Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

Not my favourite level by far.
There is bad tile placement and almost no eye candy!
Oh dear
this needs a lot of improvement, but as a first it aint bad, and the trigger crate idea is good!

i would rate this if it had the tileset included wit the level! :(

iCeD already mentioned everything…
lots of useless sucker tubes, bad tile placement, no next level setting, bad design so its hard to navigate and so on…
The music also doesn’t fit very good in this level, i think. So if you want to download this, don’t say i didn’t warn you :-)
Very very very LOW four points. I’m still undecided between three and four points…

Yup, it’s another far from perfect level by chris11. The background is simple, tiles horribly placed, useless rooms, dead ends, no next level setting, etc.

chris11, try to look at other highly rated levels as an example. it will help you make better levels.

To sum it up, this is NOT a level download worth. :-P

splash I DO need help could u please help me or anyone I just well…NEED HELP!!!!!!!!!!!

hmm…it seems that u dont learn from your mistakes, do u?
still thos not so beautiful tiles misplacements, no nice things in the background (ok he made it blue, but no kewl stuff like trees). bad eyecandy. playability: not so very well. if u had made things look much better and u had added enemies n stuff, it would have become a nice single player lvl, but as a battle lvl it isn’t very good.
again, build your lvl with a critic’s eye, so dont be content too fast.
thankgod he put in the music file, but i dont know if a next lvl is set, i didnt look this time…
so i suggest u stop spamming this site and go into yer little building room and go working on a kewl lvl the next month. maybe u will make a fine un then, but please dont come here to put yer quick made lvls on.
no download worhty, im sorry

first u say this lvl is WAY better then the rest, then u say u hate yer lvls!
what are u trying to do here?
i suggest u read my review of the jazzaberryland and read the whole of it about the lvl building stuff.

Aiko I hate my lvl’s I make them in 10 mins slots everyday It ***** me off.But I have a new battle that workes only one lvl so far but hey that is a monkey with no head no arms to teeth no nose no ears……

Admins: this should better be deleted, so that the guy gets a chance to re-upload a working version.
By the way: you should calm down a bit, chris11, and spend more time on working on your levels.

I dont have much to add to Splash’s comments here.
This level uses the great “Africa” tileset by Disguise (which is not included in the ZiP; bad idea!) but there are lots of bugs in the level itself (tile placement, enemies etc.).
Design is below average and there is no eyecandy at all. I also had some problems navigation through the level and didnt hear any background music (thats because “quickman.s3m” isn’t in the ZiP file either).
Unfortunately i really can’t recommend to download this one.

Noooooooooo I put the wrong lvl’s in !!!!!!
it wasn’t ment to be that version of my queen lvl and the others bad me bad me(repeted stabbing into chest nosies).

How horride of you I like my @‘s thankyou very much anyway I have a better battle lvl now so ha ha

(This is your last warning. STOP THAT. ~iCeD)

I got an out of memory error when trying to load 2 of these, so I only got to see the “Queen” level, and I wasn’t very impressed with it. The tiling was sloppy and used all wrong, you didn’t do the tubes currectly. (You have to put the tube tiles in layer 3 too to make them work right)

The whole level is very linear and I can’t say I like it that much, sorry.

chris11… don’t personal attack, and don’t summon the horizontal scrollbar. Because of it I have edited your message.

Anyways, I can’t load this because the author forgot the tileset. Bad bad idea.

HELLLOOOOOO can’t you read this is going to be A HUGE sequel lvl pack .
god you are thick (sorry i have to do this)@@@@@@

ahhhhhhh.

(Don’t mess up the scrollbar. It becomes annoying. ~iCeD)

yeah hmm…
i must say this lvl is a bit better then the first, yes. but only a bit. the lvl is way too short and way too lineair. some enemies, some text (which in my eyes a bit childish) and a boss.
but the lvl has a good structure (but it could use some obstacles at some roads), if u would have made it a long lvl with variation of enemies and objects, it would have become a nice lvl. but for now, i can only say it needs fixing…

oh i forgot! no next lvl set and no music. also the tileset should be put into the zip file as well

Well, its his first.
its looking better than average for someones first lvl, but there are major displacements and stuff.
most things arent finished good, leaving strange, weird tiles behind on top of more tiles, if ya know what i mean. big fun were the sparks (dude i have NEVER seen em till now, but i think thats becus i never make 1.24 stuff). but things are too far away from each other, or too close to each other. try to find balance in your lvls. also try to make good eyecandy like flowers, and mountains and all the stuff you can imagine.
looking at the explanation of the lvl (a land where nothing can go wrong) i personally would have chosen for the psychic tileset, but thats just my opinion so leave that outta this.
to all ppl out there practice making (single plyr) lvls first before you post em on j2o or any other site. dont be content too fast and always look in a critic way to your work (or let others do that). you will always find things that dont fix or things that should be added. help from others is good too. and look at the standard jazz lvls too for examples. and then finally, your work is done and can be put on j2o. but let people test it first, so u can make any last fixes!

I’m in agreement with Aiko here, there was lots of bad eye candy, bad tileplacement and such. The Diamondus set is pretty easy to use, too. Download of this is not reccomended. Despite this, though, the level has nice use of ideas and a trigger crate. chris11, you have potential. Keep working and you’ll eventually get a very good rating. :-)

I should also note that you should ALWAYS include a next level setting.

Well, i dont think “jazzaberry land” is “a place where nothing goes wrong”. Actually a lot of things went wrong, like major tile misplacement(!) etc., the kinda boring Diamondus layout and the authors attempts to put some eyecandy (back layer!).
But hey, if it’s your first level, i’m sure you will able to improve your level skills step by step. Could need time but its worth it. Unfortunately i can’ t give a download recommendation for this level. Don’t worry, chris11! (Very High three points because its SP and there are some good ideas and even trigger crates)

P.S.: Background music is not included and the next level setting is missing.

well chris…you ovbiously have good ideas, I like them, but you definitely have to work on your eyecandy. Work on the eyecandy a bit and you will be an excellent levelbuilder.