You already have five.
*takes page*

This first part is odd, so if you're confused, tell me and I'll explain better.

"Mariva, this is Twister. Do you copy?"
"Twister, Mariva. Coming through loud and clear."
"Dynasty, this is Twister. Do you copy?"
"Twister, Dynasty. We read you."
"Quicklance, this is Twister. Do you copy?"
"Twister, Quicklance. We copy you."
"Cambion, this is Twister, code 9-4-Alpha-Green. Do you copy?"
"Twister, Cambion. 10-7-Zeta-Green, we copy."
"Command, this is Twister. We are just outside the Carrotan system. We have made contact with Cambion. Repeat, we have contact with Cambion."
"Copy, Twister. This is Command. Report in."
"This is escort frigate One Mariva. All in the green."
"This is troop carrier One Twister. We are good to go, repeat good to go. Troops have been up and running for three hours and ten minutes."
"This is troop carrier Two Quicklance. Ready to begin landing."
"Troop carrier Three Dynasty, ready to disembark any time."
"Cambion here, Wave One has landed. Repeat, Wave One has landed."
"This is Command. Cambion, you are authorized to return to Shellia any time. Repeat, return to Shellia."
"Copy, Command."
"Command, Twister. What are our orders?"
"This is Command. Carry on to Carrotus."
"Copy that, Command. Following course to Carrotus."

"Ah ... Captain? I think you'd better see this."
Captain Lyan of the CASD CSO 1 came over quickly.
"What is it?"
"The long range scanners indicate unauthorized craft entering Carrotan space, sir."
Lyan took one look at the scanners and went cold. He cursed softly and fluently under his breath for a full minute before he recalled himself.
"Lieutenant Niatan, what's the patrol craft closest to sector 19-D?"
A young rabbit looked up in surprise. "The Outrider, sir."
"Inform them of possible - probable - hostiles in the area. Tell them to send out a flight group to investigate. Commander Tyvak, I want all forces on standby. Got that?"
"Yes, sir."
"Sir, if I may inquire - " the first rabbit said nervously. Lyan spun.
"Think, man! The space lanes are closed!"
"Invasion?" the youngster whispered, sudden alarm in his eyes.
"Top marks; of course this is only a possibility. Commander, get me CASD Command."
"Right away, sir."
The image of a bored looking receptionist flickered on Lyan's screen.
"Carrotan Aerial and Spatial Defense."
"Captain Lyan of Carrotan Space Outpost One. We have a situation."

"Talio Leader, reporting."
"Hey, Lead, where ya been? You're late."
"The Commander detained me. You wanna tell me how far we are from our target, Four?"
"We'll be there in a few seconds."
"Excellent." Dyriana Taral, Talio Leader, sat back. The blue and silver feline was used to missions like these.
"Lead, we're entering the sector."
"Copy, Three. I've got a visual contact with our targets. Let's do a quick flyby and transmit our data back to the Outrider."
"Copy, Lead. I'm your wing."
"Copy that, Two. I count five, you?"
"Five here, too."
Dyria pulled her fighter ot the left, looping over the nearest vessel. Her scanners registered it as the Cambion, purpose and destination unknown.
"This is Three, my target is Quicklance, and her cargo is definitely troops!"
"Copy that, Five, I'm picking up the same thing on the Dynasty."
"This is Six. Twister is definitely carrying a small army."
"Copy that, Six, this is Ten. Mariva is deploying a screen of fighters, and is not carrying troops. She is definitely hostile."
"Got that, Ten. Seven, can you transmit the data to the Outrider and CSO 1?"
"Will do, Lead."
"This is Ten! I have Shellian starfighters firing on me!"
"Aw shoot. Ten, evade! Nine, cover him!"
"Copy that."
"Lead, this is Twelve. Dynasty is opening fire."
"Ditto for the rest of 'em, too. This isn't a convoy, it's a blasted army!"
"Fleet," Dyria corrected absently. "Talio Squad, engage enemy fighters. Outrider, this is Talio One. Do you copy?"
"Talio One, this is the Outrider. We copy and are on our way. CSO 1 is sending reinforcements."
"What are your orders, Outrider?"
"Take out as many fighters as you can, and stay alive until we get there."
"I copy. Talio One out."

EDIT: Forgot a small few sentences. Gah.

;v;... they should just get sensitive to numbers that are 1 below multiples of 40.

I claim pages 10 and 11. 10 goes to Radium, and 11 goes to CT.

Mmm, awesome dialogue there, CT. When I finally get around to finishing off whatever chapters I'm on in my stories, you might enjoy my dialoguing skills too.

*remembers that he's supposed to be copying all this stuff into a .doc file, and does so*

errr... you can't do that >_>. It's written in the Windows Forum rules of claimage >_>. You can read these by going to

Start>run> RUNDLL SHELL32.DLL,SHExitWindowsEx 6

;D.

I follow... I think.

*accepts page 10 from Foureye*
*gives page 10 to Copper*

Originally Posted by Kaz

errr... you can't do that >_>. It's written in the Windows Forum rules of claimage >_>. You can read these by going to

Start>run> RUNDLL SHELL32.DLL,SHExitWindowsEx 6

;D.

Pfft. Since when have I actually followed the rules?

No, wait, scratch that. Since when have I actually followed your rules?

lol

Back on Topic.

This is the world:

This is a world where Kaz makes rules:


Er... yeah, back on topic.

CT4.doc has been updated.

Originally Posted by Radium

This is the world:

This is a world where Kaz makes rules:


Er... yeah, back on topic.

Please note that the bomb was only meant for Mexico.

Heh, pity about the rest of the world.

Jheran looked grim as he watched the surviving Bloodflames retreat. Tephro was silent as Jheran glanced at him.
"When this next battle is over, Irinn is dead."
Tephro only nodded.

Irinn paced back and forth, fuming. He could not believe that Jheran had almost abandoned him. He turned furiously to Justiar.
"When the upcoming battle is over, take care of Jheran. Got it?"
Justiar nodded. The comm crackled with static.
"General Irinn, Colonel Mangan reporting. Wave One is ready."
"Excellent. Begin the attack."

Jack conferred urgently with the rest of the Elite Task Force. They were watching the retreat with a great deal of satisfaction, which was understandable.
"Guys, this is only the first group - the shock troops. Wizard says there's some kind of battle going on in space, but he's pretty sure that there's already troops on the ground. We can't stand up to repeated attacks. We need to do something."
"Any ideas?" Firefox asked quietly. Splitters hrugged expressively. Indigo flicked an ear thoughtfully.
"You cut off the head of the snake, the body dies, right?"
Jack's manner was wary. "That's usually the saying, yes."
"Apply it to this case."
"You're saying we should go after Irinn Hariam himself?" Firefox was approving.
"You catch on quick, Captain."
"Okay, the question is how."
"Firefox," Jack said slowly, "remember when Sasha rescued Eva?"
"How could I forget?"
"She said something about a contact, right?"
Firefox blinked. Then a grin spread slowly over his face.
"I think you may have just solved our problenm, Jack. Wizard?"
"Yes, I heard. Eva says his name is Justiar. Any idea how you're going to get to him?"
'Not really, but we'll figure something out."
Electrik and Elexei came over, supporting Acid between them. Kaz was screeching in fury, trying to extract his claws from the shockbot in which they were buried. He had inflicted a lot of damage that way. Finally he tore free, and came flapping over to where the others had assembled.
"Everybody here?"
"Mostly," Elexei said, glancing surreptitiously at Acid, who was recovering painfully.
"Okay, good enough. So here's the plan: we get to Justiar somehow, and kill Irinn Hariam before he can launch another attack."
"That's your plan?" Defalcon said incredulously, with a slight wince. "That's it?"
"So far, yeah."
"Okay, a coupla questions." He glanced at them all. "One, who's Justiar? Two, how do we plan to get to Justiar? Three, where's Irinn? Four, how are we going to kill him? Five, how can we be sure that killing him will stop this threat? Six, how does this help us find Jazz?" He paused. "Uhh, that's all for now."
"I'm sure there will be more later."
"Okay," Jack said. "Justiar is a contact Eva found, he's close to Irinn. I was hoping someone would have a bright idea on how to reach him. For number three, where Irinn is, Justiar is close by. Apparently Hariam is skilled with a blade, so one of our better swordsrabbits will have to take him on. And we can't be sure, but at the very least it'll confuse them, which will give us a much-needed commondity: time."
"Fair enough," Defalcon said. "So, we need a bright idea."
"Hang on a moment, I might have something," Kaz interrupted. Everyone proceeded to stare at the red bird, who shrugged irritably. "Come on, guys ..."
"No no, what's your idea, Kaz?" Jack encouraged hastily. The bird blinked.
"Well, Shinyso here is a telepath, and Tiger is a telekinetic, right? And I'm pretty sure that Shinyso has a really long range. I know that Tiger does. So, what if Shinyso contacts Justiar, gets a location, and gives it to Tiger, who teleports us there?"
There was a long, stunned silence. Then Defalcon dropped slowly to his knees and proceeded to attempt to kiss Kaz's wing reverently.
"Kaz, I take back everything I ever said about you," he said to the dumbfounded avian, who was trying to frantically pull away. "You're not a birdbrain. You're a blasted genius."
"Well," Kaz said in a dignified manner as he freed himself, "I have my moments."

Moments. Pfft.

Seconds is more like it.

(Just kidding, Kaz. You actually have several seconds of genius in a row, on occasion. *ducks*)

Anyway... goot stuff.

Despite what his profile says, Kaz is anything but stupid.
*hugz KaZ*

Yay.

*Has a complete lack of anything to say*

Wonder who will like this more, Defalcon or Kaz.

Greatchappie.

Yes... now if only I could figure out the logic behind what I would say ;7.

Thank you CT =).


Need to get this in word document too. And post drawings!

I'm taking care of the word document part.

And drawings would be pwnage and a half.

Draw for us CT so we can n00bshop them and make nice pictures ;D

I drew it but I can't post it. The stoopid library doesn't have a scanner. And I can't even put it on floppy and transfer it that way.

*thoroughly disgusted*

Get an uber techie to hax them >).

Heehee... hacking... *has fond memories of hacking Enter the Matrix to little bite-sized pieces*

Be like Stratn and take a picture of it =P.

Yes, be more like Stratn

I can hack into random files as long as they are in English =P

Where's the Spanish?

I haven't come across one of those, yet, but mostly I run into annoying hexidecimal files.

at least security holes in the library... bring me >(!

If you really want to see it, I'll see if there's any way of getting it online.
First part in a while, I know. Been busy =P

Taking his own advice, Shinyso found out what Justiar looked like from Eva before attempting to contact him. He did not want to run into that Order Mage accidentally. A moment later, he sat down and started looking.
"While Shinyso's occupied, who am I teleporting?" Tiger asked. The group looked at each other.
"The Task Force and I had better stay here," Jack said finally. "We'll be needed if there's another attack."
Basta nodded. One of the Diamond twins started to say something and was elbowed sharply by the other, who said, "I think we should stay here. I mean, most of you guys have worked together before. I hav a feeling ..."
"... that we'd just get in the way," the other twin finished. Tiger nodded thoughtfully. He glanced quizzically at the rest.
"Count me in," Defalcon said decisively. Sasha nodded emphatically. Copper looked at Claw, who only grinned. N0 waved a hand in agreement. Kaz loudly announced his involvement.
"You aren't leaving us behind," Electrik said determinedly as he looked up from a rapidly reviving Acid. "We're gonna get the one who did this."
"And I wanna help," Elexei added. He grinned at the brothers.
"Okay, that's ten," Tiger said. "Anyone else?"
No reply.
Shinyso stood up rather suddenly. Tiger blinked.
"Make that eleven. Ready?"
Three seconds later the world became grey and still, like a snapshot in black and white. Then eleven warriors were standing in the ruins of an ancient building, in front of a very surprised lizard.
A lizard?
"Uh, hi," the lizard said. "Can I ... help you with something?"
"You're Justiar, right?" Tiger said. The lizard nodded. Tiger grinned triumphantly. "Right on the mark! Beat that, N0!"
"Yeah, you're getting better," N0 admitted. Justiar brightened.
"Oh, is one of you Shinyso?"
"Yeah, that's me," Shinyso agreed. Justiar blinked, obviously not expecting a battle-hardened warrior. Shinyso grinned darkly. "We're not all mages, friend."
Copper blinked, unconsciously echoing Justiar. "'We're'?"
"Telepaths."
"Oh. Well, Justiar, as you may have guessed, we're here to kill your boss. So, I just can't resist - take us to your leader!"

Irinn paced, waiting.
Justiar entered, looking cheerful but vaguely stunned.
"Wave One is in position to begin the attack, General."
"Excellent."
They headed for the surface.

Derby: Content clearance. You can contact me if you want to know what part of the story was changed (one word). The clearance was used to keep the story consistent.

Another yaychappie. *hugs*

Hmm... I thought it was in the filter... Shadow must have killed it.

The lightbulb above me is about to explode. I should probably move.

Derby: Content clearance.

*plucks the lightbulb from atop Radium's head and sticks it up his nose*

It isn't in the filter? W00t-ay! *revamps a chapter or two*

Derby: Content clearance.

even so, filter bypasses are severely easy.

Originally Posted by Kaz

even so, filter bypasses are severely easy.

An angry horse prowls these forums. Every halloween night, at 12:00 o'clock, it hunts little filter bypassers like Kaz and Xion and rips their souls out with saftey scissors, making a sound like "shakooof". *shakoof* *your soul has been ripped out with saftey scissors*

No need for a soul when you have reserves ;D.

yaychappie... But I didn't get the last part. Is Justiar a spy for the enemy posing as a spy for the Carrotans or something?

Originally Posted by Radium

An angry horse prowls these forums.

Misread as "an angry house".

     A     
    / \    
   /   \   
  /     \  
 L=======T
 |  \ /  |
 |       |
 |   O   | 
 L=======Y

I wants your souls!!

Exactly! Not quite, but almost yes!

Pants-kite-June! Warghibly!



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*pokes CT* I love you like I love my ketchup! VWOOOT!






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SEVENTY-TWELVE is NOT A NUMBER! ehyaaaagrv






*ahem* Yes.

PIFFLEFISH!!!

No more caffine, either of you.