Sorry to say but i can’t give a higher rating. You’ll have to learn how to use the tileset first, because like this the level is quite ugly. Also using one of the harder tilesets isn’t a good idea if haven’t really made levels before. Also i kept getting hit by something invisible.
“Kids don’t try this at home” is all i can recommend.
Well, this level is really easy because of the fact that it’s nearly completely flat. It’s extremely linear and you can complete this level by just running and jumping.
Also there’s some really painful and obvious bad tile placements. Like the dark background under the floor that is suddenly cut off. Very ugly.
Eye candy? Surprisingly, it contains a healthy amount of it. The parallax background is good and the windy leaves in the foreground are great too. But in the sprite layer there’s not much of it, sadly.
There’s a lot of enemies but they don’t pose a real threat because you can just jump over them with no problem. Also, the bees at the beginning were going crazy and kept jumping back and forth for some reason. Also, these enemies are randomly chosen. Most of them don’t fit to the tileset used. What is a cat and the caterpillar doing in here?
Also there’s not much powerups. One blaster powerup and a few carrots, sometimes even a gem.
Overall, it’s a beginner’s level that looks like someone just read a tutorial. Boring and easy, but manageable.
Looks like you need to brush up on your JCS Skills. Try an easy tutorial. That will help!
Even I can’t recommend to download lets see what we
have here.
Game-play
One of the worse things in this level is the gameplay.
I don’t know why there are much enemies placed here,
the gameplay is only 1 minute because it is so small.
Eyecandy and Other things.
More worse randomly placed tiles there was only some type
of layer usage like the foreground eyecandy plant many
bugs in the ground, tiles don’t fit together.there was too
little to no eyecandy.Somehow the level is pretty small
to be even SP just run jump etc. then the level finishes and
boom the game crashes I’m probably mistaken by seeing the screenshot layer 8 was ok some tiles just don’t fit and were random.
**DR?:**No well probably I guess this is one of the better levels you made but I guess try to improve it from the following websites:
http://www.jazz2online.com/jcsref/
www.ninjadodo.net/htjcs/
These are the websites where I have learnt making all of my levels.
Keep practicing and try to make a BIG SP level that surprises everybody :).
EDIT:Zerg I said that it is pretty small
to be even SP so he must make a tad bit
bigger level so if he can get a 5 then he might make a BIG SP level too.
This is Similar to the Example level used in my tutorial. But very advanced.
This levelpack is awesome. Have you ever seen flying mushrooms? No? Continue reading.
Level design remind me Contra and Super Mario Bros, but the diffirence is tha sometimes you change direction! But don’t worry – it’s still flat. You don’t even have to jump (mostly)!
Enemy placement… is confusing. Visible are easy to locate, but these invisible ones… you never know, when you gonna bump into some Bees (that do not exist)
You may think, I’ve reviewed one level. Sure, but all are the same. Nothing what can be worth downloading.
EDIT: Check it without downloading – I’ve uploaded most funny screens.
I’m just starting to create my first level so I am not critical
[Rating (1.2) clearance. Please don\‘t rate your own levels – cooba]
WOOOW!!
Well that was an experience..
The name isn’t quite good because those levels didn’t look like a labyrinth at all(laberinto means labyrinth for those who don’t know).
First the levels had no story at all.
The eyecandy was horrible. There were lots of bugs even in the background. The tileset wasn’t properly used. It was very linear, every level looked like another one except diferent tileset, or rain , or some edits. In one level i’ve accidentally discovered a Xmas Bilsy(ADDON Dog) and that was a surprise.(Tip: Don’t use that without boss activation)
The gameplay….. I don’t know… The spikes don’t hurt, there are butterfly/beeboys on the ground you forgot to mask the hats, no triggers, a warp required a jjcoins cheat the text strings are in spanish ,The boss arena was very short:You just come and then the boss activates etc
Enemy placement was bad : Mostly Catterpilars with a mix of other things included a Xmas Bilsy.
Goodies: Not to much of that either
Score:Bad
Dl Rec? no. Sorry!I hate doing it.
You should try to fix these levels. They are more than a mix of tilesets. You have to put some of your soul in it and after you upload them you just have to wait.
Just don’t download this. 4 extremely linear levels and one boring Boss battle.
All you do is run right, drop down, run left and get to the exit.
In the 3rd level you had a Coin warp but there are no Coins. In the textstring you say to cheat to enter the warp. I know it’s not English but I can clearly see the cheat code.
1/10 -> Bad
why do people insist of upload pictures that have nothing to do with the download?
Also what’s with all the download that are beginning with lab?
Anyhow.
Story
No story is given so I won’t rate that.
Eyecandey
Oh come on. what’s with the slew of bad uploads? Eyecandey in all the levels are horrible. Pretty much ALL the levels have background tilebugs. Sure the background is textured but that’s not going to save you. Not much in layer 3 except in toe rain levels. Even the rain looks bad as it is poorly animated. Layer 4 is full of tilebugs in all the levels with platforms floating in thin air, bad animations, repetitive eyecandey, tons of tilebugs and overall laziness.
1/10
Gameplay
This can be put down as simply running left or right, jumping and shooting. No puzzles are present. the spikes in one of the levels don’t hurt you because the they don’t have any hurt events on them. The boss arena is boring and you can jump the activate boss events and shoot him to death without activating him. the text isn’t in English so I couldn’t read them but like Spaz said, one of the warps requires you to use the jjcoins cheat. (Now THAT’s lazy) I really don’t know what else to say.
1/10
Enemie placement
There isn’t a lot of them around and a lot of them don’t fit. there are a lot of caterpillars and a huge mixture of enemies, including ones that don’t work. One level even had a Blisy boss put in the path so you hit with without knowing it. there isn’t enough to kill me and a lot of them don’t fit. (Or don’t work)
1/10
Pickup Placement
The only ting that had anything items was the bonus warp that you need to cheat to get to. Nothing else is present.
1/10
Final Score: 4/40
Score: 1
Rank: F
DR? No. spend more time on your levels. It takes a lot of time to make good ones. Keep trying!
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