Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

spend more time on level editing!

great tile but bad level!

I made a level by myself (screenshot)

Not bad at all for a first level. It’s a fairly good level using the Mez01 tileset which is frankly overused. Eyecandy was mediocre, but gameplay actually wasn’t that bad and I had trouble getting stuck even when I was trying. Weapon placement was so-so, as was item placement, but these small faults were forgivable. Overall, this is a slightly above average level, and really good for a first level. I hope to see more levels from this author. I don’t think this quite deserves a download recommendation, but if you really enjoy battle levels or like to see up-and-coming level makers, download away.

Always spend more times on your levels. In fact, a few days is best. If you make a great level in 15 minutes, then, well, wake up.

i dont like this level its kinda unfinishd some walls arent finishd
Candy in it
SugarRush dont work in Mp
and AMMOBOXES Thats a bad idea
Try to SPent more time on jou`r lvl`s
and i dont get it why Funkykiller and Ninja dode rated this so High

~Stil[This review has been edited by Stilettø]

hmm

This level is good for a first one.
I think the tips Ninja Dodo gave are good ones and hac2k should listen to them.

All in all, a very nice level…especially for a first one.

Aiko, it seems your old review doesn’t entirely apply to this version, because the version I downloaded DOES include the Mez tileset. As for the mode it’s for, it’s written in the readme that it works best in multiplayer…

Hack2k, here are some tips for your future levels:
- use the other background layers (1, 2, 3, 5, 6 and 7) and put more decoration/eye-candy in a level.
-think long and hard about the amounts and types of weapons in your level. Finding the perfect balance can realy add to the fun of a level.
-Use tilesets that haven’t been used a million times already.
Good luck.

Ehm, you can’t make a level in 15 minutes, and this is obvious proof. Sorry, but I really don’t like this much at all. It has bad tiling, bad weapons placement and such.

Let me tell you, Hac2k, don’t try to make a level in less than an hour and actually submit it, it is almost preset to get bad reviews. Spend at least a good few hours in front of JCS and take suggestions. You’ll get much better that way.

The author said it took 15 minutes(!) to finish this level and thats what it looks like. There are lots of misplaced tiles/masks, events, weapons etc. and the background music doesnt fit in my opinion. The tileset used is one of Noraa’s great 3dbattle sets (still looks great, even in this level :-).
Now, seriously hac2k: if you really mean to make a level that people could rate high (over 5 points that is) you have to spend lots of hours of work in front of your Jazz Creation Station. Believe me. It needs a lot of effort. And im pretty sure all serious levelmakers and most of the serious reviewers here will agree with me.
Conclusion: It wont make much sense to continue posting "15-minutes-levels" here ‘cause the ratings won’t make you happy i guess. Just play around with JCS and try everything out. Have a look of some great levels and learn from them. Test your levels online and ask for comments. Sorry for the bad rating, i hope this helps :-)

I must say its a cool titleset.
But the lvl is not neat whit to mayne wapens :(
Sorry

Good luch whit the next,
I think thats a cooler lvl!!!

Because i dont see any major improvements, i copied and pasted most parts of my review from the "previous" version of this level. And although the author calls it a "Final 1.2 release", its needs a lot of bugfixing.
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Not my favourite level. In my opinion there is a major lack of good design, eyecandy, length, weapon selection, enemy placement etc..
The blocks in MEZ01 are pretty easy to use, really. But if its your first, hac2k, you surely will get better hour by hour in front of the JCS.
I’m sorry, but i cant give a download recommendation for this level. Four points are ok i think.
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P.S.: I don’t even figured out what mode this is for (Battle? Hurt events! Enemies!), Single Player (Weapons? Exit?).
P.P.S.: You can not say things like "Dont criticize my level!" (see Readme) and post it here. This site is about critizising levels.

Good lvl!!!
There are things to make better.
But its a cool and neat lvl.

Greetz,
FunkyKiller

Next time you create 2 versions of your level(one with the tileset included and one without) just post one. I think this is spamming, just like your flooding messages at my account.

You are subject to get low status soon if you continue acting this way.

Update:

Looks like you uploaded another version. Oh well. And if I delete this version then other version will stop working. Just quit spamming and you won’t get low status.

"Not my favourite level. In my opinion there is a major lack of good design, eyecandy, length, weapon selection, enemy placement etc.. The blocks in MEZ01 (which is, btw, not included in the ZIP) are pretty easy to use, really. But if its your first, hac2k, you surely will get better hour by hour in front of the JCS.
Im sorry, but i cant give a download recommendation for this level. Four points are ok i think."

that is out of order. its my first level and u cant even give me any help or advice -hac2k

Not my favourite level. In my opinion there is a major lack of good design, eyecandy, length, weapon selection, enemy placement etc.. The blocks in MEZ01 (which is, btw, not included in the ZIP) are pretty easy to use, really. But if its your first, hac2k, you surely will get better hour by hour in front of the JCS.
Im sorry, but i cant give a download recommendation for this level. Four points are ok i think.

hmm..the artist said its his first lvl.
its not bad for a first one but, as always, there all still things i have to point him.
at first: the areas are way too far from each other.
second: i got hurt by a floor for no reason (bad idea) there werent spikes or something.
third: the ammo n stuff arent placed very well. but
the good things are that for a first lvl its nice and i would say to the artist: keep going on and you might make a decent battle lvl!

Good level, for a first one. I saw that you have actually practiced with JCS before making this level !! :) Well done.
Here’s a url that can learn you some more advanced jcs-work: http://murmels.virtualave.net/howto.html