Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

Jazz-Les
Did you noticed your review was not only bad, but also rude. This is not a very good way of acting. Think more of what to say, watch other ( better ) revieuws for inspiration and don’t use such rude language. Reviews are for helping people.
I also allmost feel ashame for my country!

Please include the title set.

Before downloading, I expected a lot from this one. And it was there.

EYECANDY

Good eyecandy, everywere where you walk you can find some foreground to hide behind.(which isn’t possible online because of your name) Also a good background. No bugs in the eyecandy.

GAMEPLAY

It is a big level and because a lot is symitric I couldn’t really see where I was except if I was at the bottom of the level. But the level had a very nice flow which was completed with tubes.

PLACEMENT

You’ve put quite a lot ammo in this level but thats good, it was also a big level.I liked the way in which you had to get the seeker PU.

SIZE
The size a big but you’ve handled with it well and made a very good level.

Eyecandy: 9
Gameplay: 8
Placement:8
Size: 8
FINAL GRADE: 8.2

( but the gameplay is bad so the Ammo is bad placed.)
Thats not true.
The Ammo can be well placed why the gameplay sux.
And I included the title sets because they are just a must have.

Eyecandy

You didn’t made large eyecandy mistakes, but there wasn’t a lot of eyecandy in this level.

Gameplay

Horrible, its just a empty scape surrounded by three, don’t make that much large spaces in your level.

Placement

A bit too much weapons for such a small level.

Size

The size is really too small, do you think people will actually play in this level?

EYECANDY: 3
GAMEPLAY: 1
PLACEMENT:3
SIZE :2
*FINAL GRADE:*2.2

Tip: make your levels more exiting, make something people can do.

Can’t you just make it in 1.23?
All people got 1.20 at TSF, right?

N00b: I allready know he makes TSF levels im just complaining about it so he might read this this time.

I think you don’t have to put a readme with just a single level in this upload.

Eyecandy

This is the same as your previous level.
I don’t know who said to you that you can’t make single player levels, but the reviewers didn’t.
You will do this in single and in multiplayer. Play your levels yourself, look at your background. We don’t have cracks in the sky on earth, do we.
Look more carefully at which titles you use. Also the ground were you’re standing on doesn’t has edges, its just the middle of a platform at a edge.

Gameplay

The Gameplay is better than in your first level, but still needs a lot of attention. There are only 2 little rooms in the level where you can fight and in one there is none bottom and you warp back to the other.

Placement

Only bouncher and toaster crates.
You could have put some more single bullets in there and also a power up.

Size

The size is still too small, look at other people’s levels and see how they made them.

EYECANDY: 1.5
GAMEPLAY: 3.0
PLACEMENT:1.5
SIZE: 2.5

FINAL GRADE: 2.5

TIP: Don’t put all your levels here, look or they are good enough.
Also, im Dutch, so if you don’t get anything from this review just PM me.

Did you know that if you click on guestbook on your site you get the weather page?

Eyecandy

Take a look at other levels,
They all don’t have a ******* background like this, right. put 8 at height and 8 at lenght and make it textured.
You put a three for the background in the layer 4 which causes a lot of lag.
Also the ground were you are walking on isn’t good connected to the next ground and that walls have the middle titles at their edges.

Gameplay

This level is way too easy, there are arround 4 flying lizards and 10 dragonsfly’s mostly in groops also you are too quick done with this level.
At the end you get a bonus level with diamonds, but if it contained something worthfull you couldn’t use it anymore because there the level is finished.
Also wen you reach the end area jj2 closes. This is because you didn’t typed the next level. If there is none, typ endepis.

Placement

Enemies are placed in groups.
This level is just too small to tell anything about the ammo placement.

Size

The size is too small and also most of the ‘gaps’ where you are walking though are too small.

EYECANDY: 1.5
GAMEPLAY: 2.5
PLACEMENT:3.0
SIZE: 1.5
BONUS: 0.1 (story?)
FINAL GRADE: 2.2

Thank you both for your review.
R3ptile: if you mean that spaz based stuff with getting stuck to get the RF PU, jazz could also get it with a gun9.
review deleted?

[Just FYI, R3ptile deleted most of his own reviews. That’s where his review has gone – FQuist]

And the other review?

well it looks like you 2 reviewed 2 different levels.
Mad about i gave your level a 6.5?

What are you talking about there are a lot of other (better) anticrash programs

U have the honor being reviewed by my 50th review.

Eyecandy:
Very good it also has a kind of snow and that door passage is very nice made.

Gameplay
This isn’t good.
At first you have to play this in CTF which means with 2 or more players.
Second you can get stuck wen you fall after the 4th or 5th cage.
Third it is a way too small level.
Fourth it is way too easy, it is just walking through braking some cages.
And finnaly wen you’re done your base gets one point and you’re stuck on your base and the level doesn’t end and also you can’t do it over to get another point which will be very boring while playing with multiple players.

Placement:
Normal, maybe a bit too few weapons placed.

Size:
2 words: TOO SMALL

Eyecandy: 8.5
Gameplay: 3
Placement:6
Size: 2.5

FINAL GRADE: 5

PS: I know you can do better try to make your levels longer and make them more challenging

Redjazz, I shouldn’t complain if I was you because you only made worse levels disfar.

Eyecandy
The eyecandy in this level is average in most of the level but there are a few cons. In the titles which are ground there are a lot of titles how dont belong there and make it ugly. Also wen i wanted to get the second 1up ( I think ) i had to get through a wall but the wall was at my background, use a foreground layer for that.

Gameplay
Very nice gameplay, some original things.
This is a really good job, guys.

Placement
The ammo placement is good, but if were talking about enemy placement, they return very fast after you killed them.
For instance if you fall the enemies you just killed are on your path again.

Size
The size might be a bit too big, but it doesn’t cares a lot.

Eyecandy: 5.5
Gameplay: 7.5
Placement:6.5
Size: 6
Bonus: +0.1 (story)
FINAL GRADE: 6.5 (6.6)

reaction on reaction
Good doesn’t mean its perfect or very good. About that lizard shooting, ok i’ll take that back but the grade wont change by that.(look up)Also if you shoot them off their copters they fall automaticly too fast so you cant kill them.
And by the way my pack needs reviews :P

A Tip: put it together with the normal version in a pack*!!!!*

I couldn’t load Forest war night so i’ll review the day version.
This is a very good remake of B1, lets review.

Eyecandy
The eyecandy is allmost perfect there are only a few tiny things you could make better like at the left bottom of the level the ground you’re walking on stops when there’s a wall. And just below that you place 2 titles that you should’ve put there.

Gameplay
Quite good its B1 with some better gameplay, but with one less point which i’ll explain in Size.

Placement
Allmost like in battle one (and thats good) only you placed some more things and changed the bubble shield for a bounch powerup.

Size
The size of the level is good, but there is not enough space between a lot of titles which make it more difficult to pass.

Eyecandy: 8.5
Gameplay: 7
Placement: 8
Size: 7
FINAL GRADE: 7.7

UPDATE 05-04-2006
You changed some things in your level I’ll give bonus points for that.
You listened to the reviewers by placing the good titles and making more space in the level and also you added the ForestWar Night title set.
EYECANDY: +0.1
GAMEPLAY: +0.1
PLACEMENT:+0
SIZE: +0.3
*TOTAL BONUS*+0.5

Thats an 8.2, Good job.

(This test is now ready)??Finished!

Eyecandy
There are no foreground titles in your level, make them you can do a lot of things with them.
You have a background without bugs, but you allmost didn’t used layer 5, 6 and 7.There is no music!

Gameplay
These tests are too hard.
Have you tested it yourself.
Start with some easier levels and make them harder along the way and dont start with very hard levels and make them more harder.

Size
The size of this level is ok however the warp blocks are with too many in one place why these levels are so hard.

Eyecandy: 3
Gameplay: 5
Size: 4.5
FINAL GRADE: 4.2

This seems to be a the best download after Jazz Sprite Dynamite, lets review.

Lava Domain

EYECANDY
The eyecandy is very good and i really like the background, its just perfect.
GAMEPLAY
Could be a bit better with a bit more things to do but is still very good.
PLACEMENT
Ammo placement is spent some time on, I think and is placed with not too many in one place.

EYECANDY: 9.5
GAMEPLAY: 8.5
PLACEMENT:9.0
FINAL GRADE: 9

The Gallery

EYECANDY
The eyecandy is the less part of this level with blue and white blocks in the background who in some places don’t make the level more beauty. (while they could)

GAMEPLAY
The gameplay is good however you can bump easily to some things.

PLACEMENT
There are too many mellons in this level and there are a bit too much weapons for this size.

EYECANDY: 6.5
GAMEPLAY: 8.0
PLACEMENT:7.0
FINAL GRADE: 7.2

BONUS: nice music (+0.1)
FINAL GRADE PACK: 8.2

An 8???
Well even if you should like the level you shouldn’t give a such high grade.

Eyecandy
At the start of the level you get a text message witch is half shut behind your life harts. If you use @ you can start a new line, you know.
And those pipes who are appearing and disappearing aren’t attached to eachother who make it more ugly.
And when you’re beween the pipes and go down you can see your rabbit’s arms legs and ears through the wall.

Gameplay
The size of the level is good for 2, 3 or maybe 4 players but more wont fit in it. Also you should make a secret warp to the place where you can raise and lower the water or make a place below where you can swim, because that water isn’t that nice if it goes up and down the whole time.

Placement
At the left side and bottom of the level is a lot of ammo but thats allmost the onliest place.

Eyecandy: 3
Gameplay: 6
Placement: 5
Final Grade: 4.7 (4.66 2/3 rounded off)

Sharzowski can’t you add a bit to your review otherwise it could be removed, and fear of dark, that powersupply stuff is because of the tv’s at the starting points
and the showers in the middle. Watch them closely.

This is your 12th thing in 3 days.
And i can’t even open it.