shadow i wish you put this as N/A if this is just a small level to show what you can do. =/
there already is ShadowGpW :P
Follow the arrows like you’re supposed to, text says Entrance—> _
Firstly, since I’m in a christmasy mood, I will be nicer than I normally am. Secondly, this is something you wouldn’t rate so ill just comment on this.
When I first tried I fell into a dead end after I couldn’t find the entrance warp. Then after when I tried again I found the warp. Anyway, discos are really common anyway and get bored of downloading these. You should put these in a hotel because then it isn’t such a waste of memory.
Uhh… yeah. I fall down and I’m stuck in a dead-end. Make a better level, sorry.
No ratings? I’d like a rating, that kinda sux.
I’m just not going to rate this. Many of the tiles are missing, the level is small and the sucker tube does not work.
EXTRA NOTE: 8 hours is not a long time. I have spent more than 12 days doing mine.
hmmm… it needs some work, but isnt bad for being your first level :)
8 hours isn’t really a lot to spend on a level. Most good levels are done in the course of a week or so. Some levels in more advanced 3D games take up to a year to make by one person!
Just remember, the amount of time you spend actually working on your level, tinkering with it and changing layouts to make it fit better, will increase the level quality and playability by a lot. If you can’t think of anything else to add, host a beta test server and ask for ideas. Unless you get a server full of idiots that say “rotfl add ten million tube events lolzord” or something like that, you’re bound to be able to get new ideas. That brings up one more point; be able to take criticism. Most people won’t flame you, but if they say stuff like “the way you did the eyecandy was pretty awful,” don’t feel bad about it. Everyone can improve, and you’re just starting out anyway.
sorry, Shadowrabbit but i think wadle is right this SUX
(and i dont say i have a good day today…)
~Jarno
Edit : Ok very sorry i didnt know this was your first level iam sorry so SORRY!
It is that I’m nice today, but a level like this, OMG!!
This is a hotel?? It doesn’t have a right start pos, it’s no nice eyecandy (ahum) and the gameplay sux.
Happy reviewing and playing? I don’t think so…
[This review was writen by Wadledee aka Carrotpie]
EDIT: Sorry Shaddow Rabbit, I didn’t knew that, but still its not a real/([good]) lvl
[This review was edited by Wadledee aka Carrotpie]
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