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Jun 4, 2001, 12:13 AM
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I hope you're all loving this as I certianly am! That battle just shows you how Rumbo has changed and that he means business. Don't you think he's the coolest rabbit alive? Well fine then....



Rumbo - more of the story coming Wednesday....



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Jun 4, 2001, 01:31 AM
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'Nice one, Rumbo!' Louie said

'Cool!' Wild Angel pronounced.

'....' Dr Jones said, 'you're alive?'

'Don't ask me how, Dr, as I don't know..' Rumbo said with a small smile.

'Guys!' Talec said, 'what about Jelze, hes dying here!'

'Yeah and what will be left is Jelze the vampire!' Louie added

'We have to treat him,' Wild Angel said, 'follow us...'

Talec picked up Jelze from Louie's arms and followed Wild Angel and Dr Jones into the forest, who was also followed by Rumbo and Louie...

Within a forest they went up to a specific tree which, up close, didn't look like a tree at all. Wild Angel knocked on it twice and waited for a response. Suddenly, from a nearby bush, a rabbit came out from a tunnel that was secretly buried underneath the bush. The rabbit was Black Sheep...

'Hey Angel what was that racket? ' he asked, then suddenly realised who was present, 'Talec? Louie? Jelze? RUMBO?'

Rumbo smiled, 'Yup I'm still alive, Black!'

Black rushed down the tunnel so the others could follow him in. The tunnel lead to a large underground base that held about twenty other rabbits, some that had never been seen before...

'This is our small base,' Wild Angel joked, 'where our resistance is being held.'

'I see,' Talec replied, 'so what is your name, Angel is it?'

'Just call me Nobara.'

'Okay, Nobara?'

They both smiled.

Louie looked around to see if there was anyone he knew. There wasn't...

All the rabbits present saw Rumbo and stopped what they were doing, just staring back at him.

'Um...' Rumbo started, blushing slightly.

'Yes this is Rumbo Rabbit!' Nobara commented, 'he saved our lives from one of those giant robots, again!'

'What do you mean again?' Rumbo asked.

'There was another one a few hours back, when the world first became New Carrotus...it attacked and then disappeared...'

'You sure it wasn't the same one?'

'No, it left to head West and had the ame GARGANTUAN written on iit. It was much bigger then TITAN.'

'Great!' Louie said out loud, 'I'm useless against those things. I can only help against vampires...'

'Which reminds me, Talec said, carrying Jelze over to the centre of the room, 'Jelze needs to be treated, he's been poisoned by a vampire.'

'Um...by me actually....' Louie explained, 'when Nebula took my mind over...'

'Nebula's been doing a lot of that,' Rumbo commented, 'he's taken over Blade's mind so he can use TIME travel...'

'And he's brought those vampires from the past!' Louie added.

'What about the creations?' Dr Jones said.

'The what?' Talec asked.

'Those rabbits back there that were being controlled by Nebula...'

'So that's why you shot them, Rumbo said with a smile, 'thought you'd turn nasty on your own kind...'

Dr Jones looked at him and smiled slightly, 'Still got your old sense of humour, huh Rumbo?'

'Thats the only thing I still got,' Rumbo said, admiring his trenchcoat, 'Plus the golden sword.'

'So what do you think Nebula's up to?' Nobara asked, taking a bottle of medicine from a cabinet at the back of the room. She gave it to Talec and told him to give Jelze the whole bottle. There was only half left anyway. Talec carefully placed the bottle in Jelze's mouth.

'He's bringing things from the past into our present.' Talec said, still holding the bottle as Jelze slowly guzzled the mixture down.

'Could mean he's bringing them from the future as well,' Rumbo said, 'with Blade it is possible...'

A small sound was felt in Rumbo's head....a gentle whisper....

'We have to figure this out,' Talec said, giving Jelze what was left of the mixture. The green started to fade. Talec carefully lowered him to the floor.

'He'll be alright in about half an hour,' Nobara said, 'but for now we have to find this Gargantuan...Rumbo you up to destroying it? Rumbo....RUMBO!'

Nobara suddenly realised that Rumbo had gone, up the tunnel and out of the base. The sound inside his head was getting louder.....

'Lets get after him...' Black Sheep said as he clambered up the ladder, followed by Talec, Louie and Nobara....



In the forest the sound within Rumbo's head became too unbearable...

In the forest, waiting for him was Blade.

'Hello, Rumbo...' Blade said, drawing out his sword, 'I think it is time for a rematch.'

Rumbo didn't do anything. Instead he stood there, clutching his forehead. The other 4 rabbits emerged from the tunnel and saw Rumbo and Blade.

'Rumbo!' Louie shouted, 'Do something!'

Rumbo collapsed to his knees. Something was happening...

Blade only watched, knowing that he hadn't done a thing....he had only followed them

Rumbo started to glisten with bright white light, the shape of his body changing significantly.

'What the..' Blade said out loud.

Rumbo screamed as the white light and the pain became too unbearable. Rumbo's head began to change, change to spikey hair.... His ears weren't as floppy anymore....

His neck became thinner and around it was a small hankerchief with a funny pattern. His shoulders were rounder and thinner. He no longer carried a gun...merely white hands and red fur. His body was the same, except red and white alternately. Down his right side was what looked like a massive scratch, which had an insane pattern on it, looking like ancient writing. His legs became thinner and longer. All that was left was.....this.





All it said was, 'Lets rock this joint!'



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Jun 4, 2001, 12:22 PM
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Man, why am i missing all the action? Anyway, continue!
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Continue!continue!
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Jun 5, 2001, 01:47 PM
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this is my profile so.. kindly addapt my character to it.
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Jun 5, 2001, 02:59 PM
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Um, interesting pic, Rumbo. Cool storie, continue!
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Jun 5, 2001, 10:56 PM
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-LET BATTLE COMMENCE-



??????? Vs Blade



'What the....??' Talec said out loud, staring at the red rabbit in front of them, which had a wicked and happy grin on its face. It was staring back at Blade, who looked on cautiously.

'Hehehehehe' the rabbit quivered, 'I'm gonna show you the true meaning of fighting!'

'What in Nebula's name are you?' Blade shouted out

'Nebula? Mmmm I remember that name, somehow I feel RELATED to him!' the rabbit suddenly held out his hands and bright yellow flames ignited from them. Suddenly from behind Blade trees started to grow at a very rapid rate, surrunding the back of Blade so he couldn't escape.

Blade looked around, then back at the rabbit, 'WHO ARE YOU?'

'I'm what you could call a Hell's Angel, the powers of the bad but with the soul of the good...'

'Those powers...' Talec started...

'Yes, Talec!' Hell's Angel said, 'The powers I hold are the ones of Nebula!'

'Damn thee!' Blade said, running at him with his sword. Hell's Angel jumped over Blade and spun round to face Blade. Blade turned round and this time didn't charge. Instead he held up his left hand and clicked his rabbit fingers. After a few seconds about five vampire rabbits appeared from behind Hell's Angel.

'Oh no...' Louie started.

'Hah!' Hell's Angel said, suddenly creating about 5 stakes in the palms of his hands.

'What the...' Blade started...

Hells Angel spun round and threw the stakes away from his hands, each going towards one of the vampire rabbits. The stakes went through each vampires' heart perfectly, killing them instantly.

'Oh my god...' Dr Jones pondered.

Hell's Angel turned and faced Blade again, 'Still wanna fight me?'

Blade didn't reply. Instead he created a time warp behind him and jumped into it, disappearing in a matter of seconds. They all guessed where he might be heading to.

The battle was over...
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Jun 5, 2001, 11:33 PM
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Everyone please go to my site now and click on the mp3.com link. Send a free greetings card from there and have a look on it. Its free and it'll help me out a lot. Thanks everyone!



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Err,here's my profile's update:



for 1. i never say uh-oh or help or anything like that, cause err.. fear? never heard of it.







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Name: Louie 'The Slayer' Diamondium.



Race: Vampire rabbit, First priest of the god of light giving him

incredible strength (wich means that i can fight ROBOTS TO RUMBO)



Born: KelCatuk on Carrotus.





Know family (so far): Ducky (cousin) and Daughter (will remain

a secret untill i write about her) And someone told him he has

a brother but he doesnt know who it is yet.



Behavior: Curious, Adventures, gets shizofrenic sometimes

(dont blaim me, you'd be shizo to after beein locked up in

a grave for over a year) and a pleasent person to be around.



Special: Can float trough the air but not to high, he needs

to drink blood to survive and sometimes this causes problems,

Can ask the god of light for help.



Weapons and abbilities:



Chaos, a gun that can fire both wooden and silver bullets and

cuts them in the right size. It also understands commands like.

(it comes to me).

(Guess i dont have to tell you what it does when i

say this huh?)

(Turns invisible when i say dissapear, it

can also fire in the invisible mode and when i say appear, it

just appears again)



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ShadowDancing: I can give orders to shadows such as, hold a person

and gather around me (wich makes me harder to notice and the people

that are near me)



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Music of the Elements: I have a flute that was given to me by

the god of light, i can give commands to the elements water and earth



===



Stuff that comes in handy: I can talk all languages in

the universe.



Appearence: Black fur with some red streaks here and there,

Deep blue eyes and long ears that addapt to his mood,

Wears a pair of old dusty jeans and a hawaiian shirt (Orange

with yellow flowers) and a pair of army shoes. (im not really

a latest fashion type)



Other items he carries: Wallet and err.. a wooden stake probably



Height: 6'4

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I sense some self conceededness in here! WILD ANGEL... uhh, somewhat just kidding... ah yes, interesting picture...
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Watching Blade disappear into the warp, they saw the red rabbit run off into the distance. Nobody went after it. They didn't know what had happened. They were all confused, alone, scared. They thought Rumbo was truely dead...



Louie didn't go back to the resistance base like the others. He went back to the village where the numerous dead rabbits lie. His black rabbit fur matched the darkness of the night sky to sheer perfection.

-Oh Leonie- he said to himself -I miss you-

Slowly he walked over to the dead rabbits.



Talec watched from the forest.



Louie bent down to one of them, looking for a large bullet hole wound...



He watched Louie with wonder...



Slowly he placed his mouth over the wound, sucking in the fresh blood from the dead rabbit victim.



Talec sighed. He had a fair idea what Louie was going through.



Louie got up, wiped the blood away from the fur around his mouth and moved to the next one. He began to feel sick...



Talec ran over to Louie...



He had collapsed...



Talec found Louie lying on the floor, trying to get up. Talec helped him so he was sitting up on the ground.

'Are you alright?' Talec asked.

'You...you saw me drink...?'

'The blood...yes Louie...I remember you saying you were a vampire too.'

Louie let out a cold sigh.

'You were hungry I guess.'

'Indeed, Talec...'

Louie pulled out a gun, 'Seen one of these before?'

'Erm...what is it Louie?'

'Chaos, one of a kind.'

'You never used it before...'

'I couldn't...something was wrong...'

'Was it broken?'

'...no....I couldn't face using it...not against those vampires...'

'?? What do you mean those ones? They're like...'

'Didn't you notice something, Talec?'

'...what?'

'Their faces? Didn't you notice the fact of who they looked like?'

Talec tried to remember some of them. There was only one that appeared to him...

'One looked like ME!'

'Yes, and me, and Jelze...'

'But why?'

'Nebula...I don't know why exactly but theres only one explanation...to why this could have happened...'

'A parallel dimension?'

'Does such a thing exist, Talec?'

'...'

'No, exactly. There is another reason, if TIME travel was involved...'

Talec thought for a moment. If it wasn't a parallel dimension then those vampires really were them...

'You mean from the future...?'

'Some time in the future we're gonna be attacked by vampires, have our blood sucked and we'll become one of them!'

'Then we'll be sent back into the past?'

'To today's date!'

'Nebula's showing us our future!'

'He's making us scared.'

'Louie...'

'Talec we're gonna become vampires! We can't change TIME can we?'

'Louie, if that were true then we'd never be able to restore Carrotus, will we?'

'...Let's hope I'm wrong...'

'Yes..lets'

The two of them sat there and watched the moon hover above in the midnight sky. As they sat a rabbit footed individual approached them from behind. It was a blue rabbit....
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Jun 7, 2001, 06:59 AM
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Talec and Louie turned round, it was Rumbo...



'Hey guys...'

'Hey Rumbo, where did you go?' Talec asked, 'You alright?'

'Yeah, why shouldn't I?'

'...Don't you remember what happened?'

'Remember what?'

'Maybe he doesn't...' Louie stated

'...Can we talk about this later?'

'Sure, Rumbo, lets go.'

Talec and Louie got up and headed back into the forest. Rumbo just stood there, watching them go...

'You coming, Rumbo?' Tale asked.

'I'll stay out here, try seeing if anyone's alive...' Rumbo replied, standing there, watching them.

They decided to leave him and headed off into the forest, back to the resistance base.

Rumbo still stood there, an angry face appeared on his face, 'PITIFUL RABBITS...'

Rumbo walked over to one of the creations, a possessed follower of Nebula..

'Oh dear, my pretties, my worshippers...' Rumbo said to them, 'If only you hadn't been killed on such a glorious day, the day when the plan for all rabbit life to be destroyed begins!'

Somehow this didn't sound like Rumbo....

'To start with, my trustworthy Gargantuan, unlike TITAN, will deminish that resistance that opposes I, the creator...'

'Rumbo' then closed his eyes and breathed in heavilly, summoning Gargantuan to head this way...

'HAHAHAHAHAHAHA....' he shouted continuously.



The rest of the resistance heard the laughter. They went out of the forest to see what was going on...

Talec, Blacksheep, Jelze (who had now recovered almost completely), Nobara and of course the Last Patriot stood, watching an ecstatic Rumbo Rabbit standing beside the creations, laughing his head off...

'Rumbo...?' Jelze started,

A crack of thunder filled the sky.

'What's wrong with him....?' Nobara asked.

'That's not Rumbo.' Louie said.

'You what?' Blacksheep asked.

'He didn't remember that change. It's not Rumbo...'

'Then who is it?' Nobara asked.

'...' Talec started, '....Nebula!'

'Oh god!' Blacksheep stated

'HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!'

'What's he done with Rumbo?' Jelze said

'Nothing!' came a voice from behind them all. Running to the scene was noneother then Rumbo Renegade Rabbit, with his blaster drawn out and a very unhappy face on. He jumped over the crowd and stood, watching what appeared to be himself.

'Rumbo' turned and faced Rumbo, 'I see you have returned! Too late you traitor!'

As Rumbo was thinking of a response something came over from beyond the mountains. It looked like TITAN but was much bigger, with greater strength and greater power....

'Gargantuan!' Nobara screamed.

'Great!' Louie stated.

'Now what?' Jelze uttered.

But before anyone knew what to do Rumbo Renegade Rabbit ran at Rumbo, firing shots wildly at him. They all missed, for Nebula jumped, stopped in the air, and corkscrewed down right on Rumbo, making him collapse to the floor.

'RUMBO!' Talec shouted out.

Louie began to run to his aid.



-LET BATTLE COMMENCE-

Rumbo and Louie Vs Nebula/Rumbo

'Try and stop me!'Nebula shouted back.

Louie ran to Rumbo and helped him up. He still had his gun in his hand.

'Lets kill this freak!' Louie said, drawing out Chaos.

'Agreed!' Rumbo said, jumping up and beginning to fire at Nebula. Nebula didged them all at a great speed and, as he ran over to Gargantuan, changed his shape into a red rabbit, one that looked like his true identity, even if it was just a vision of Nebula.

'Try shooting this!' Nebula shouted, suddenly disappearing into thin air, leaving only Gargantuan as their nearest threat.



-LET BATTLE COMMENCE-

Rumbo, Louie, Talec, Blacksheep, Nobara, Jelze Vs Gargantuan.



'Jesus!' Louie said.

'Who?' Jelze asked.

'Never mind.'

'Oh...'

Gargantuan came closer and closer to them....

Suddenly, from behind the rabbits came the fire of a rocket as it blasted towards Gargantuan's chest. The rocket exploded and caused minor fragments of Gargantuan's body off. They all turned and saw who had fired it...

'DR JONES!' Nobara and Talec shouted out.

He had changed his arm into a rocket-launcher.

'Kick ass!' Dr Jones said to them with a big grin.



'Lets kick it!' Jelze said

'Let's do it!' Nobara said

'Gargantuan no more!' Louie said

'Down with Nebula!' Blacksheep said.

'Agreed!' Talec said

'...' Rumbo said...



This battle will conclude sometime tomorrow! Until then, post me ur replies!



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Jun 7, 2001, 07:22 AM
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Ahh,

greatness, thnx for readin the profile Rumbo
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Jun 7, 2001, 11:16 AM
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ne time dude
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Ah. Very nice, Rumbo

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TIME Central sounds really nifty



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Nebula warped back to the top of the skyscraper, a big smile on his evil face appeared....

Lori and Spaz stood in fright

'What did you do?' Spaz spat at him

'Just gave your friends a little ride to go through.' he chirped

'...WHO?' Lori shouted at him.

'If you think Dr Jones is involved then you are correct.'

'...No....' Lori sihed and bowed her head, 'please dont hurt him...'



more coming later
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wOw, quite prolific, Rumbo
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Wot he said.



More?
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...Sorry....been having exams! The story continues from where it left off:



Nebula's smile became eviler by the second.

Lori started to cry, tears of fright trickled down her rosy cheeks.

Spaz was angry.

'What are you planning, Nebula?' he shouted at him.

'HAHAHAHAHAHA!' Nebula bellowed, 'THEY WON'T KNOW WHAT HIT THEM!'

Suddenly from a warp came a potential harmless and small purple rabbit, who had a hunched back and had no real smile on his face at all.

'Master,' the little rabbit called out, 'Robo-Jazz preparations are complete. Shall you wish to get him now?'

'Yes...' Nebula said, looking up at the dark sky that he had created so lustfully, 'I shall appear as...mmm...what do you think, Lori?'

'LEAVE MY BROTHER ALONE!' Lori called out at him.

'YEAH!' Spaz added, not really sure what he should do.

'HAHAHAHA!' Nebula boomed, 'DON'T YOU UNDERSTAND? I AM THE MASTER OF CARROTUS NOW! I CONTROL BOTH TIME AND EVERY WORLD IN EXISTENCE! MY DREAMS ARE COMING ALIVE!'

'What is this Robo-Jazz?' Spaz asked him, in a more subtle tone.

'Remember Blaze?'

'...Yeah...'

'Think of it as a prototype for Jazz...the same as Blaze for Rumbo...'

'...You.....'

'What obsenity are you going to call me now, Spaz?' Nebula said, turning to face him and his frightened sister, 'I am fed up with you. If you're not careful I'll use your sister as.........'

Spaz and Lori looked at him with frightened expressions.

'....Wait a min.....ute...' a large evil tooth-filled grin appeared under Nebula's nose, 'THATS IT! FORGET ABOUT JAZZ! I'LL USE THE GIRL!'

'Are you sure?' the purple rabbit asked.

'YES!' he boomed, 'Rumbo won't be able to fight back because of....his love for her....HAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA!'

'YOU LEAVE LORI ALONE, NEBULA! THIS IS BETWEEN YOU AND...'

'NEVER! ITS ME AGAINST CARROTUS, THE OLD CARROTUS. THAT NON-EXISTANT CARROTUS THAT I CHANGED. NO WAY IS IT GOING BACK TO THE WAY IT IS. NEVER!'

'...Don't resist...' Lori said with a sigh to Spaz, her head bowed down, 'If I resist he'll hurt you...' she got up and walked over to Nebula.

'Lori, wait!' Spaz said to her. He ran over to her but Nebula pushed him back. He collapsed onto the ground again...

'A wise decision, Mrs Jackrabbit....shall we begin?'

'Lets!' said the purple rabbit, walking over to Lori. The purple rabbit gazed into Lori's eyes, making her suddenly feel sleepy. After a few seconds she dozed into a deep sleep. The purple rabbit carried Lori off into a warp, leaving Spaz with tears in his eyes....
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Meanwhile...



Rumbo, Louie, Talec, Blacksheep, Nobara, Jelze Vs Gargantuan.



'Hey!' Dr Jones called out from the forest, 'I'm helping too!'



-ENTER DR JONES-



'Thanks man!' Jelze said.

'...Thanks.' Rumbo said.

'...About earlier, Rumbo...'

'Don't matter, Doctor...'

'...'

'Hey save the silent chats till after!' Nobara said, 'We have to take this thing down!'

'It's pretty big!' Talec explained.

'No kidding!' Blacksheep added.

'Jelze....'

'Yes Rumbo?'

'You got the hang of time travel yet?'

'Of course!'

'Talec?'

'Ready as ever, Rumbo...'

'Right, then hold onto me, both of you!'

Jelze and Talec took one arm of Rumbo's each. Rumbo closed his eyes as a yellow aura enlightened his entire body. The glow spreaded down his arms and onto Talec and Jelze.

'Lets go!' Rumbo shouted as they suddenly disappeared. Only a few light seconds into the future did they appear, this time on TOP OF GARGANTUAN!

'Jesus christ!' Talec said, 'You trying to get us killed?'

'There's a hatch' Jelze said, looking down at Gargantuan's metallic bald head. Indeed there was, leading down inside it.

'I know,' Rumbo said, 'I saw it on the TITAN version. I assumed the same for this one.'

'We getting inside?' Jelze asked.

'Damn right!' Talec said, running over to the hatch and opening it. It didn't take long, a few turns of the wheel and it flipped open automatically.

'Guys!' Rumbo called out, 'Distract it! Try disarming it. You won't be able to destroy it!'

'Not another distraction job!' Louie said, 'Why can't we destroy it?'

'Titanium!' Rumbo roared as he went down the hatch, follwed by Jelze and then Talec.

'He's right!' Dr Jones said, 'The main bodies made of it!'

'The arms are a different colour!' Blacksheep pointed out, 'They're a different metal. Most likely a damageable one!'

'Is that a word?' Nobara asked.

'Doesn't matter!' Dr Jones said, 'Let's just break it!'

His arm suddenly changed to a mighty rocket launcher.

'WOW MAN!' Louie said, 'How can you do such a thing?'

'Don't ask...' Dr Jones said, 'Don't ask!'



To be continued shortly.....
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W00ps, forgot to mention. I'm a girl.







Well, terribly good, Rumbo.

Besides that.



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I was wondering when you would say that...
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From inside the Gargantuan, Rumbo, Jelze and Talec began to look for the CPU, in other words the 'brain'. Knowing Nebula's contraptions it would lie somewhere other then the head, but they decided to check anyway.

Inside the head was a gigantic purple crystal that appeared to glow every so often. Around it were tons of wires that connected to diferent sockets that lined the inside of the Gargantuan's skull. The purple crystal seemed to be generating some kind of energy that glowed around it. This also appeared to be making the Gargantuan alive.



'This must be the source,' Talec said, 'the energy is being transferred around the body.'

'But if we destroy this what will happen?' Jelze asked.

'It'll explode.' Rumbo said without a doubt, 'it's rigged. We cannot touch it.'

'So what do you suggest?' Talec asked.

'We stop the energy from being transferred.'

'How?'

'Transferring it to somewhere else.'

'Such as?'

'I don't know yet, Talec.'

'...'



They all began to think. The wires themselves seemed to be touching the energy and changed colour from this impact.

'The wires!' Talec said, 'They are carrying the energy!'

'So we have to alter the wires!' Jelze said.

'I got it!' Rumbo said.

Suddenly there was a loud shunt that catapulted the three rabbits to one end of the room. Gargantuan was taking some damage.



Dr Jones launched his rocket launcher and hit the Gargantuan straight on the head.

'Yee Ha!' he shouted out loud, to which everyone looked at him oddly.

'Aim for the arms and legs!' Louie said, drawing out his Chaos an firing at its left hand. The impact of the weapon on the hand had some effect, tearing a 'ligament' from two of the fingers.

'Nice one!' Black Sheep said.

'Thanks!' Louie said back.

'I'll take a shot at the gap!' Dr Jones said, firing his rocket launcher. It was a direct hit all the way.

The explosion tore away all five fingers, leaving a large gap of wires and circuitry.

'HA HA!' Dr Jones shouted out. Everyone congratulated him.

Gargantuan now made his move. From the gap of the hand came a rocket launcher equipped with 5 rockets. Gargantuan was waiting for them to do that.

'Ugh oh.' Nobara said, stepping back slightly. That little step wasn't really going to help.

'Run!' Louie said as the rocket launcher fired its first rocket.

The rabbits ran as the Gargantuan began to move after them. The rabbits went into the forest, Dr Jones firing another rocket without much consideration for aim. He was too frantic with running away.

The rocket only hit Gargantuan on the left knee and did nothing.

Gargantuan roared at them as it picked up speed, tearing its way through trees.



'Yikes!' Jelze said as the Gargantuan began moving.

'Whats happening?' Talec said out loud.

'They're distracting it!' Rumbo said, 'We'd better hurry up. We don't know if they're headin towards another village or worse!'

'Good point.'

'Yeah!'

'Okay,' Rumbo started, 'how are we going to transfer the wires back to it?'

'Can't we just disconnect them?' Jelze asked.

'Not sure,' Talec said, 'They might be rigged.'

'No,' Rumbo said, 'They won't be rigged, but if we transfer ALL that energy to one source...'

'Its gonna blow!' Jelze continued.

'Yes. That means once we do it we have to get out of here fast. Jelze I want you to go back to the others and tell them to lead Gargantuan to an isolated area where nobody is!'

'Why me?'

'Because you can't die yet!'

'Whats that supposed to...'

'He means that if we don't make it at least you will!' Talec said.

'You're the TIME Guardian remember?' Rumbo said, 'You have a reason to live. We, well I don't.'

'Neither do I!' Talec said, 'I'm an ex-Guardian. I can't help.'

Jelze gulped and said, 'I can't...'

'You can and you will!' Rumbo said, placing his hands on Jelze's shoulders. What he didn't know was that Rumbo was creating a TIME field around him, which would teleprt him anyway, whether he liked it or not.

'You being all sentimental on me?' Jelze asked.

'Not really,' Rumbo said as Jelze's body began to glow.

Jelze suddenly looked down, realising what Rumbo was doing, 'RUMBO, DON'T DO THIS!'

'Sorry friend,' Rumbo said, letting go as Jelze suddenly disappeared, travelling down to where the other rabbits were. They were still running.



'He's gaining! Black Sheep said.

'Obviously!' Nobara said.

Suddenly Jelze appeared in front of them.

'What the...' Dr Jones started, 'What are you doing here?'

'Lead Gargantuan to an isolated area!' Jelze said straight away.

'What do you...'

'JUST DO IT!' he shouted, 'Rumbo has a plan and we need to get him out of here, fast!'

They all began to exit the forest from the North, heading towards the mountain range. Gargantuan fired another rocket, this time destroying a few trees and creating a new forest fire. Luckily it couldn't really see them and so missed them entirely.



'We have to do it soon!' Rumbo said.

'But what if they haven't lead to an isolated place?' Talec asked.

'We can't just wait!'

'Then what else can we do, let people die?'

Rumbo shook his head, 'No, but we can't wait forever!'

Suddenly Rumbo felt a tiny feeling inside his head, which began to grow by the second.

'Lets wait another minute or so before we begin.'

'...'

'We have to be ready to escape, the explosion could be instantaneous!'

'...'

'Rumbo are you listening?'

'...Lori...'

'What?'

'Lori, she's in TIME Central!'

'What? How do you!'

'We have to do it now! We have to save Lori, she's in grave danger!'

'Oh no...'

'Come on Talec, please!'

'Wait!'

'What?'

'I'll stay, you go and help Lori.'

'But what about...'

'Forget about me, Rumbo! Like I said I'm just an ex-Guardian.'

'Oh don't give me that!'

'Rumbo! Do you wanna save Lori or not?'

'...Of course!'

'THEN GO!'

Both were then silent. Rumbo didn't know what to say.

'Rumbo...go...'

Rumbo nodded with sheer guilt and began to concentrate. After a few seconds he disappeared, heading into TIME.

'Okay...' Talec said, 'I suppose it is time...'



The rabbits had now lead Gargantuan out into the mountains. They were now waiting for Rumbo and Talec to destroy Gargantuan.

'Come on!' Jelze said.

'Please, now!' Nobara said.

'Do it guys!' Louie said.



Talec had all the wires into the crystal except for one. Holding it carefully, he stared at it...realising what might happen to him... He wasn't thinking about saving his life anymore.

'I'm....just....' he began, holding the wire up to the crystal. It was only a few centimetres away from it....'an......'

The wire touched the crystal. Suddenly sparks came off of the crystal. It was going to explode for definite....'....ex-Guardian.....'

Talec closed his eyes. He never opened them again.....



Gargantuan exploded in the midst of the mountain range, first its head cracked open revealing dark purple energy that spurtted out everywhere. The rest of the body then exploded with it, leaving only a pile of sharred and dented metal, all blackened and useless.

'...Guys?' Jelze called out.

No reply.

'Rumbo?'

...

'Talec?'

...

Jelze's eyes began to wet. To them both of them didn't survive. Only half of that statement was true....
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The rabbits left the wreckage of Gargantuan and headed back for the resistance base.



Rumbo had travlled to TIME Central, where he knew that Lori was in danger



Talec was nowhere to be seen



'..drifting...endlessly......through TIME.........'



Rumbo stood at TIME Central's main gates.



'.....not stopping....not heading back.......not heading forward........not even going nowhere............'



The gates opened. Rumbo stepped through. Once again he had gone forth....



'...distant memories lost....new founded memories forgotten.....'



He walked into the city. Nobody was there. TIME Central was empty. Nebula must have changed TIME Central too. There was an unwanted presence in the air.



'.....Past, Present, Future, Nebula.........'



An old 'friend' of Rumbo's was there.....



'...Sortec, Laman, Vortec, Karman.....'



...The purple rabbit. His scent was unexplicable.



'Gargant!' Rumbo said out loud, 'Show thee and prepare for your end...'

'...' Silence

'I know you're here, Gargant, using this as your devil's playground...'

'...Maybe so, Rumbo Renegade Rabbit...'

'Where are thee, Gargant!'

A small purple rabbit came out from behind a distant barrel, 'Here I be, oh great Rumbo. Kill me now!'

Rumbo only stood there. Gargant was prepared and he knew it.

'Okay Gargant, show me your weapon!'

'A weapon,' Gargant started, 'an item or powerful force that deals great or extreme damage upon the unfortunate foe...'

'...What are you...?'

'The weapon, once destroyed, makes the user unarmed and powerless. But, Rumbo, what if you are UNABLE to destroy the weapon...?'

'What are you...?'

Suddenly, jumping down from one of the closer buildings was a robotic rabbit, covered from head to toe in pure metal. One of the ears still had fur visible, bright yellow fur...

'LORI!' Rumbo shouted out.

'Can you really destroy the one you love, Rumbo?' Gargant said to him.

'No!' Rumbo said, 'Don't do this! Why do you still follow Nebula? Your powers will always be greater!'

'True,' Gargant said, 'Naebula isn't the only force to have creation...'

'I still know your dark secret, what you created! Why do you still follow YOUR OWN CREATION?'

The robotic Lori began to walk towards Rumbo...

'Yes, I may have created Nebula, to make him as scary and as powerful as possible. But my subject is merely a tiny reflection of its creator. I hold the true power!'

'So why is he the master over you?'

Lori began to run...

'I'm afraid I don't have time to tell you, Rumbo, for your life is about to end.'

Suddenly the robotic Lori did a flying kick at Rumbo, plummeting him backwards onto the soft ground of TIME Central.

'I am afraid that I must leave you two to get to know each other a bit more. I am afraid that in her state she will never love you back...'

'DAMN YOU GARGANT!'

'HAHAHAHAHAHA' Gargant wailed as he went off into a TIME warp, heading back to where Nebula still stood with a frightened Spaz.



-LET BATTLE COMMENCE-

Rumbo Vs Robotic Lori



'...Lori? Can you hear me?'

'...'

'I don't want to fight you...'

Lori went at Rumbo, kicking him as he still lay on the ground. She got him right in the chest.

'ARGH!'

Lori stepped back, preparing another kick. This time it got him in the ribs.

'ARRRGGGGGHH!'

Lori then, with her robotic strength, lifted Rumbo up and threw him over her head onto the ground. Rumbo landed head first, bruising the back of his head.

'LORI, STOP! ITS ME!'

'...'

Lori picked him up again and threw him further into TIME Central. The distance was unbelieveable.

Rumbo fell onto the floor with a THUD, making his blaster fall out from his holster. He saw it, realising that he might only have one option. He discarded it, he couldn't fight and kill her.

'....'

'LORI, PLEASE! ITS RUMBO! DON'T YOU REMEMBER ME?'

Lori picked Rumbo up and punched him right on the chin, then down in the ribs again.

'ARRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH, LORI!'

'....'

Rumbo was becoming weaker.

'STOP!!!!!'

'....'

'LORI, DON'T YOU REMEMBER WHAT I SAID TO YOU ONCE? ABOUT HOW I FELT ABOUT YOU?'

'....'

'I said that I would.....would always love you...'

'....????'

'Lori?' Rumbo thought he had won her over.

'I NEVER LOVED YOU ONCE, RUMBO!'

With robotic Lori still in control, she threw him up high into the air, hoping he would land and most likely die. But Rumbo was prepared, preparing TIME travel so he would land safely on the ground again.

'You're not the Lori I remember...'

'The Lori you remember never loved you anyway...'

'Least she was kind enough to never say!'

'....'

Rumbo drew out his blaster, aiming it right at 'Lori'...

'You wouldn't shoot me!'

'You're right...I wouldn't shoot Lori' Rumbo said, looking as if he was going to turn round and walk away. But just as he did he turned back again, making a quick shot right at robotic Lori's chest. She screamed as it fell to the ground, clutching her chest.

Rumbo walked over to it and said, 'But there's one difference that I clearly noticed...'

He turned and walked away, leaving the robotic Lori to die. As it collapsed into a heap of death, Rumbo uttered, 'You're not Lori...'



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He had better be right about that. I mean, he can't kill off Lori! I was going to do that!
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Rumbo left the robotic Lori to die. However, he had known Gargant. There would be another, another with the real Lori inside....



...drifting endlessly....



Spaz sat and watched as the purple rabbit came back from wherever it had gone to.

'You took your time!' Nebula said at him, swiping his hand to show frustration.

'I am sorry, Nebula!' Gargant said back

'Don't take that tone with me!'

'Why not, MASTER?' Gargant then held up a hand and pointed it at Nebula. Nebula knew what it meant and decided not to reply the way he had intended.

'Lets just get along, alright? I need you for this. After Rumbo is dealt with we will begin the total domination of New Carrotus.'

'Then what will you do with me?'

'I know what you did all those years ago, me being a puppet...'

'Hey what you guys on about?' Spaz said to them.

'Shut up, you stupied red rabbit!'

'Speak for yourself Nebula!'

Nebula was still in the image of a red rabbit, 'Listen Spaz, if you do not...'

'DONT YOU DARE!' Gargant said, 'HE MUST STAY ALIVE!'

'Just because he is one of yours...'

'What do you mean by that?' Spaz said, really confused now.

'Leave the rabbit, maybe he is mine but we may need him to get Rumbo...'

'We agreed that he would die, remember?'

'...'

'Gargant, don't be so hesitant. I know he is your son...'

'SHUT UP!' Gargant said, 'I do not want him to know. Do no worry the Robotic Lori I sent to get him will destroy him.'

'The one in TIME Central?'

'Yes I left them to battle. Do not worry the real Lori is inside it...'

'Good.'

Gargant then disappeared into a TIME warp he created, knowing that he just lied to one of his most destructive experiments. He lied that he was going to kill his son....



Many many miles away in an isolated part of New Carrotus....

'...Ugh...'

'Hey rabbit?'

'....'

'Hey are you alright?'

'Wh..wh...where am...?'

'New Carrotus pal! Life stinks don't it?'

'The...the explosion?'

'What you on about man?'

'I only vaguely remember. I was there. I thought I was....'

'Listen man get up. Looks as if you've had a mighty fall.'

The rabbit got up from the ground and saw that he was confronted by a blue rabbit, wearing nice black shades and some kind of rocket pack on his back.

'Names Splash!' the rabbit said, 'Hero for Hire! You need any help?'

'Um....maybe....I cannot remember much about myself...'

'Least we share the same skin colour. I can reply on you!'

'....Gargantuan!'

'You what?'

The rabbit ran past Splash and began looking around for something, 'Where is the debris? This isn't near the forest. Where am I?'

'This is the east part of Carrotus if you were wondering...'

'Oh no...what's happened?'

'Hey man are you alright? What's your name?'

'My powers, it must mean that I really did die....'

'Hey man what's your name for crying out loud?'

'...Talec...' the rabbit said, 'Ex-Guardian of TIME. Ex-owner of TIMEs powers. That must mean my powers have been passed on...'

'Strange...' Splash said out loud.



Meanwhile...somewhere in the midst of TIME...

Rumbo walked through TIME, unsure what he had to do. From his reckoning Gargantuan was destroyed, Talec was dead and the world was still ruled by Nebula. Rumbo knew of Gargant from when they met in Nebula's realm. It was i actual fact Gargants but his subject grew too powerful and took over. For some reason Rumbo remembered this rabbit, not from that coincidental meeting but from when he was young. Wasn't he a member of that village he grew up him. Didn't he used to sit on his knee and be told stories?



Rumbo shook his head. He felt weak, confused. What if Lori was in that robot? No, she wouldn't have been. That wasn't to be the final encounter. Gargant was playing with him again. He remembered what Gargant had said to him before he left him in Nebula's realm...

'I shall fight thee, yet I shall always protect thee...'

'Why protect?' Rumbo said out loud as he continuously thought up the same plans to try and stop Nebula.

'Because you are my flesh and blood. Well you used to be.'

It was Gargant, who stood behind Rumbo in the midst of TIME. Rumbo turned and faced him.

'Flesh...?'

'Remember all my stories those years ago? Very true they became didn't they? They were stories of your future. TIME had made me tell you such things so you were prepared. I am glad you listened to your old dad...'

'You mean...you're my father?'

(I am your father! Sorry I couldn't resist! )

'Yes son...Rumbo...' he replied, 'You were born at the same time as my other creation...'

'Am I a...?'

'No, not a creation...you had a pure blooded rabbit as a mother. However, since I was not, you grew up with TIME's powers. That is why you were chosen. TIME saw that one of my creations that was meant to build worlds would change and become a monster. That monster was Nebula...'

'When the village was destroyed...?'

'I fled back to my realm...knowing that I may never see you again as I might die and because you were with TIME, not me. I never imagined you would grow up the way you have...'

'I don't understand this....'

'I am sorry you had to find out this way. And no Lori was not in that robot. She is alive and well.'

'Where?'

'I cannot say...'

'WHERE!'

'I shall tell you in a moment,' he replied,' I must first show you something...'
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