTACLES: 16/20

Water………

BONUSSES AND SUBTRACTIONS:

WATER!!!!!! +3pts

TOTAL: +3pts

TOTAL SCORE: 76/100

RATING: 7.5

FINAL COMMENT:

I might be overrating this but since I love water, I don’t care!!!