Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

what can i say about this level? not really anything i can see wrong with it cause it has a good tileset with everything a good level has and overall very cool but it could use some save points much inprovement i see in you evel though they might be a little short levels

again ill be the critic of your levels i dont like the idea again with the coins how you have to get a certain amount to pass the level i say it would be better in a battle/race type level cause when theres not that many enemies, you need friends to beat up on (lol) boring level overall

i figure its time for me to be the critic for once, or twice, or whatever.
ok the first level was really annoying with the coins and all with too many items in the backround and the part at the end of the first level you can run too far and straight off the ledge and it freezes completely.
second level: bad enemy placement like too many in one place!
third level:it would be better if the water started right when you enter or go to the lower level! the song….er just doesnt fit and once again bad enemy placement and too many carrots makes it too easy unlike the first & second levels
fourth level: bad ammunitions placement and about the underwater part noone likes to go on a long hunt for gems unless its a compition and again too many carrots
last level:umm lights? with this level you could give someone a siezure or something other than that… good so lets have an overview

i can see you spent some time on this pack and from what ive seen its good but if you want to make it great or exelent, consider the following.. every great level is totally original like different tilesets and custom “tunes” that actually match the level OR are cool enough to make up for it. and if you want to know if it is hard enough, get a friend to test it like i do and see what he thinks because you cant change what you upload here once its done. ooh variety of weapons and enemies is a good one too but if this was your first level i can excuse you from most of those. so thats all i have to say to you Mr. Critic!!!

sorry i didnt realize that the first level was carrot cream and i thought it was another level that i had made in my spare time and i cant figure out how to change that sry

nice beat with a techno tune

this level only has a cool tileset