Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

ALi Mega=Bjarni, Bjarni. Not your son.
Stop rating your self and I bet that when I visit JCF there’s going to be a topic of you BEGGING for forgivness but I’m not forgiving you this time I don’t think.
P.S: if Ali Mega is your son (hehehe) then he’s an un-fair rater, if my mom made a level that was bad i wouldn’t give it 10 or 9 or 5 but the 2.5 i t deserved.

Bjarni cool i think we all know ali maga is you and also i think we all know umbreonX is you aswell, the point is please don’t rate your own levels, wether its 10 or 1 don’t rate them.

I think this is one of Bjarni Cool’s best levels. You are getting better! :)

I really liked the idea of the level, having the enemies as Pokémon. The use of the tileset was good (I couldn’t find any mistakes). It is still pretty boring though: Very linear, except for the drop at the end. The background was just plain blue sky, and there was no music. No weapons or food, and the boss ran away at the end before I got a chance to beat him (I don’t know why this happened; I’m not very good at the use of bosses. But you should fix that.)

One more thing: change the invisible blocks into stop enemy events. I know you have trouble with those events, but just try and figure it out, because the invisible blocks were very annoying.

And Bjarni, don’t rate your own levels or you will get banned from here (I think).

Dont Rate your own lvl…
and ive seen better SP lvls actually :P

THIS LEVEL STINKS!!! I don’t hate Pokemon, but when I reached the Boss, He was gone!!! (CHEETOES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

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Oke…good level for a starter.
Practice more bjarni, and you going to be a Tip-Top level maker.
Just practice, practice and practice.

We don’t all hate Pokemon, Electric. Please speak for yourself. Spotty, stop saying Death to Pokemon and then say u have never seen it (u gotta PLAY it). It is time people should stop judging stuff by the people who play it. Im not going nutz about the fact that there are 10 years old playing Jazz..

One word from me Death to Pokemon
I hate pokemon they are evil and tryed
to take over the grade 4 world (or at least used to)
but it seems the time for pokemon is dieng out hahaahah. Now some other silly anime will take its palce JALSDQ!
Oh well its a interesting idea of a lev (not that I ever watched pokemon)
So I didn’t really get any of the text or the boss
or what the heck that weird red thing was doing.
If it made more sense I would go up :).

Oh, he is SO not impatient. He’s right. Here’s friendly tip (and really, a tip, not a hipocritical comment):DON’T USE POKEMON SETS!!!! (: -P

NOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Please Bjarni, ask someone for level improving making levels lessons.
a) Better level than any I’ve seen before
b) The same 16 or less or more enemies into one tiny place……
c) NOT INVISIBLE BLOCKS AS WELLLLLLL
d)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WASTING PRECIOUS J2O SPAAAAAAACCCCCEEE

Please note to RedXILL,
post GOOD and USEFULL reviews, not just “bad level. 1.0 for you”. Like EvilMike said before, explain the mistakes…

It isn’t good at all…but at least your levels are improving..

Maybe it’s a idea to take some beta-testers. People who will test your levels and gif your Tips etc.

You still need to work more on it..The eycandy should be much better, your weapon placement and all of that kind.

a 3 from me…Go on like this and you will be once a good level creator :-)

yea….owkay….
Dude, I like lvls with a story! ^_
too bad you didn’t spend alot time on this. And btw, whats the big deal with eva missing spaz, Is she a ‘player’ or somethin’? :D

owyea, the level.
Well, its like…flat
very crowded, but the eyecandy is ok.

This is supposed to be a level? This reminds me of my first level which I made using 190,00 enemies :) This just sucks Sorry Bjarni

Hmmm, a demo of how i can make a level? It’s more like an example of how a level, at least one that is posted here and wasting webspace, should not look like: in both of the two levels (one uses Castle, the other Jungle), tile placement is not really what i would call fantastic. Apart from that, there are a few events (warps and a boss f.e.) and obstacles (somehow, i got into a dead-end, in level one). It takes about 30 seconds to make it thru’ both levels so it doesn’t seem to be very hard…like erm…a hard single player level.
Sorry, i don’t see the point in this. At least 1.5 points for your attempts, Bjarni. Greetings to Iceland.

P.S.:
Nice try, Ali-Maga alias Bjarni. That’s a tad too obvious. Fquist will delete that review, it is not very appropiate, if you look at the levels.

OK, I won’t rate this, just review it. Bjarni, what are you up to this time?

The way I see it, this is more of a story than just a pack of levels. Even though the levels could be a lot better, it’s good to see that Bjarni’s improving a bit (not much). The levels are too liniar (too straight, in one direction), too short, they have too much ammo and too many same enemies. Same places are reachable only for Spaz! Still, i like some ideas (I even liked the pattern the ghost rapiers make when they attack you, how about that? I know, I’m weird).

Bjarni, it’s good that you keep trying to make good levels, but how about sending them to me first, huh? I don’t think others like you for filling this place up with your levels.

- JelZe GoldRabbit

Well, at least your “feeling” for level detail is getting better. Not that’s it good yet, tough…

The levels are all kinda the same. Very linear, very boring, very small, very full of enemy’s, and all the same tiles where used for the levels. I son’t think I’ve got much more to add… a 4,0 for the effort.

I think you’re slowly getting better, bjarni, but these levels still (sorry) suck. Maybe if you take much time for every level, add much more eyecandy, add much more variety, add less enemy’s, and stuff. I usually take 2 months to make my levels (Always MP, tough), and I try to make the levels very “comfortable” for the user, what means that they can easily play the level and have fun. So make a level with much eyecandy, much variety, and explain me what “grunts” means :). And: if you really can’t make SP levels, whatever you try, try some other mode, like Race or Treasure (or MP, ofcourse)

Bjarni, do not rate yourself. Don’t deny it because Bjarn… Ali-Mega is also an autist, uses the phrase ‘powerful level’. We can be nice but you can at leaste not cheat, seriously.

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! You are good son. I love can help you. Son!

it has good ideas, but the levels are way to small…..and way to easy……you need to take more time on making the levels, so that they’re bigger and more challenging.

Well, I’m not going to rate this. But I can say that you REALLY need to work more on your levels. Basically every aspect except story.